The American Dream Poem

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So my teacher told us to write a poem, she said it is supposed be your American Dream and your interpretation of it and it doesn't need any poetical or analytical or literal devices just needs to be good and has to consists of two stanzas and 4 to 6 lines in each stanza.
So here it is:

The American Dream¬

stanza 1
What is the American Dream?

It’s whatever you want it to be

It’s what you need

It’s what you want to do in the future

It’s what you love to do

And not being told what to do

To help support your family and be successful

It’s the fantasy that you want to make into a reality

That dream that you want to become true


stanza 2
Now what is my dream?

Oh, my bad

I mean American Dream

Well, it’s what I love to do

It’s what I enjoy to do

It’s what I know I’m good at too

It’s what I want to do in the future

Even if others think I’m not good

I’ll just prove them wrong

If they think I’m bad who cares

‘Cause it’s my American Dream not theirs


Tell me what you think and what is god or bad. Tell me what doesn't make sense.
 

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Because... You let Rin die.

OT: Sounds pretty good, but stanza 2 could use a little more thought ;) Other than that I'd say it's awesome!
 
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