The Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki: Chapter 8- The Five Year Secret
Scene cuts to Sasuke and Hinata who are keeping their Distance from Naruto but with Hinatas eyes have constant visual contact with Naruto
Hinata- Sasuke where do you think he is going?
Sasuke- Truthfully I have no clue Hinata, but it must be important if he is not returing home with us to Konoha
Hinata looks down but quickly regains eye contact on Naruto.
Hinata- I am so afraid that is the case Sasuke. That he has found someone else over these 5 years.
Sasuke- Don’t be stupid, Naruto and I are lucky to have found women who loved us from the very beginning and have stayed with us through the ups and downs. Hinata How could Naruto ever forget you in the first place the one that risked her life for his against Pain.
Sasuke looks at Hinata and smiles but notices she has a puzzling look on her face
Sasuke- Whats wrong?
Hinata- Soo aren’t you a little surprised Sasuke
Sasuke- Surprised about what?
Hinata- That he has not detected us yet? Considering how adept he is as a sensor…
Sasuke- No…
???- No?!
Sasuke and Hinata are stunned!?!
Scene cuts to above Hinata and Sasuke where we see Makura and koudo jumping in sync with them stride for stride.
Makura- Koudo, you hear this, Sasuke is not surprised.
Sasuke and Hinata look up
Sasuke- it’s you two
Hinata-{whispers}-How did I not see them
Koudo- it’s not surprising you did not see us, when you have been looking at us this whole time…
Hinata’s focuses on Naruto and see’s that both Makura and Koudo are still sitting on Naruto’s
Scroll chatting away.
Sasuke- when did he Notice?
Makura- You’re a complete dumbass to think he would not.
Koudo- Brother, Shut it! These are the Bosses friends.
Koudo looks at Hinata
Koudo- You will come to learn Hinata and…
Koudo looks at Sasuke
Koudo- Sasuke, it is hard to sneak up on the Boss, He can sense your intentions to see if your friend or foe. He can sense your chakra and he has us two watching his back as well. So the only reason he wanted you to think he had not noticed you was….
Koudo jumps infront of Sasuke and Hinata haulting their progress.
Koudo- to have some fun with you…
Sasuke- Fun?
{POOF} Koudo Transforms into Naruto and Makura just disappear.
Naruto- Hey you two, miss me already… HEhe
Sasuke- God Damn It Naruto!!! Hey wait a minute you Called me a Dumbass!! Err….
Hinata runs and hugs Naruto… Naruto picks her up and swirls her around and puts her on the ground again.
Naruto- So Kakashi sent you to follow me?
Hinata- are you mad?
Naruto- No not at all, I can’t blame him. I’m actually quite pleased he sent you two.
Sasuke- Pleased, How so?
Naruto- for one thing I can do my training with you in person and not just by sending one of my clones.
Hinata- so you were never planning to come back to Konoha then… Why?
Naruto Smiles
Naruto- I’ll show you…
Naruto snap his fingers and in a black and white flash Koudo and Makura lands on Naruto’s back scroll
Koudo & Makura- Boss?
Naruto- Koudo go get a pass for two visitors from that geezer.
Koudo- On it Boss!
Koudo disappears in a puff of smoke
Sasuke- What is he doing?
Naruto- you will see, he will be back very soon
Hinata- What are you going to show us Naruto?
Naruto looks at Hinata and Smiles
Naruto- exactly what I’ve been up too these five years…
Naruto looks at Makura who is still sitting on his scroll
Naruto- Makura.. Summon your brother back, He will have what we need by now.
Makura- is that really necessary, I was beginning to like being solo..
Naruto stares at Makura
Makura- OK Boss, Here come KOUDO!
Makura does the summoning ritual. And in a poof of white smoke Koudo reappears, holding two passes.
Koudo- hey bro did you miss me?
Makura- Of course I did I’ve been saving your seat right next to me…
Hinata giggles
Naruto- Koudo did you get them?
Koudo- yes, here are the two admission passes, Boss.
Naruto smiles and takes the two passes…
Naruto- Good
Naruto Motions Sasuke and Hinata to come closer…. Sasuke and Hinata reach for the passes but Naruto pulls them out of reach to his chest
Sasuke- what’s the meaning of this?!!
Hinata- Is everything ok, Naruto?
Naruto- These passes are a privledge, and I need two things from you before I allow you to use them….
Hinata- two things?
Sasuke- what are these two things you need from us?
Naruto- 1st …. I need your word.
Hinata- our word?
Naruto- your word that whatever I show you besides our training can never be spoken to anyone….
Hinata- Anyone?!
Sasuke- even Kakashi, Naruto?
Naruto- Especially Kakashi, I will tell him when he needs to know, and that time is not now.
Sasuke- that’s fine, as long as you plan on telling him…
Naruto- Hinata?...
Hinata is squirming and seems to be extremely Nervous
Naruto- If you cannot do that Hinata I completely understand, however I cannot allow you to come any further with us….
Hinata- NO Naruto!!... Im coming im not going to be left behindand away from you any longer!.... I I….I Promise Not to say anything of what I see to Anyone!!
Naruto smiles nods
Naruto- Good.
Sasuke- so what’s the second thing you need?
Naruto- Ummmm…. Well I need.. your…
Makura in a horror voice
Makura- BLOOD!! Moohwaah ha ha
Hinata- Blood!!?
Koudo- don’t make it sound so ominous Makura
Naruto glares at Makura, then looks back up at Hinata
Naruto- Do not worry, Hinata, This will not harm you it is only a one time thing
Sasuke- One-time thing?
Naruto looks at Sasuke
Naruto- Yes, One-time only. These two passes are a one and done summoning contract between You, Hinata and me. No one else….. Okay?
Sasuke- Fine…
Sasuke takes the pass bites his finger and presses it on the pass itself. Sasuke then hands the pass back to Naruto.
Naruto- Good, Now it’s your turn Hinata…
Naruto slowly passes the pass to Hinata. Hinata cautiously takes the pass.
Naruto- I promise this will not harm you in anyway…This experience will… Well you’ll see
Hinata- OK, Naruto.
Hinata follows suit, bites her finger and presses it on the pass and hands it back to Naruto. Naruto takes the pass and smiles
Naruto- Great… Now both you close your eyes.
Sasuke- this was not part of the conditions, if it was I would never have given you my blood.
Naruto- Just Do it!
Hinata- is it necessary, Naruto?
Naruto- Yes…
Both Sasuke and Hinata close their eyes.
Naruto- the next time you two open your eyes….
[POOF]!!!!!
Naruto- you will be amongst my clan!!
Sasuke and Hinata open their eyes to see a gate with the Uzumaki’s Crest on it… Naruto goes towards it and pushes it open…. Scene goes white….
To Be Continued....
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okay dont start something drag me and seven chapters and stop i'll find and destro.. oh here it is your life is spared
