The Cursed Twins: Chapter 1. Kayame and Kaname Kuriyami

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"Get out of here you two filthy things!"
"Dont come near me or I'll kill you!"
"Stay away!"
"Get lost! No one wants you!"
"No one cares or loves you!"

Those words..
Thats all we could ever hear,thats all we remember,thats all we were told...
from the time we were born to now my brother and I had to raise ourselves..
Our parents died. Our mother died of giving birth to us,our father died in war before we were even born. My brother and i never knew the joys of a father and mother. We never knew the warmth of a loving mother hug or a praise from a proud father. We never knew what it was like to feel the love of a happy family.But i guess it didnt matter to us.As long as i had my brother and my brother had me we were fine without a mother and father. We were fine with only having eachother. The reason for that was because we were twins.
We were the closest twins that anyone could imagine.
We were demon wolf twins..
Our name is Kayame and Kaname Kuriyami.
We are the only ones left of our clan and Village.
Our village was killed and we are the only one's left alive.
Everyone else died slow and painful deaths.
I guess you could say we were happy.
They got what they deserve for treating my brother and i like a piece of trash and like dirt.
They hated us for just being alive.
They hated us for walking on othe same ground they walked on.
They wanted us dead and gone.
They wanted nothing to do with us.
We didnt really care what they thought about us.
My brother and i could care less really.
But it came to the point were we had to take action..
It came to the point were....
We killed our Village.
My brother and I never thought of killing anyone,
We wanted to have peace and just be with eachother.
But the villagers didnt accept that we were alive.
They would beat my brother and me till we bleed from head to toe.
My Brother and i got annoyed by it and decided that enough was enough.
So we planned to teach then a painful leason.
We decided to kill each and everyone of them,
Slowly and painfuly.
We wanted them to suffer like they did to us.
We wanted them dead!


Years passed since we killed our village.
Kaname and I decided to stay by eachother side.
We decided to protect eachother.
For we could never die.
We were not human.
We were demons that everyone hated.
We were beast's in human form to people.
We didnt care.
So long as we had eachother, we didnt care if noone cared for us.
"Kayame...Kayame.." Kaname said
"H..Huh??" I said waking up
"You finally woke up huh?? About time you did" He replied with a smile.
"K..Kaname?? What are you Doing up so early?"I asked getting up and rubbing my eyes.
"We have to hunt remember? You said that we had to wake up early so we could get some food" he replied once again.
"Oh. Okay i remember now." I said giving my brother a morning hug.
Kaname just smiled and hugged me back.
He put his hand on my cheek and looked into my eyes,
I looked back into his.
We could read eachothers minds since we were so close.
We knew everything about eachother.
"Kayame.."Kaname said breaking the scilence.
"Hmm? What is is Kaname?" I asked
"I love you sis" He said smiling at me still looking at me in the eyes.
"I love you too brother" I replied kising his cheek.
We loved eachother so much that we would say these things maybe lovers or even normal siblings couldnt say to eachother.
We always are together and do everything together.
we had eachother.
Noone was going to take us away from eachother...
No one could..
 
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pretty good but you should put it in script form

examples: sharingdork or yarduatssss
they both write great ffs and there not long to read and there in script form so they should make pretty good examples


yarduat ff




sharingdork ff

 

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Pretty good! Your English is good even if some phrases went stiff there and there!

You should have made a Prologue chapter first and then begin cause' this was more like prologue but never mind :D
I like the idea of rejected sibling demons xd Hope to see more
 

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good job it was very good and fun to read :)

if you ever make a bio or 2nd bio put this as your history and im sure caliburn would approve it ;)
 

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Kaya you did very well for your FF. Just take in the ideas the guys have and you'd def have pure awesomeness xd

Still pretty awesome...love the idea ^^

Forgot to say: Let me know when chapter 2 comes out :p
 
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