The best I could do.

[Supermacaquecool]

Today I give up, last 30 mins I've been trying to fix everything in this drawing, but it still looks odd.
I know the eyes are a bit too separate, her hand is too little, her finger looks weird, but whatever.
Simply look at it and tell me if it is worth to work on tomorrow.

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[Yuka]

Her chest looks kind of flat but overall, it's a nice drawing

 

[+Kyon+]

Lolxd funnyxd

 

[SashaUchiha]

make it your own style! xd nice!

 

[Frozenstein]

work on it... much more xd

 

[ShinoMantis]

Hey man it might be off a bit but it still looks awesome, you just gotta keep drawing