The beginnings of Akatsuki

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Hi people, I've decided to make a sequel to my fanfic The bloody fate of the Uchihas. I wasnt sure if its worth continuing but hope you like it. I know that Tobi is Obito now but its just a fanfic besides let's say that Obito is Tobi2 and this Tobi (who is an Uchiha from Madara's time here) is Tobi1, Madara's original helper.:shrug:

For the better understanding (but not necessary to check them):
previous chapter1:
chapter4:

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The beginnings of Akatsuki

Chapter1​

Tobirama's real worth​

Tobi was taking a piss in the toilet in the secret hideout of the newly formed organization, founded by Uchiha Madara himself. The Akatsuki hadn’t made a significant move since the establishment of the Great Ninja Villages, because Hashirama – who defeated Madara just a few months ago- was still alive. So the other members : Kakuzu, Zetsu and the freshman Tokage (literally meaning:lizard) were playing cards in the hall of the cavern.

Suddenly someone appeared behind Tobi.

-You have quite a small penis, you know.

Tobi pissed on himself in his surprise.

-Look what you have done! You gonna pay for this!

The grey-haired enemy threw a bunch of kunai at Tobi, but they slipped through him.

-As expected of you.

- What!? Tobirama Senju? How could you find us?

-Well, the last time we met, my brother put some tracking seeds on you.

-Impossible! That bastard Hashirama! But then why have you been waiting for such a long time to track me down?

-I had to train so I can defeat you. But enough talk. – then Tobirama formed some seals and shouted:Water style: exploding water colliding wave!!! A few seconds later a huge amount of water flooded the room.

Then Tobirama went under the surfice of the lake and put a small oxygenmask on his face.
„In this water, I can sense his location , besides... ”
Tobi popped up right behind Tobirama and tried to touch him in order to warp him into his dimension, but Tobirama teleported and reapperaed a few meters away.

- Nice move , Tobirama Senju. You can sense my chakra in this water and you can teleport wherever you want inside it.

- Good observation, but I’ve also figured out that you can teleport not only your whole body but only parts of it as well, so you can breathe too by transporting your nose into your dimesnion.

Tobi: !? - „He is a dangerous opponent after all. I have to get serious”- But still, I’ll get you.

Tobirama: We’ll see about that. Mizubunshin no jutsu!- said Tobirama and 100 clones were made.

Tobi: Useless. Kagebunshin no jutsu!- and Tobi made 100 clones as well.

The clones clashed with kunais, but the water clones proved to be stronger, though only 10 remained. Then these remaining ones swam towards Tobi, but he transported himself outside the water. The clones followed him but when they reached the surface, Tobi lifted his mask and destroyed the clones with the Great fireball technique. Then he put back his mask, and sucked all the water in with Kamui.

Tobirama: What? You can transport things from a distance too? So OP.

Tobi: Hahaha yes I can though I’m still not perfect at it yet and it takes a huge amount of chakra.
-said Tobi,but a moment later all of a sudden Tobirama popped up in front of him and stabbed him.

- But how?

- You’ve already figured it out, jerk. I can teleport myself inside the lake. Thats because it’s infused with my chakra. When we fought in the water, when you materialized your body, your clothes became wet, and the water contains my chakra. So even now, I could teleport myself to you. Now die! – said Tobirama and raised his arm to land a fatal blow on Tobi.

Tobi:”Shit I have no choice” thought Tobi when he was about to die,and closed his left eye.

Tobirama was preparing to leave, but he was attacked from behind.He dodged.

-How did you do that?

-Izanagi .

Tobirama was shocked.

-How could you get Senju DNA?-

-I wont tell you.- said Tobi and with his remaining eye he looked into Tobirama’s eyes and cast a genjutsu on him.- Well, thats what I should have had to do to him from the beginning. Madara will scold me for losing my EMS...but I’ve got Hashirama’s brother.Hahahaha...
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(oh by the way, yes, senju dna is needed for izanagi in my fanfic)

Chapter 2:
 
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Hey, thank you for finally posting a new chapter, I enjoyed reading it.

I would wish I could point out so stuff to you to make your chapter even more awesome but sadly I myself am not really good at this :p
But the only thing I can say is that Tobi and Tobirama's behavior weren't completly befitting the way I thought their behavior would be... but hey, that's what fanfics are for ;)

Good job and I would gladly read more from you.
 

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Pissing on people huh?

Woah, I like where this is going :rofl:

Good job, I like it
Thanks very much:)

It's different, but it's really cool. So he what genjutsu did he put him under?
Maybe I spoil the next chapter now, but I can tell you that its kinda like the one Madara was controlling the 4th mizukage with.
 

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lol I have a tendency to think in scatological humor as well...specially when it comes to bathroom situations...xd I understand ya!
It was nice. You put some good moves for each...I didn't feel like it was a boring fight...
But that's it! I can't write more than this, I'm running off time! I'll read the chap 2 later!
 
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