[Romance] The Betrayal </3

[Paintry4]

Here's My another lines for you all.. It's true to me and my situation coz i'm receintly broken.
The Betrayal
Those Long walks we've been,
you're the girl in my spotlight and others i'd never seen.
Now dont ignore me and plz dont be so mean,
I'm crying here and you're turning your back with a Grin.
Those nights we'd spent in my couch,
i felt severe electricty when i'd just felt your touch.
So tell me girl did you felt the same as me?
If i'm not the one then with whom you're gonna be?
I always smiled when i was at difficult,
I'm kneeling be4 you, i dont care others even if it's insult.
I saw the dreams with you and our children,
But now i can see it in your eyes-I'm just a big burden.
At last now you crossed the bridge alone,
you're now refusing my love-Is it all done?
I'm left with a big broken heart and i'mma a fail,
you cant hear me now as you left me with BETRAYAL.

 

[Erzo]

Dat heartbreak.

You'll be fine bro, you'll be fine. ;__;

 

[Avinash012]

Are u from India?

OT:Nice.

 

[Paintry4]

@Erzo thanks for your suggestion, i'm trying to be fine
@avinash No i'm not from India, i'm From Nepal.

 

[itachi uchiha fiance]

thats nice ........

 

[Scooby Doo]

I know the feel bro.

Just a lil advice: dont use abbreviations in a poem