The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TEN

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 10: Disaster

[Review on last chapter]
The nukenin reappears and interrupts them

They are able to recover the gem and leave before the nukenin’s jutsu drowns them

Her jutsu flows into the ravines and after she pursues them they all remain at a standstill

She then uses Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Jutsu)

Tsunade is informed and messages Mei

[Setting change: Near the outskirts of Tsuchi no Kuni]

Narrator: Suddenly two figures emerge from the mist that had completely surrounded the area as they creep behind Izumo and Kotetsu as a weapon is swung at them.

*Splash*

Nukenin: (In thought) They're pretty skilled at using clones..

Narrator: She then cancels out her clone and prepares herself.

Nukenin: (In thought) Its time to end this-they need to die simultaneously! *snicker*

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Uzushio no Jutsu (Water Release: Whirling Tides Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Clap hands → Ram
Description: Either by using existing water or expelling it through the user's body, a sea of water is created with a powerful current which carries great whirlpools that form upon it. The size and velocity of this jutsu depends on the amount of chakra used.

Narrator: Numerous maelstroms form and are quickly maneuvered by the currents which crash into surrounding mountains causing rockslides.

Nukenin: *Snickering*

Narrator: The two struggle to survive in the destructive jutsu as they were blinded due to the mist but felt the force of the current and heard the frightening sound of the whirling water.

Izumo: (Shouting) Kotetsu!

Kotetsu: (Shouting) Understood!

Narrator: They had decided to use their ultimate jutsu. As Kotetsu formed the proper hand seals, he is suddenly swept into one of the large vortex.

Izumo: (In thought) What happened to him-I can't hold out..

Nukenin: (In thought) One down!

Narrator: Although, he was sucked in; his will drove him into completing the seals.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Funka Jishin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earthquake Eruption Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Snake → Ram → Monkey → Bird → Boar → Monkey → Tiger → Snake
Description: By infusing chakra into the Earth; massive quakes are created in a long radius of land causing the ground to burst. Existing Earth is not necessary to use this jutsu if the user is skilled enough. The destructive power varies depending on the user's chakra.

Narrator: Convulsing land from underneath the water began to severely weaken her jutsu causing the maelstroms to diminish.

Nukenin: (In thought) How is this possible!-I've underestimated them again!

Narrator: Izumo was somehow able to delude the swirling currents but there was no sign of Kotetsu. He breathed a sigh of relief as he felt the current reduce in strength and prepared for his ace.

Izumo: (In thought) You have to still be alive to have done this partner..*sigh*

Narrator: He the breathed a sigh of relief as the nukenin stared intensively at him.

Nukenin: (In thought) I can still take them out!

Narrator: As she raced towards Izumo; he used his final jutsu.

Izumo: Fuuton: Fukusuu Uzu Tatsumaki no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Fukusuu Uzu Tatsumaki no Jutsu (Wind Release: Multiple Vortex Tornado Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Long-range
Hand seals: Rat → Hare → Snake → Horse → Ox → Dog
Description: Wind begins gathering at a high velocity creating a massive column which expands upwards and separates into several tornadoes. If used in the out in the open; this jutsu acts as a magnet in terms of attracting nearby clouds and moisture thus elevating its potency.

Narrator: Having nearly drained herself of her own chakra reserves, she then used a Suiryuudan no Jutsu as to escape from the deadly vortices. However, the force of suction rapidly drew in the dragon and her along with it.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: B-Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird
Description: This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill.

Izumo: (In thought) I think I have her!

Narrator: He then releases his jutsu to avoid depleting his chakra reserves any further and the enormous vortices began to subside. Izumo then commenced his search for her supposed remains as well as Kotetsu .

Izumo: (In thought) She's not here-I must locate Kotetsu right away!

Narrator: Izumo then used a jutsu in attempt to clear out the remaining mist.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Nagare (Wind Release: Stream)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Supplementary
Range: -
Hand seals: -
Description: By blowing air from their mouth, the user is able to change direction while in mid-air at high speeds. It can be used to conceal one 's location and movements by blowing up a dust cloud or other material from the ground, etc. It can also be used to eliminate cloudiness or impurities.

Narrator: A small stream of air is blown at the misty area due to his extremely low reserves which eventually reveals a lifeless soaked Kotetsu on the ground.

Izumo: (Shouting) Kotetsu!!!!!

Narrator: He races over to his side and attempts to resuscitate him.

Izumo: It isn’t working!

Narrator: Katsuyu is summoned and exerts herself in reviving him.

Izumo: (In thought) We lost Asuma-taichou..we can't lose you too...

Katsuyu: I've removed the water and all that is left for him to do is awake..

Izumo: But he-

Katsuyu: Should be expected to make a full recovery..though there is the possibility that he never wakes up again-

Izumo: No way..

[Setting change: Kiriagkure-Mizukage headquarters]

Kirinin: Mizukage-sama a message bird has arrived for you..

Mei: Lets hear it

Narrator: The events of the nukenin were revealed as her eyebrows arched in concern.

Mei: Locate ten of my best ANBU members along with Choujuurou and Ao immediately and inform them to meet me in my office!

Kirinin: Understood!

Narrator: A short interval of time passes and suddenly a group of men appear before her as the smoke around them quickly settles.

Ao: You called for us Mizukage-sama..

Mei: This is an emergency!-You are all ordered to conduct a full scale manhunt and assassination of this nukenin Houzuki Ame!

[Identity Insight]
Name: Houzuki Ame
***: Female
Age: 25
Weight:122
Height: 5'9
Classification: Nukenin
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Former ANBU
Nature Type:
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Narrator: She pointed towards Ame’s picture in the Bingo Book.

Mei: You’ve all already been given a book but take this one as there is no time to waste and I appoint you Ao as leader-now be off!

Choujuurou: I promise to erase her

Narrator: The young swordsman reached overhead placing a slightly shaken hand upon his double-handled sword’s guard and gripped it to which Ao caught glimpse of and proceeded to close his eyes.

Ao: (In thought) You have to mean it Choujuurou and not put up this confident front..meh-

Ao: Lets go!

Narrator: As their priorities were set, Mei’s ANBU squad, timid swordsman and masculine Oinin vanished with a poof a smoke left behind.

Note: Oinin translates to Hunter-nin.

Mei: (In thought) This nukenin is one of the most treacherous and is adept to eluding us but we’ve finally received a lead on you..

[Setting change: Near the outskirts of Tsuchi no Kuni]

Narrator: Izumo then releases the medic slug as he remained silent in a sitting position aside his partner. A few hours later he recovers from the shock but many thoughts then begin surging his mind preventing him from even closing his eyes.

Izumo: (Screaming) AHH!!!

Narrator: The scream of horror from his best friend seemed to stimulate Kotetsu's mind and it gradually woke him up.

Kotetsu: ...Iz..u.Izummo-Izumo!

Narrator: His strength regained due to the long rest and when he viewed his partner’s state he smacked his left cheek.

Kotetsu: Izumo-hang in there!

Narrator: The slap began to return the stressed Izumo back to his senses.

Kotetsu: You're finally coming to..

Izumo: You..you're awake!

Kotetsu: Yes..but you seemed to be losing yourself-

Izumo: ..Oh that...I apologize!

Kotetsu: Its fine..you don't have to tell me-

Izumo: It appears she fled the land...perhaps her infinite skills-she may have received fatal injuries though she had enough time for an escape due to the interval between our last jutsu and your near fatal experience..

Kotetsu: Is that why you had that breakdown?

Izumo: Yes and because of you as well..

Kotetsu: Me?!

To be continued...next chapter entitled "Missing"

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Hey My friend :)


Name: Houzuki Ame
***: Female
Age: 25
Weight:122
Height: 5'9
Classification: Nukenin
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Former ANBU
Nature Type:

Atlast :scorps:

I enjoyed the new episode , and I also thought , that she was an ANBU rank or better , and it says former , Also in the middle of the Chapter where Kotetsu was not awake , I expected , that he might have an Amnesia or something later , but seems to be Okay :D

Thanks for Episode +Rep :blush:
 

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And once again chakra reserves come into play :) This is what I love most about your fanfiction - it takes account of all factors :p Another job well done, I wonder if... nah, what I just thought of is probably not what you have in mind for the fanfiction :D
 

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Hey My friend :)


Name: Houzuki Ame
***: Female
Age: 25
Weight:122
Height: 5'9
Classification: Nukenin
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: Former ANBU
Nature Type:

Atlast :scorps:

I enjoyed the new episode , and I also thought , that she was an ANBU rank or better , and it says former , Also in the middle of the Chapter where Kotetsu was not awake , I expected , that he might have an Amnesia or something later , but seems to be Okay :D

Thanks for Episode +Rep :blush:
Hey, I know right-I was actually going to reveal her identity very early on but declined for reasons having to do with her clan. I’m glad you enjoyed it! Yes I suppose I couldn’t stray away too much from the obvious with her character lol That is an interesting concept-Kotetsu having amnesia xd Your welcome and I appreciate the +rep my feiend ;)

And once again chakra reserves come into play :) This is what I love most about your fanfiction - it takes account of all factors :p Another job well done, I wonder if... nah, what I just thought of is probably not what you have in mind for the fanfiction :D
Thanks my friend, I always strive for my work to make the most sense possible lol Thank you again and I’m glad you liked this chapter as well ;) Hmm...I wonder what you were thinking about xd If it Is an outcome you’d prefer-I hope I can deliver it without even knowing lol I suppose we’ll see :)

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Overall it was good, good battle, good jutsu but Izumo and Kotetsu were acting kinda gay towards the end. Which is weIRD. But anyways +rep.
Thank you for your compliment and as for the last one-I'm evil thus I will not confirm whether or not that was correct or not :p I suppose you could for the moment think Naruto and Sasuke who're not homosexual (at least not confirmed as of yet) and simply seem to possess an unbreakable bond :D
 
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You seem to have a lot of time to write FF's as you seem to post in a regular period of time, don't you? Nice chappy by the way. ;3
 

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Another Amazing Chapter; The Jutsu Insight, The Drama, & Once Again, Your Expertise In Capturing Ao & Chojūro's Distinct Personality Traits Despite Them Only Just Being Introduced - Flawless. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.
 

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Really nice and yeah it was totally a disaster for Izumo and Kotetsu. Glad they're both fine at the end of the chapter xd
Right-those two really went through something fierce this chapter xd

awsome chapter as usual good job! :D
Thank you for reading! ^.^

You seem to have a lot of time to write FF's as you seem to post in a regular period of time, don't you? Nice chappy by the way. ;3
I’ll let you in on a little secret-I’ve already written every chapter there is xd However, there is recurring editing I continue to do and recently I had to break a future chapter into two as it was too long. Well it isn’t a secret anymore. Lets just say whenever I write fanfiction I like to be prepared lol Thank you for reading :)

i quite enjoyed it it is getting really good keep up the good work plus rep
Thank you for your support ;)

Another Amazing Chapter; The Jutsu Insight, The Drama, & Once Again, Your Expertise In Capturing Ao & Chojūro's Distinct Personality Traits Despite Them Only Just Being Introduced - Flawless. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.
Finally!!! Someone said it! I wanted to know how the readers would take the brief addition of Ao/Choujuurou and I’m glad that I was able to depict them similar to the way Kishi has :D Thank you for reading/commenting and your compliments-they always mean a lot my friend! ;)


@Everyone who +repped me-thank you =DD
 

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Hey, I know right-I was actually going to reveal her identity very early on but declined for reasons having to do with her clan. I’m glad you enjoyed it! Yes I suppose I couldn’t stray away too much from the obvious with her character lol That is an interesting concept-Kotetsu having amnesia xd Your welcome and I appreciate the +rep my feiend ;)



Thanks my friend, I always strive for my work to make the most sense possible lol Thank you again and I’m glad you liked this chapter as well ;) Hmm...I wonder what you were thinking about xd If it Is an outcome you’d prefer-I hope I can deliver it without even knowing lol I suppose we’ll see :)

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Thank you for your compliment and as for the last one-I'm evil thus I will not confirm whether or not that was correct or not :p I suppose you could for the moment think Naruto and Sasuke who're not homosexual (at least not confirmed as of yet) and simply seem to possess an unbreakable bond :D

Guess we'll see later on. I don't think there's a NaruSasu chance at all(I'd hate it if it happens) Naruto invented the Sexy Technique so he's 100% for girls and SAsuke wants to revive Uchiha. I'd much prefer NAru<3Hina. :D
 

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Sure Thing, Bro. Keep Up The Great Work.
Thanks and will do ;)

Guess we'll see later on. I don't think there's a NaruSasu chance at all(I'd hate it if it happens) Naruto invented the Sexy Technique so he's 100% for girls and SAsuke wants to revive Uchiha. I'd much prefer NAru<3Hina. :D
I completely agree. My favorite character is Sasuke and I want him with Sakura in the end. Anyways, that’s what I meant-to use Naruto and Sasuke’s bond as an example for Kotetsu and Izumo ;)
 
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