The Apprentice Chapter One

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The Apprentice


Chapter One


The wind blew through the newly formed hidden leaf village. Everything was looking up, after decades of war between clans the hidden leaf village was a shining beacon of hope for a new generation.
One member of this new generation was Yoru. A young boy trying to get stronger in order to achieve his dream of being able to call himself the leader of his clan.



Yoru had just turned fourteen a few days ago; he was sitting under a tree with his prized possession a sword given to him by his father. He stood up as his spiky black hair blew in the wind he corrected his forehead protector and un creased his blue long sleeved shirt, he also brushed the dirt off his black pants. He then holstered his sword on his back.
Yoru: I hope I’m not late!



He set off walking to the arranged location where he was to meet his sensei for his scheduled training session. He walked through the new village and saw all of the smiling faces as they worked together to build new homes for each other.



Hashirama Senju using his wood style Kekkei Genkai was especially good at building new homes for the village people. He normally helped the Uchiha clan before his own Senju clan in order to try and keep the clans from fighting, something his brother did not agree with.
Madara Uchiha and Hashirama Senju walked through their newly formed village.



Hashirama: Is it not great Madara? When finally did it! After we first dreamed of this as kids!
Madara: Yes Hashirama this is indeed a great achievement.
Hashirama: Then why are not happy?
Madara: I am, I am just in better control of my emotions than you.



Madara and Hashirama arrived at an open grassy field where they saw the young Yoru waiting smiling at the two of them
Yoru: Ah… master! You’ve arrived!



To Be Continued…


Chapter Two
 
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Its awesome! I was hoping Kishi would give us a broader glimpse of Madara and Hashirama's peaceful days during Hashi's flashback, but it ended so quickly. And I'm curious about Yoru.
The one thing I didnt like was how quickly the chapter went by. It would be easier to call this a prologue, and go into more detail in future chapters. (not that im one to talk, i get busted for lack of description all the time! :NO:)
off to read chapter 2!
 
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