Ero sennin
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Madara seething in his fury at his gaze at naruto. he spoke in a morbid tone. "if you will not give us your power you will be punished" madara imediently teleport in front of naruto delivering a crushing blow to narutos stomach cause him to spit up blood sending him across a short distance. he contined to berate naruto. "foolish shinobi only now will you understand." naruto picking him self up and in a flash got delt more crushing blows by madara. "your kyubbi skill are no match for the power of a uchiha. i'll show u the distance between you and me." mericily beating naruto to nearly a inch of his life. naruto also observed negato crawling back to madara liek dying animal coming back to its master getting himself to his feet standing solice like.
madara then spoke "now naruto i will break whats left of your spirit" he smiled evily and activated tsukuyomi subjecting naruto to visons of his masters deaths his towns destruction. naruto screaming as he watchied the deaths of thoses he has bonds with madara was relentles he was going to make naruto suffer even more. pein standing there conflicted by a unknown emotion to him. something inside him snaping. he stood there focusing all the energy he had left to defeat madara who had been manipulating him lke a puppet for so many years. he unleashed shinra tensi towards madara catching him off gaurd with such a force not even he couldn't be harmed with it the force of it was so powerful it knocked a quarter of the tower away sending madara plummeting to his death in the rain village naruto barely witnessing this was in a shock seeing this. negato spitting up blood slumped to the floor.
naruto gaining his strength draged negato out of the walkway into the maze labyrinth of pipes and machines. negato then spoke. "why are you dragging me out of here i killed your master destoyed your village i deserve to die like him" indicating madara. naruto catching his breath spoke. "you were my masters student i understand" negato said "all what i have done i am not sorry for.... i wanted peace like my firends did. that one bad day robbed me of one of them. i understood then humans were stupid knowing the conceqences of war they do it anyway. i became a abomination to cause the same suffering i had endured. but i was wrong it wouldn' t be true peace. jiraiya was right it was a wretched sight of what i become."
negato continued "you however have endured the same pain but you never let it destroy you. i can see why jiraiya trained you you are neither like the past or present shinobi your the shinobi of the future. this time needs a shinobi like you. not like me. suddenly they were interupted konan apeared in a flutter imedently consered about negato. "what happened?" she asked worried at negatos condition. "madara force naruto to fight he wouldn't kill me madara begined to punish him i stoped madara. no way not even he could survive that fall" "we should get out of here the konoha shinobis won against the rain village shinobi and are heading here for naruto." negato said "let him go i will atone for my mistakes here i'll end it all." guide him out of here konan will destroy this tower." what about me?" she asked looking woried. negato smile for once "live on ward hate will destroy a fragile person such as yourself. she spoke even more shaken "but.." go now this is my sacrifice alone i don't intend to take you with me." she smiled "you allways did protect me." "go now" his whisper was absolute. wiping away a small tear she began to lead naruto out of the tower. negato focused his power to bring to tower down on top of himself. he focused his bansho ten'nin to end his abomable existence he breifly though of his firend the bonds he had and of his master.
the tower began to colapse on top of its self leaving cloud of dust really high like fog. naruto and konan got out in time on to a near by rooftop . konan spoke in a requlem tone. ""he was the kindest out the three of us. i never thought he would even get out of that darkness that consumed us." she continued. " you seem to change people with your words and actions . maybe negato was right about you being the future." naruto spoke " I will change the shinobi world i will become hokage. i will rescue my firend from darkness" konan smiled. "such a one track mind" hiding her own pain at negatos loss but being relived that this boy changed him. she then said " i will keep in touch with the akatsuki movments the others will still be after you." " am not bothered i will defeat the all" she nodded. naruto decided to look for the other leaping from the roof top to find his friends and bonds then to konoha to rebuild the fire village for future generations.
the end
madara then spoke "now naruto i will break whats left of your spirit" he smiled evily and activated tsukuyomi subjecting naruto to visons of his masters deaths his towns destruction. naruto screaming as he watchied the deaths of thoses he has bonds with madara was relentles he was going to make naruto suffer even more. pein standing there conflicted by a unknown emotion to him. something inside him snaping. he stood there focusing all the energy he had left to defeat madara who had been manipulating him lke a puppet for so many years. he unleashed shinra tensi towards madara catching him off gaurd with such a force not even he couldn't be harmed with it the force of it was so powerful it knocked a quarter of the tower away sending madara plummeting to his death in the rain village naruto barely witnessing this was in a shock seeing this. negato spitting up blood slumped to the floor.
naruto gaining his strength draged negato out of the walkway into the maze labyrinth of pipes and machines. negato then spoke. "why are you dragging me out of here i killed your master destoyed your village i deserve to die like him" indicating madara. naruto catching his breath spoke. "you were my masters student i understand" negato said "all what i have done i am not sorry for.... i wanted peace like my firends did. that one bad day robbed me of one of them. i understood then humans were stupid knowing the conceqences of war they do it anyway. i became a abomination to cause the same suffering i had endured. but i was wrong it wouldn' t be true peace. jiraiya was right it was a wretched sight of what i become."
negato continued "you however have endured the same pain but you never let it destroy you. i can see why jiraiya trained you you are neither like the past or present shinobi your the shinobi of the future. this time needs a shinobi like you. not like me. suddenly they were interupted konan apeared in a flutter imedently consered about negato. "what happened?" she asked worried at negatos condition. "madara force naruto to fight he wouldn't kill me madara begined to punish him i stoped madara. no way not even he could survive that fall" "we should get out of here the konoha shinobis won against the rain village shinobi and are heading here for naruto." negato said "let him go i will atone for my mistakes here i'll end it all." guide him out of here konan will destroy this tower." what about me?" she asked looking woried. negato smile for once "live on ward hate will destroy a fragile person such as yourself. she spoke even more shaken "but.." go now this is my sacrifice alone i don't intend to take you with me." she smiled "you allways did protect me." "go now" his whisper was absolute. wiping away a small tear she began to lead naruto out of the tower. negato focused his power to bring to tower down on top of himself. he focused his bansho ten'nin to end his abomable existence he breifly though of his firend the bonds he had and of his master.
the tower began to colapse on top of its self leaving cloud of dust really high like fog. naruto and konan got out in time on to a near by rooftop . konan spoke in a requlem tone. ""he was the kindest out the three of us. i never thought he would even get out of that darkness that consumed us." she continued. " you seem to change people with your words and actions . maybe negato was right about you being the future." naruto spoke " I will change the shinobi world i will become hokage. i will rescue my firend from darkness" konan smiled. "such a one track mind" hiding her own pain at negatos loss but being relived that this boy changed him. she then said " i will keep in touch with the akatsuki movments the others will still be after you." " am not bothered i will defeat the all" she nodded. naruto decided to look for the other leaping from the roof top to find his friends and bonds then to konoha to rebuild the fire village for future generations.
the end
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