The Burning Boy
Prologue/Chapter 1
Prologue/Chapter 1
The first day of any new born baby's life is different, a different story for each and every one. Most new babies are named right then and there. Different story for one boy who wasn't much bigger than an egg timer but was special even though he was so small.
This boy was called Jaden. When he was born, he just lay in his small like bed like the rest of the babies. He never cried nor done anything and he seemed to die.
Jaden died but only to be resurrected again as he was put in a bath of lava. The lava washed Jaden of everything of before and Jaden soon was normal, the sickness of him was washed away they thought.
Every baby born is always to become a ninja, Jaden was no different. He grew and became skilled in the arts of fire. No one ever mentioned when he died and was brought back to life.
Jaden didn’t even knew, but everyone else did but no one did they swore to the act of the first hokage that they wouldn’t speak of it. Well even if they did swore to the act, there is many who wouldn’t care about it, and telling, speaking about it even speaking directly to Jaden.
Jaden was surprised and knew he was different as everyone laughed at him, joking at him.
Jaden was angry and sad, mixed with feelings of both, as he summoned up an amount of chakra that burst out of him and struck everyone who laughed at him. He was very confused as he didn’t even realise he did it, he wasn’t in control. He was stuck inside crying... while he felt more insults even though there was nothing.
Jaden felt lost inside of himself.
Inside himself was tunnels with gates, like a prison but more scary and evil, and each prison contained a part of Jaden which was called “his feelings” His feelings were all different, Jaden stared through one open prison which was titled “Anger” Next to Anger was sadness and that was also open.
Jaden heard a voice, it sounded like his own but it wasn’t him who was speaking, as he turned to face forwards he saw himself but in a darker way. “Hello Jaden... You get the attention! But Not Now... I will get you and free myself; I am you in a darker way! I am Jantien!” Jantien was the same build as Jaden but Jantien was formed around black chakra.
“I am so sad Jaden... That you and I will only see each other just this once... now! Come here for your demise!” Jantien spoke loudly with a more devil like voice his anger bursting out slowly.
Jantien was ready to beat Jaden, and he rushed at Jaden who covered himself thinking of something that could work. Then... he remembered!
Standing there was Darien Sensei, he was showing us the Body Replacement Jutsu I remember it and I always failed... Maybe I could use that... but would it work?
“Focus Jaden!” Darien disappeared into fuzzy white light.
“Body Replacement Jutsu!” Jaden shouted in hope as at last moments, switching positions Jantien smashed... “Jaden!” Jantien smashed downwards against a...log?!
Jaden came down from upwards kicking Jantien in the back of the head. Jaden whispered to Jantien,” Switching with a light bulb in this prison was such an easy thing to do!”
Jantien soon disappeared within the wind confusing Jaden as he never remembered being a wind type. “I have been training if you didn’t realise!” Jantien shouted as he sent a slicing vortex of wind that shredded at Jaden.
Jaden felt himself being cut to pieces as he felt a sudden surge in chakra as he drew in chakra from around him and focusing it.
Bursting through the prisons lava incinerated everything, Jantien and Jaden staring at each other at the last moment before a burst of light and darkness took them both. Outside in the world, Jaden woke onto a pile of flowers and grass standing up and looking around him he realised he was in the Field Of Blossom Konoha. Jantien stood opposite from Jaden as he stood up.
“I didn’t think... it would be possible for that to happen... Lava... you unlocked it in your desperate time of need... your success proves you worthy... I will defeat you... and be your killer as I take your power,” Last words Jantien spoke before disappearing once again into the wind.
Jaden didn’t need to think about this...he knew inside himself he was a lava user... and an advanced fire ninja. Jantien was watching all the time even in Jaden’s sleep; he didn’t rest until he knew he could kill Jaden.
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