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Chapter 1
It was about 11:15 PM EST in Bradenton, Florida. It was dark and stormy, thunder rumbling, lightning crackling. A typical Florida summer night. A man with short dreadlocks watched a small compound which wasn't heavily guarded, from a post about 30 yards away. It was seemingly empty. The man who guarded the front gate had hazy like eyes no pupil they looked white as if he was blind. The one who was watching dropped down from his position. He was greeted by the man who was guarding the compound.
"Evening Alton," the guard said, "You want to come in?" Alton nodded and the man proceeded to opening the gate. "I thought you went along with the others." He said as Alton pressed on without looking or speaking to him. "Long night I guess," the man whispered to himself. He was about to close the gate back but before he could press the button a strong arm went around his neck, choking him, gasping for breath and afraid the man desperately tried to utter a word or sound for help. However before he could call for help a large hand was put over his mouth muffling him.
His sight got blurry as he began to pass out and the last thing he heard was a deep voice say, "Good Bye." Before his neck was snapped. He dropped to the ground and lied motionless dead. His assailant took him out without alerting anyone, no sound came from the struggle. The man began to take out the men, woman, and unfortunately the children who had pure white eyes with his katana. This became a genocide. "One down, one more to go." The assailant then left the compound. Little to his knowledge there was one more pure white eyed man left, an older man. He had heard and saw everything that just happened. The elder, tried to make distress call to the other family to warn them.
"Hello, this is James Conley be on your guard! Alton just came here an preformed a silent but mass genocide on those who stayed home. He said and I quote "One down, one more to go. Hello? Is anyone there? Hello!?" James yelled.
"Oh grandfather you were always so predictable." Alton stood in the doorway, with his katana out.
"So you cut the phone lines as well. Why are you doing this Alton? This isn't like you!" He shouted.
"No you're wrong this is totally me." Alton responded as he looked up into James eyes.
Fear instantly froze James, "H-How? How did do you it?" He asked.
Alton immediately smirked acknowledging his grandfathers remarks. "I am a Brown." He then preformed a series of hand signs ending with the tigers seal. The older man closed his eyes seemingly accepting his fate.
"Good bye old man," James opened his eyes. They were whiter but veins surrounded his eyelids. "Its too late for that! Fire style: Fireball Justu." A large flame was disrupted from Alton's mouth. His grandfather quickly planted his feet and spun around quickly creating an offensive shield like maniuvore.
"8 trigrams rotation" The old man shouted, as the shield got wider in diameter, and more immense in size. The shield engulfed the flames and trusted them back put at Alton. He was thrown out of the room, and went threw another before landing hard on his back.
"Heh, the old man actually has some fight in him. If he's going to give his all I guess I'm going to have to as well." Alton thought to himself as he did a quick kip up he was met by James who attacked two of his chakra nodes. Alton winced in pain.
"8 Trigrams two palm!" He then attacked four, then eight, and so on.
"Four palm, eight palm, sixteen palm, thirty two palm, 8 trigrams sixty four palm!" At that moment Alton feel to the ground in immense pain and agony.
"You crazy old man I I can't move, most more I can barely breath, what what did you do?" He's asked screaming.
James smirked and began to walk away, " I used this," the man reveled a middle sized green thumbtack, with a purple liquid dripping from it. " this is a highly concentrated dosage of reaper poison only made by the Conley clan. Your death will be painfully dreadful and it will come within ten minutes." As James began to walk away Alton began to laugh loudly.
"Whats so funny?" Seeing that there was no chance for the young man, he walked over to him to see what he was chuckling at.
Alton smirked and said, "This battle was already decided long go."
As soon as he reached Alton's body, James whole world turned upside down. Time completely stopped temporally, the rain pounding against the concrete, thunder rumbling in the air, and lightning cracking in the air, everything, frozen simultaneously. James felt sharp pain shoot all over his buddy, he then feel down to his after they gave out on him. The old men looked at his surrounding and he immediately knew what was happening to him. " Genjutsu!" He thought. "But when? the old man said aloud, while on the ground struggling to breath .
"When you first looked into my eyes. It was over then grandfather. Hmp, it's funny how the tables have turned. Your death will be painfully dreadful and it will come within ten minutes." Alton said that with a smirk on his face. Leaving James, on the ground to die. Now Alton went to the other family complex and continued his mass genocide there, killing everyone, including his best friend.
Authors Note 2.0
Well decided to reboot this as an actual story(not script) it was my one of most popular and well main FF. The zombie story had a short stint as being popular, after zombies it was my dragons story which is EASILY my most popular you all loved that! And I thank you all for the support on that but I'm turning it into a novel so I ask you all to respect that decision. Now my current FF is Digific and nothing happened to that trust me I'm just waiting for the right time to release that. The next few chapters are done, and semi edited I just want to do more with them and pick up the pace so it might be a while before those come FYI. However I'm in the writing mode and I thought why not bring back what solidified me as a FF writer for this site it was fun plus this will be easier for me to write since it's already written. So without further ado can I get my old and new readers hype for this? I doubt it. Below are the original links so you can compare the improvements I make. I will still follow the Chapter One: Part One, style because it fits and the chapters are actually different chapters of the main characters life. You all hype yet? No? Welp I tried this has been a long authors note so I'm gonna close it with this. I'm back! And I love doing this! #KingMe
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Chroncles of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 Part 1 : Pilot
It was about 11:15 PM EST in Bradenton, Florida. It was dark and stormy, thunder rumbling, lightning crackling. A typical Florida summer night. A man with short dreadlocks watched a small compound which wasn't heavily guarded, from a post about 30 yards away. It was seemingly empty. The man who guarded the front gate had hazy like eyes no pupil they looked white as if he was blind. The one who was watching dropped down from his position. He was greeted by the man who was guarding the compound.
"Evening Alton," the guard said, "You want to come in?" Alton nodded and the man proceeded to opening the gate. "I thought you went along with the others." He said as Alton pressed on without looking or speaking to him. "Long night I guess," the man whispered to himself. He was about to close the gate back but before he could press the button a strong arm went around his neck, choking him, gasping for breath and afraid the man desperately tried to utter a word or sound for help. However before he could call for help a large hand was put over his mouth muffling him.
His sight got blurry as he began to pass out and the last thing he heard was a deep voice say, "Good Bye." Before his neck was snapped. He dropped to the ground and lied motionless dead. His assailant took him out without alerting anyone, no sound came from the struggle. The man began to take out the men, woman, and unfortunately the children who had pure white eyes with his katana. This became a genocide. "One down, one more to go." The assailant then left the compound. Little to his knowledge there was one more pure white eyed man left, an older man. He had heard and saw everything that just happened. The elder, tried to make distress call to the other family to warn them.
"Hello, this is James Conley be on your guard! Alton just came here an preformed a silent but mass genocide on those who stayed home. He said and I quote "One down, one more to go. Hello? Is anyone there? Hello!?" James yelled.
"Oh grandfather you were always so predictable." Alton stood in the doorway, with his katana out.
"So you cut the phone lines as well. Why are you doing this Alton? This isn't like you!" He shouted.
"No you're wrong this is totally me." Alton responded as he looked up into James eyes.
Fear instantly froze James, "H-How? How did do you it?" He asked.
Alton immediately smirked acknowledging his grandfathers remarks. "I am a Brown." He then preformed a series of hand signs ending with the tigers seal. The older man closed his eyes seemingly accepting his fate.
"Good bye old man," James opened his eyes. They were whiter but veins surrounded his eyelids. "Its too late for that! Fire style: Fireball Justu." A large flame was disrupted from Alton's mouth. His grandfather quickly planted his feet and spun around quickly creating an offensive shield like maniuvore.
"8 trigrams rotation" The old man shouted, as the shield got wider in diameter, and more immense in size. The shield engulfed the flames and trusted them back put at Alton. He was thrown out of the room, and went threw another before landing hard on his back.
"Heh, the old man actually has some fight in him. If he's going to give his all I guess I'm going to have to as well." Alton thought to himself as he did a quick kip up he was met by James who attacked two of his chakra nodes. Alton winced in pain.
"8 Trigrams two palm!" He then attacked four, then eight, and so on.
"Four palm, eight palm, sixteen palm, thirty two palm, 8 trigrams sixty four palm!" At that moment Alton feel to the ground in immense pain and agony.
"You crazy old man I I can't move, most more I can barely breath, what what did you do?" He's asked screaming.
James smirked and began to walk away, " I used this," the man reveled a middle sized green thumbtack, with a purple liquid dripping from it. " this is a highly concentrated dosage of reaper poison only made by the Conley clan. Your death will be painfully dreadful and it will come within ten minutes." As James began to walk away Alton began to laugh loudly.
"Whats so funny?" Seeing that there was no chance for the young man, he walked over to him to see what he was chuckling at.
Alton smirked and said, "This battle was already decided long go."
As soon as he reached Alton's body, James whole world turned upside down. Time completely stopped temporally, the rain pounding against the concrete, thunder rumbling in the air, and lightning cracking in the air, everything, frozen simultaneously. James felt sharp pain shoot all over his buddy, he then feel down to his after they gave out on him. The old men looked at his surrounding and he immediately knew what was happening to him. " Genjutsu!" He thought. "But when? the old man said aloud, while on the ground struggling to breath .
"When you first looked into my eyes. It was over then grandfather. Hmp, it's funny how the tables have turned. Your death will be painfully dreadful and it will come within ten minutes." Alton said that with a smirk on his face. Leaving James, on the ground to die. Now Alton went to the other family complex and continued his mass genocide there, killing everyone, including his best friend.
Authors Note 2.0
Damn it feels good to back! I missed everyone! It was short right? goodHopefully I can gain new readers and I hope to see some old faces around here. Thank you for reading and thank you for all your support! THE KING IS BACK!!!!
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