The Day Itachi Senpai Showed me the Light - Rate my Poem!

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ShinobiX

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Hi,

This is a poem I made about Itachi Senpai, please read it and rate it!

The title is: The Day Itachi Senpai Showed me the Light!

Before the day Itachi Senpai showed me the light,
My vision and views were as dark as the night,

My reality was shrouded in confusion and I needed my questions answered,
What is my purpose, why am I here, when I am gone would I be remembered?

Then came the day that Itachi Senpai showed me the light,
I could comprehend and see everything before my sight,

Enlightened by his philosophy I started my new journey for experience,
Never were my willpower and perception oh so sharp and oh so fierce,

My reality was no longer false and trapped because of my false perception,
I was freed and realized that Itachi Senpei is the way, humanities perfection,

Untill the day comes that death opens the door for another adventure,
Itachi Senpai’s philosophy is what I follow, spread and nurture!




Church of Itachi poem, credit goes to ShinobiX. ( )
 
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Vroqrak

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looks cool..but we are sick with your Itachi senpai threads
 

Hunsdale

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where are the mods can summon plz remove this kakashi face mask havin wannabe
 

Owarij

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i lmao'd @ church of itachi xD
 

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macho obsessed with sasuke.And you,itachi?Are you two siblings or what ?
 

Noble Armada

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The meter is weird. The number of iambs (stressed syllables) varies from line to line, which makes for difficult reading.

And are you serious?
 

zombiejesus

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i never seen anyone like a fictional character like you and macho ...its messed up you need help pray to itachi for help with your mental illness
 

Sabuto Hayashi

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macho obsessed with sasuke.And you,itachi?Are you two siblings or what ?

That just made my day. _O-

Maybe macho will run away with a serpent dude and try to kill shinobix? xd
 
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It's not good anyway U_U
 
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