The Chosen Child chapter 3

[miyako uchiha]

I wanted to post another chapter since I'm bored. I'm still writing it and I think it's coming out quite nicely. please comment I want to know how I did and anyways I could make it better.
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Chapter 3
The Destroyer of the town

The sun rose and shone on a four man squad sleeping peacefully on the soft grass. Excepted for one, the leader tossed and turned, and only had a fixed amount of sleep. He was already up sharpenning his sword waiting for the rest to awake from there slumber. He gazed over towards a white haired teenager waking up. The teenager jumped up into a sitting position, stretched his arms out, and yawned. His white hair was a mess, he just sat there scratching his head and yawned again. Then looked over at the leader and asked​

"Sasuke?
Sasuke stopped sharping his blade and said. "What Suigetsu?
"I'm bored."
"You just got up how can you be bored?"
"I don't know I can already tell it's going to be a boring day," Suigetsu rose to standing stretched, and walked to the river.

As soon as Suigetsu left Karin jumped up, ran over to where Sasuke was, sat really close, and flirted she said. " Good morning Sasuke." in her fllirting way.​

"Karin, stop sitting so close to me, back off."
"Aw come on Sasuke, Suigetsu is gone and Jugo is still asleep."

Jugo wasn't asleep though, he was already up packing. He knew that Sasuke liked to move quick. "Karin, get off Sasuke, he is our leader show some respect." Jugo spoke calmly​

"Hmph, you can't tell me what to do Jugo!" Karin yelled at him still cligging to Sasuke.

[Suigetsu came back, his hair no longer in a mess, "Uck, first thing in the morning Karin your going to make me throw up." Suigetsu said in disgust.​

Karin stood up walked over to Suigetsu and slapped him, but Suigetsu just turned to water and let her hand slide right through. Karin kept beating Suigetsu, which he was technically a puddel.​

Sasuke stood up and screamed at Karin and Suigetsu "Stop fighting, pack up, and shut up!!"​

Karin and Suigetsu looked at him shocked that he made such an out burst. Karin stopped and slowly started to pack. Suigetsu solidified hisself and said "Wow! Sasuke I didn't know you had it in you to yell at us like that."

Sasuke looked at Suigetsu, grabbed his side, and slowly sat down. Jugo looked at him with concern, knowing there was something going on with Sasuke that he wasn't tellin them.​

They finished packin and headed out. Suigetsu couldn't shut up. He kept talking, asking many questions that were never answered. Until he asked on in specific Suigetsu asked. "Hey Sasuke, where are we goin any way?"​

Sasuke answered finally to one of his questions, "We're going going to that slave town Suigetsu."​

"Again, come on that place smelled weird."
"That's why I plan on getting rid of that retched town, but they want to try and make a proposition."
"Why are we trying to make a proposition with them? Can't we just kill them?"
"I plan to, I'm just curious what they think they can offer me."
"Oh, so get treated to dinner, and then kill them I like it." They walked in silence until they finally reached the town.

Miyako was cooking dinner with Miss JiJi the cook, when she heard Mrs. Joesy and Mr. Mat welcome some guest​

"Welcome, come on in, dinner is almost done," Miss Joesy spoke kindly.
Miss JiJi giggle. "Ain't it funny that she talk's all sweet to her guest, but as soon as they leave she starts to yell at us?"
"Yea, seriously she is such a jerk!" Miyako gazed at the kitchen door wondering what the man who posted a threat looked like.

Sasuke Suigetsu, Karin, and Jugo stepped into the house. Sasuke was shocked to see the house this clean in a town like this. "Hello, I'm Mrs. Joesy and this isi my husband Mat." Mrs. Joesy kindly etraduced thereselfs. "Here come sit at the table and we'll talk." Mrs. Joesy sat the group at the table, then her and Mr. Mt sat down. Silence came over, until Miyako came out to tell Mrs. Joesy that dinner was done.​

As soon as she came out of the door Sasuke gazed at her, looking at every little detale. Her long, wavy dirty blonde hair was at her lower back, her skin had a small tan, and her eyes were a beautiful blue. It looked like two sapphires were placed in them. Alook like that Sasuke thought she is probably a slave that does whatever she is told out of fear. That is untile he heard that gentle looking mouth say words.​

"Dinners done, when do you want me to brin it," Miyako asked at the kitchen doorway in a very rude manner. She didn't come over to the table and whisper in her ear that it was done, which is what you supposed to do. No, Miyako just yelled it across the room.​

Mrs. Joesy spoke calmly. Not wanting to seem mean to her slames, "Bring it out now dear they seem hungry." [/INDENT

Miyako rolled her eyes walked in the kitchen and yelled "Hey, JiJi they want their meal! Then after we give it to um, we can go eat out of the pig troff, Since we ain't getting any!"​

Mrs. Joesy had a shocked exspression on her face at such an out burst, but Sasuke could read her thoughts. He knew She was mad and that she wanted to walk right in the kitchen and beat her to death. "Sorry about that, she is such a rude slave," Mrs Joesy nervously said.​

Miyakocame out with dinner, she slammed it right infront of Mrs. Joesy and Mr. Mat. Sasuke figured that this was her time to get back at the for what they've done. To embarress them, and push him more to destroy this town. Miyako gave the main course to everyone, but when she made her way to Sasuke he raised his hand in a way to tell her to stop before she sat it down. "Just the rice, you sit down there and eat that main course, adn tell your friend to fix her a plate and join us."​

Miyako gazed at Sasuke with a shocked exspression of such a kind jester. She put his rice down nodded her head, and walked sloly into the kitchen. Miyako shut the kitchen door behind her and just stood there looking like a ghost.​

"Why miss. are you okay you look like your dead?" miss JiJi said with concern.

Miyako shook out of it "JiJi fix you a plate, grav a chair , and come eat at the tabel."​

"Okay, if you say so."

MIyako came back in to the eating room. She sat down were her plate was at and looked at Sasuke frosen with confussion. While Miyako stared Miss. JiJi came in with a plate and a chair. She sat right beside Miyako following her gaze to the man she was looking at. Miss JiJi was taking the offer she started to eat.​

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Well aren't you going to eat, you look hungry," Sasuke said. Miyalo just gazed in his eyes searching for the reason why he offered. Sasuke thought. "hmm, she must not be used to kindness she's searching my eyes to see if I have an evil reason for this." Miyako slowly picked up her chop sticks and slowly stated to eat. She still would not take her eyes off of Sasuke though.​

After dinner Mrs. Joesy and Mr. Mat offered a slave money that would run out of their ears, but nothin they said was going to change Sasuke's mind. "Well, what do you want?" Mrs. Joesy asked worried.​

"Thank you for dinner, but it's time to end this town, and go." Sasuke calmly said. Within a blink of an eye Miyako saw Mrs. Joesy and Mr. Mat dead.

"Hey JijI WE'RE FREE, haHA, finally they got what they deserved!" miyako screamed with excitment.​

Sasuke appeared right behind Miyako right at her ear. "She is free, you I'm afraid are coming with us."​

"I knew there was a catch to you feeding me."

"Why are we taking her, we already have on chick to deal with!" Suigetsu whined.​

Sasuke hit the back of Miyako's neck neck and carried her over his shoulder. "I'll tell you later," Sasuke said and walked out of the house. They burned down the slave town, after letting all the slaves go, and stood by watching the flames infulf the retched town.​

The End:​