The beautiful princess

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Once Upon a time there was this beautiful princess Named Ruby she was the fairest princess in the land and Everyone adored her and showered her with extravagant Jewels and rubies But she couldn't bring herself to to accept these gifts from her admirers because they were to extravagant for her to wear, because if there was one thing she loved more than jewelry or rubies was her charming prince Ramada, he was a handsome man, who stood nearly 6 feet tall with the bluest eyes and his head held high, he was truly perfect in every way and he knew it for the wealth he shared with all the land and the hearts he touched with his noble words there really was no one in this world who could compare to this noble prince for he wore a crown upon his head, made of the finest gold by his great grandfather Noel who was a smith and made crowns for a living but when he was in his shop one day a man, with six fingers, made his way towards the old man's door and this is what he said "Your finished old man, No longer will you stay or work in this town," than with that being said he mounted his black steed and galloped off into the distance with ease



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All I can say is, wow. I'm simply amazed at your writing technique.

I've never seen anybody write something like this. Your ability to write without using punctuation is amazing. I simply adore the run on sentence.

I bet this took you hours to write? How many weeks did you spend planning this? Seriously, I've just become your number one fan.
 
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