Please, you're flawless-the thing is that your mind was temporally rendered unstable after you read/commented in that train wreck of the first chapter xdSee? I'm not flawlessxd Guess I got too into "4 gems representing the 5 countries" and not the whole sentence
I'm just glad I'm up to date with this one
I apologize for the late reply and I suppose either tomorrow or Thursday as I unfortunately had to edit the very chapter to be released -_-Oh, forgot to ask... When can we expect the next chapter?
Thanks for informing him xdYou find the link to his first chapter at the end of the first post
Thank you ^.^ It is the greatest feeling for me to get a compliment on my battle scenes and the length to my knowledge was not planned out xd Although, I’m pleased that it is praised! You’re correct as I did do my homework on the jutsu-it is along with the battle scenes the most important thing for me in this ff lol Thanks as I absolutely am <3 with Mei!!!!! I loved adding her and it seems as though I portrayed her as close to Kishi as possible as there are no complaints thus farFantastic continuation over a great beginning.
Two things I particularly liked in this was:
- The battle description's quality and its length. Its reasonable length made the battle more endearing that an over-stretched; while boosted by your language (as always xd)
- The Jutsu details. Showed tremendous research works along with a very good presentation.
One thing that had me wondered at a point, was will Kotetsu & Izumo keep the pace of the battle; given all those jutsus they were using. But, very realistically, you made them acknowledged that fact and then had Mei entered the scene. That's another reason why i especially love that short well-depicted battle.
Mei's entry scene and how she took care of those 2 enemies were brilliant while Kotetsu and Izumo's interaction and comic timing were hilarious. (credit especially to Kotetsu for comedy in this one)
All-in-all, another great chapter. Awaiting for next one
Cool and I’m glad that I have been able to integrate the humor within the pace of this ff as it is a genre that I’m not too familiar with at all.
Well, you deserve all credits; mainly for your work and research. It's at times the toughest job - tougher than writing and a more than applaud-worthy delivery from you both in battles and presentation.Thank you ^.^ It is the greatest feeling for me to get a compliment on my battle scenes and the length to my knowledge was not planned out xd Although, I’m pleased that it is praised! You’re correct as I did do my homework on the jutsu-it is along with the battle scenes the most important thing for me in this ff lol Thanks as I absolutely am <3 with Mei!!!!! I loved adding her and it seems as though I portrayed her as close to Kishi as possible as there are no complaints thus far
Thank you again my friend
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Thank you for your words-they're very much appreciated and I hope that the humor factor plays as main a role as the action, etc. and that it isn't corny in the upcoming chapters. Thanks I wish I could only include Mei moreWell, you deserve all credits; mainly for your work and research. It's at times the toughest job - tougher than writing and a more than applaud-worthy delivery from you both in battles and presentation.
Yeah, Mei was very well-portrayed. She's a very fun character and it's nice to see more of her. Besides Mikey's FF who amalgam almost all Naruto characters, there're few FFs that have FFs that have Mei.
Your humor is one of the highlight of your FF and that's been set since the first chapter itself and I'm sure you'll excel in that category too. Category that wasn't really in Infernal Rebirth; so I'm definitely looking for your comedy parts.
And I'll be reading the other 2 chapters tomorrow hopefully
Well, you have fallen behind lol However, you/Mikey are so fast that you two make up for lost in an instant and I cannot wait almost as much as the next Naruto chapter! xd
