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Jōnin Strategist 🧠
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Naruto: sasuke...
Sasuke: ....(glares at naruto
Naruto: "thought to self" I know this has to happen and this might be the end... Why sasuke?
Sasuke: the beast are gone. Kages are out of fight. It's just you and me now... What are you waiting for... If not you then
Rinne activates as sasuke shown to dash to teleport
At the same time, naruto goes hermit mode HM.
Naruto is shown looking in the sky before dissapearing
Kashi: where did they go!!
Sakura: tts: again there is nothing u can do. Why does it keep coming to this
Overhead you see full sasunoo
Sasuke uses sasunoo to aim and slash ama at the talked beast in the rocks
Sasuke uses his rinne to change the sky to start up a new form of kirin
Naruto throws tbrasenshuriken at sasunoo,
Sasuke is shown in all dust but un scratched
Naruto: not even a scratch!!
Sasuke: with that you couldn't even scratch my sasunoo.
As before and always I have been ahead of you naruto. I will be hokage but not of konoha or any other village but of the entire nation. Ending you and those fake ideals you have will start the revolution.
Naruto:... "Naruto we are still inside you. Don't forget about us.
All beasts faces are shown with a smile while kurama is shown with his face down.
Naruto:...!!! I understand!
Sasuke uses ama on the beasts and rocks start disappearing
Clouds are also forming
Sasuke: This is the beginning of the end if this system! Amatarasu kirin
Sasukes body and sasunoo is struck with black lightning and points sasunoo sword at naruto.
Naruto: There is no other way I can change his mind. (Naruto says all the tailed beasts names with his eyes closed)
Sasuke: seems you realize there is nothing you can d....
Naruto is shown in a mode never shown: full tailed beasts hermit sage mode right when struck with black lightning
Sasuke can't see naruto but felt a spike in narutos chakra
Sasuke: what's going on?!?
Naruto is shown standing on the ground with dust behind him glaring at sasuke in his new mode
Naruto: unfortunately you are right sasuke, this is the end. But the beginning of a new world with out people with too much power. That means both of us
Full page: naruto and sasuke looking at each other from sky to ground
Next chapter: the beginning of the end pt. 2
Sasuke: ....(glares at naruto
Naruto: "thought to self" I know this has to happen and this might be the end... Why sasuke?
Sasuke: the beast are gone. Kages are out of fight. It's just you and me now... What are you waiting for... If not you then
Rinne activates as sasuke shown to dash to teleport
At the same time, naruto goes hermit mode HM.
Naruto is shown looking in the sky before dissapearing
Kashi: where did they go!!
Sakura: tts: again there is nothing u can do. Why does it keep coming to this
Overhead you see full sasunoo
Sasuke uses sasunoo to aim and slash ama at the talked beast in the rocks
Sasuke uses his rinne to change the sky to start up a new form of kirin
Naruto throws tbrasenshuriken at sasunoo,
Sasuke is shown in all dust but un scratched
Naruto: not even a scratch!!
Sasuke: with that you couldn't even scratch my sasunoo.
As before and always I have been ahead of you naruto. I will be hokage but not of konoha or any other village but of the entire nation. Ending you and those fake ideals you have will start the revolution.
Naruto:... "Naruto we are still inside you. Don't forget about us.
All beasts faces are shown with a smile while kurama is shown with his face down.
Naruto:...!!! I understand!
Sasuke uses ama on the beasts and rocks start disappearing
Clouds are also forming
Sasuke: This is the beginning of the end if this system! Amatarasu kirin
Sasukes body and sasunoo is struck with black lightning and points sasunoo sword at naruto.
Naruto: There is no other way I can change his mind. (Naruto says all the tailed beasts names with his eyes closed)
Sasuke: seems you realize there is nothing you can d....
Naruto is shown in a mode never shown: full tailed beasts hermit sage mode right when struck with black lightning
Sasuke can't see naruto but felt a spike in narutos chakra
Sasuke: what's going on?!?
Naruto is shown standing on the ground with dust behind him glaring at sasuke in his new mode
Naruto: unfortunately you are right sasuke, this is the end. But the beginning of a new world with out people with too much power. That means both of us
Full page: naruto and sasuke looking at each other from sky to ground
Next chapter: the beginning of the end pt. 2
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,you should maintain you prediction format.And at the third line you have written beast(singular)it should be beasts(plural).Other than these mistakes,its awesome! =D
