[Adventure] The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Chapter 9- The Family Tree

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Here is chapter 9.....Hope you like it.

The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Chapter 9- The Family Tree

Scene continues with Naruto pushing the gate open

Naruto- Welcome…..

Hinata and Sasuke walk through the gate, and onto a bridge and looks around to see that they are completely surrounded by water with hundreds upon hundreds of whirlpools and trees that are twenty to forty times the size of Redwood trees.

Hinata- this is amazing, Naruto!

Naruto looks around and smiles

Naruto- I know…

Sasuke- yeah it is…. HOLD IT!.. Did I hear you correctly? Did you say your clan?

Naruto smiles and Nods

Naruto- Yep, Hehe

Sasuke- then that would be truly amazing, but then where is everyone?

Naruto Smiles and Sasuke and Hinata and looks up. Sasuke and Hinata follow suit and looks up into the trees. To see that hundreds upon thousands of tree houses and bridges {think Ewoks on a much grander scale}

Naruto- we are the village hidden in the trees and protected by the whirlpools…

Hinata- Wow! Incredible!!!....

Sasuke- What else are you hiding from us Naruto…. Do you really even need my training?

Sasuke {in thought}- your making me want to spar with you so bad….

Naruto laughs and looks at Sasuke and pats him on his back

Naruto- Of course I need your training… but first…

Sasuke- first what??

Naruto- we will Spar of course…

Sasuke-?!!

Naruto- just as soon as I speak to this old Geezer… Koudo go tell him I will need a word with him…

???- NO NEED!!

Naruto looks up and smiles, though he cannot see anything since the sun is blinding his vision…....Naruto Yells towards the voice…

Naruto- Yo! Grandpa Yoko… Can you give us a lift up?!

Scene cuts to the back of Yoko who is at the top of a tree bridge and is surrounded by many people. Yoko is a tall and slender man with red hair and small streaks of white. He is dressed in a long white robe with green, blue and a little brown detailing and the prominent Uzumaki Crest.

Yoko yells down to Naruto

Yoko- Your telling me the Great Naruto Uzumaki can’t climb a tree to get himself up here

Naruto yells

Naruto- HA HA HA.. Very funny Gamps! But as you can see I’m not alone.

Yoko yells

Yoko- True, you have brought us some visitors, Can they be trusted!?

Scene cuts back to Naruto on the ground

Naruto looks at Sasuke then Hinata smiles then looks upward towards yoko’s voice

Naruto- I trust these two with my life since they have saved it time and time again…

A hand is placed on Naruto’s shoulder, Naruto Smiles…

Yoko- Then they too will be welcomed here, Naruto….

Sasuke and Hinata are stunned to see Yoko standing behind Naruto and even more stunned that they did not notice his presence until he spoke…. Naruto turns and faces Yoko. When you finally see Yoko’s Face, it does not look old but certainly not young either. Yoko has a long white Fu Manchu beard/mustache and the biggest smile looking down at Naruto, who he Towers over.

Naruto- it’s good to be back Grandpa Yoko.. I have many things I need to talk to you about.

Yoko- Of course, but come relax… Then we can talk all you want.

Naruto- I’m Sorry, but this cannot wait…

Yoko’s Smile goes away and he nods

Yoko- of course…

Naruto turns to Sasuke and Hinata

Naruto- I will be back as soon as I can, but I must go speak with gramps here in private.

Sasuke- what are we suppose to do until you get back?!

Hinata- is it even safe for strangers like us to wonder about the village?

Yoko smiles and nods and Naruto turns to Makura and Koudo, Naruto bends down and whispers something to Makura… with that Makura vanishes with a black flash…

Hinata- Now Where is he going?

Naruto- You were wondering if it would be safe?... Yes, you will be perfectly safe I am lending Koudo and Makura to you, when people see the two of them, they will know you are with me.

Hinata- Oh.

Sasuke- That still does not answer, where Makura is going?...

In that moment a black flash reappears on Naruto’s scroll.

Makura- back Boss, and Mission complete

Naruto- Good… Sasuke, Makura was going and got you a guide for the village.

Sasuke- where is this guide of ours then?!

Makura- just where the boss instructed it to be.

Naruto- The guide will be up there to welcome you… Koudo, Makura

Koudo and Makura- Yes, Boss!

Naruto- Make sure nothing happens to them… You Got ME!!!?

Koudo and Makura- We got it, Boss!

Makura and koudo jump down from Naruto’s scroll and land in front of Sasuke and Hinata. Naruto Looks at Yoko

Naruto- Shall we get going Grandpa Yoko

Yoko nods looks up and yells

Yoko- Riku, Daichi !!!!

Riku and Daichi fall from the tree tops they are wearing a very similar long robe that Yoko wears except their sleeves are cut off, they also have a Kakashi navy blue mask with brown trimming. They land Gently in front of Yoko and Naruto kneeling in front of them.

Riku- Yes…

Daichi- Yoko Sensei

Yoko- Help my Grandson’s friends get to the top safely and to their guide.

Daichi- Yes..

Riku- Of course, Yoko-sensei

Sasuke and Hinata- Grandson?!!

Naruto Looks at Hinata

Naruto- Hinata I will be back as soon as possible

Hinata- Ok, But….

Naruto looks at Sasuke

Naruto- Sasuke….

Sasuke- What?

Naruto- Rest up because when I return we spar you lose, then we Train Hehe….

Sasuke- hmph.... as always so full of yourself.. your such a loser.

Naruto- hehe if you say so… See ya later.

And with that Naruto was gone in a flash.

Hinata- Man Naruto is so fast, I did not even have time to say good bye to him…

Yoko- I’m sorry for my grandson’s rudeness, he has a lot to learn.

Sasuke- are you really Naruto’s Grandfa…..

Yoko Interrupts

Yoko- I really must be going, it was truly nice meeting you both

Yoko does a blur of hand signs

Hinata- it was nice to mee….

But before Hinata could finish he fly’s up into the sky in a white red blur.

Sasuke- they sure act as if they are related.

Sasuke looks at Daichi and Riku

Sasuke- Daichi and Riku, was it?

Daichi and Riku- Yes!

Sasuke- ok then, so how are we going to get from here….

Sasuke points to the ground

Sasuke – to all the way up there?

Sasuke points skyward

Riku- if you two were an Uzumaki…

Daichi- it could be done very easily…

Riku- but since you’re not…

Daichi- it must be done the

Riku and Daichi- The Hard Way!

Hinata- Gulp – what way is that?

Riku and Daichi Sighs.

Riku and Daichi backflips off the bridge and lands in between the many whirlpools that are surrounding them. Riku and Daichi Simultaneously do multiple hand signs with one hand all while holding each other’s hand… Out of Nowhere a tree sprouts up violently out of one of the many whirlpools…. Riku and Daichi both yell to Sasuke and Hinata.

Riku- GET…

Daichi- ON!!!!

To Be Continued....
 
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I came on here to tell you that you posted this twice, but just by scrolling down in a flash I can tell.

There's too much talking, not enough text describing what's going on around them.
 
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