The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter SIX

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 6: Strings

[Review on last chapter]
The pair head towards Kirabi's training cavern but decide to search in Kumogakure due to the village having a better chance of matching the element’s lightning characteristics

Their choice leads the pair to the next gem hidden in a cloud that surrounded the high mountains near the Raikage office

The pair head for the boat and encounter an even stronger storm than the one that faced them when they traveled to Kaminari no Kuni

They continued to waver the harsh storm and upon passing it they land back to Hi no Kuni

Unable to arrive to Kaze no Kuni before sunset the two then set up camp and the nxt day continue onto their destination

Upon arriving they begin their vast and long search throughout the desert land

Having covered most of the land and no sign of the gem they decide to rest as a sandstorm quickly strengthened

The next morning they head out to the outskirts of the village and eventually locate the gem within a twister

With the gem recovered the pair are suddenly ambushed as they exit Sunagakure

Narrator: In the next instant, the enemy in command proceeds to attack.

Suna Leader: (Shouting) Fuuton: Atsukurushii Kaze no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Atsukurushii Kaze no Jutsu (Wind Release: Sweltering Wind Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short to Long range
Hand seals: Ox → Dog
Description: The user blows chakra infused air with a temperature of over one-hundred and twenty Fahrenheit. If the wind comes into contact with the skin; an ignition will ensue.

Narrator: A stream of hot wind is blown onto the mummified-like Konoha shinobi.

Kotetsu: (Whispering) You did it again..

Izumo: (Whispering) Among the things I learned from Asuma-sensei the most important one was never let your guard down..

Suna Leader: (Shouting) Something is not right!

Kotetsu: (Whispering) That raised voice means its time-

Izumo: (Whispering) Indeed..

Narrator: Due to Izumo's cautionary act, the pair had sent out clones in place as they awaited within the double sided ravine. With their cover blown, they exited from within the ravine wall.

Suna Leader: (Shouting) You dare to fool us!

Izumo: (Shouting) You're the one who is attacking us for no apparent reason!

Suna Leader: (Shouting) Show them no mercy!!!

Kotetsu: Dame it!

Narrator: With the given command, the leader's team sent out their Kaze Shageki no Kugutsu previously taken out of its wooden cases which leapt out and released a group attack before landing onto the ground.

[Weapon Insight]
Name: Kaze Shageki no Kugutsu (Wind-Firing Puppets)
Description: These puppets are kept in long, wooden boxes worn on the wielder's back. They can disconnect their mouths from their faces via hinges and release wind from tubes built into their arms. Various substances, weapons, etc. can be placed within the puppets and combine with the wind for a more concentrated attack.

Suna Kunoichi: (Shouting) Kugutsu Fuuton: Bakuhatsu Shippuu no Jutsu!

Suna Shinobi 1: (Shouting) Kugutsu Fuuton: Bakuhatsu Shippuu no Jutsu!

Suna Shinobi 2: (Shouting) Kugutsu Fuuton: Bakuhatsu Shippuu no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Kugutsu Fuuton: Bakuhatsu Shippuu no Jutsu (Puppet Wind Release: Hurricane Explosion Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Short to Long range
Hand seals: -
Description: The puppet releases wind united with explosive tags via chakra. Once the wind has reached the intended target(s); the tags will trigger an explosion.

Narrator: As the puppeteer shinobi direct their puppets through chakra stings to begin attacking; Kotetsu shouts out a message onto Izumo.

Kotetsu: Izumo..You head for the leader!

Narrator: Surprised by his partner's lead role, he quickly shrugged it off and agreed. Izumo then used his Air Jet Technique and rapidly bounced atop the shelf-like ravine towards the leader.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Kuuki Funsha no Jutsu (Wind Release: Air Jet Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Hand seals: Dog
Description: This technique either creates or utilizes the air around the user into a sphere of air in the palm of the hand which invokes small spurts of air granting the user brief blasts that enable the user to bounce off the ground. If used by both palms this jutsu will be even more effective. The length of each spurt and speed depends on how much chakra is used.

Suna Leader: (In thought) The one who approaches me must be the leader of their two man group-

Suna Leader: (Shouting) Aim your attacks on the one below!

Narrator: Heeding their leader's words; they focused on Kotetsu as he caught a glimpse at what their jutsu entailed.

Kotetsu: (In thought) Shit-explosive tags!

Kotetsu: (Shouting) Doton: Daichi Maruyane no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Daichi Maruyane no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Defensive
Range: Short range
Hand seals: Bird → Rat → Snake
Description: The user creates a dome constructed from the earth that can protect them from external attacks.

Narrator: Earth is then quickly risen and covers Kotetsu from all openings as the wind jutsu comes into contact with the ground construct and explodes.

Suna Leader: (In thought) A Fuuton user like me and what an interesting jutsu..

Narrator: As the leader remained in thought; Izumo reached the top of the wall and then demanded answers.

Izumo: (Shouting) What is the meaning for your assault!

Suna Leader: *Snickers*

Narrator: Rather than giving an explanation as to why the ambush; he disrespectfully laughs in his face to which Izumo closed his eyes.

Izumo: How cowardice..

Narrator: Due to feeling insulted, the leader's visage of enjoyment quickly changed into an infuriated expression in reaction to Izumo's comment as he quickly pulled out a weapon attached to the hilt on his left hip. It is revealed to be a Tessen as he began to unfold the small weapon.

[Weapon Insight]
Name: Tessen (Iron Folding Fan)

Suna Leader: (Shouting) Fuuton: Dai Kaze Kizuato no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Dai Kaze Kizuato no Jutsu (Wind Release: Great Wind Scar Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: All Ranges
Hand seals: Ram → Dog
Description: Using his Tessen, an immense upward slash of wind is created and rapidly unleashed. It is able to easily tear through a target(s).

Izumo: (In thought) This jutsu is still new to me but-

Narrator: As he reached for his kunai blade; chakra infused wind is released spiraling around the blade and he then slashes upwards as the wind is launched.

Izumo: Fuuton: Kachuu Yaiba no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Kachuu Yaiba no Jutsu (Wind Release: Blade Vortices Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Long range
Hand seals: -
Description: Using chakra infused wind and several sharp lift slashes from his blade tubes of circulating air are generated; a vortex that trailed from the tip of the blade. The cores of the vortices spin at very high speed.

Izumo: Suiton: Hyoutenka Mizu no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Hyoutenka Mizu no Jutsu (Water Release: Subzero Water Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Long to short range
Hand seals: Ram → Hare
Description: The user shoots a stream of water with a temperature below zero. The water is cold enough to freeze anything it touches.

Narrator: A freezing water stream is shot and mixed with the vortices changing its temperature which then formed ice crystals within the cores. The ice formation enhanced the force of this jutsu. Smoke then settles around the grounded prison as Kotetsu proceeds to release his jutsu and pulls out his kunai blade.

Suna Kunoichi: (In thought) Does he think a bladed weapon will be sufficient to destroy our puppets?

Suna Shinobi 1: (Whispering) Here he comes-

Suna Shinobi 2: This is what I've been waiting for!

Narrator: By using a different approach against the puppeteers, Kotetsu decides to move in close range leaping onto the rigged-shelves. Izumo's ace lies within the combo using the jutsu produced by the chakra wing and a Suiton jutsu simultaneously.

Suna Leader: (In thought) I've never seen such a technique in synch!

Narrator: Both jutsu connect and each user stands their ground maintaining chakra flow.

Suna Leader: (In thought) More chakra!

Narrator: In his addition of chakra, the leader's jutsu increases in size and strength.

Izumo: (In thought) My reserves are depleting-I cannot keep this up-this is all I can do!

Narrator: A stressed Izumo commences to pour even more chakra into his wing and begins to flap creating high winds which impact his vortices jutsu; enlarging and empowering his combo. The two jutsu waver for a couple of minutes until each interloped and froze.

Kotetsu: (In thought) Izumo?!

Suna Kunoichi: (In thought) Sensei!

Suna Shinobi 1: (In thought) Sensei!

Suna Shinobi 2: (In thought) Sensei!

Suna Kunoichi: (In thought) If something happened to him!

Suna Shinobi 2: (In thought) I’ll take my revenge yet!

Suna Shinobi 1: (Shouting) You two will pay!

Narrator: Each puppet has a slender kunai slip through its mouth and hand compartments as they are all directed at Kotetsu who begins dodging the strikes.

Kotetsu: (In thought) I'm coming partner!

Narrator: He quickly summons his Conch Shell Mace as he stops moving and motions the weapon in front of himself before the puppets collided with the sturdy mace-like tool. One puppet's head shattered due to its attacking position and the others resulted in the hands crushing which began to fracture the arms.

Suna Kunoichi: (In thought) Dame!-That was his intention all along!

Suna Shinobi 2: Shit!

Narrator: Defeat drives the puppeteers towards their leader as they have no other means of attacking but Kotetsu invokes a jutsu.

Kotetsu: Doton: Tsuchi Kyuuin no Jutsu!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Tsuchi Kyuuin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Absorption Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Supplementary
Range: All ranges
Hand seals: Rat → Boar → Hare → Ram → Snake
Description: This jutsu causes a column of Earth to rise from the ground and swallow the intended target(s) to the torso level; ceasing movement and or disabling the target(s). Depending on the chakra usage will determine how many columns used.

Narrator: Earth quickly rose and consumed each Suna ninja before they had a chance to flee.

Suna Kunoichi: (In thought) Sensei...

Suna Shinobi 1: (Shouting) Dame you!

Suna Shinobi 2: (Shouting) Once we're freed!

Narrator: Kotetsu, drained from using most of his reserves staggers up the rigged wall worried about Izumo's condition.

To be Continued...next chapter entitled "Rain"

Note: Please don't hesitate to rate, comment and or rep as it is always welcomed ^.^


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hehe , I like the battle^^ Thinked about some KKG characters?

When chapter 7 gonna come out? :scorps:

Also + Rep :p
Thank you for your compliments and the +rep. Chapter 7 should be released next Tuesday xd I know a week seems a little much but there are readers who are behind thus a week actually isn't much time usually for one to catch up but its something.

I had a question about your statement "KKG characters" could you elaborate on the meaning of KKG?


Edit: @serenaandrosie: Thank you for being an awesome friend
 
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Really cool, what I like most in this fanfic is the "Jutsu/Weapon insight" with details. That's what makes you original ;)
Thank you for your compliments my friend and I like how you pointed that out. I like to make sure that everyone understands what I am writing thus where the insight is born and I do enjoy incorporating that into my work as well ^.^
 

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Thank you for your compliments and the +rep. Chapter 7 should be released next Tuesday xd I know a week seems a little much but there are readers who are behind thus a week actually isn't much time usually for one to catch up but its something.

I had a question about your statement "KKG characters" could you elaborate on the meaning of KKG?


Edit: @serenaandrosie: Thank you for being an awesome friend
you have been good friend to me as well & you are Welcome i am a follower of this Fan fic as well :)
 

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A full platoon of puppeteers, eh? Must be a special one :p I wonder if they were missing-nin or simply wanted action and decided to attack. You managed to portray a great battle here :) I cannot wait to read more
 
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Ah, I Expect No Less From You, My Friend. You Promised Me A Spectacular Chapter, And You Provided One - I Thoroughly Enjoyed The Fight Between The Sand & Konoha Shinobi, As Well As The New Jutsu You Provided; Its Amazing How You Describe Them, The Translation, Hand Signs, And Overall Synopsis Of The Technique - It's Fantastic. Definitely Looking Forward To The Next Chapter.
 
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wow awsome :) i love the battle scenes they are so well described you have alot of talent. :D
Thank you for your kind words and the battle scenes most likely have to be my most favorite part of my story. I'm pleased you feel that way ;)

i also agree with this
xd ;)

A full platoon of puppeteers, eh? Must be a special one :p I wonder if they were missing-nin or simply wanted action and decided to attack. You managed to portray a great battle here :) I cannot wait to read more
I like that you pointed out the puppeteers as I wasn't sure how my readers would take it but by your comment I can breathe a sigh of relief xd lol Yes-I left that mysterious aspect out and you'll have to wait to find out if I even reveal what the enemies were :p Thank you for your compliment and I hope the following chapter will be as enjoyable ^.^

This is awesome as always. Keep it up.
Thank you and I will :)

Ah, I Expect No Less From You, My Friend. You Promised Me A Spectacular Chapter, And You Provided One - I Thoroughly Enjoyed The Fight Between The Sand & Konoha Shinobi, As Well As The New Jutsu You Provided; Its Amazing How You Describe Them, The Translation, Hand Signs, And Overall Synopsis Of The Technique - It's Fantastic. Definitely Looking Forward To The Next Chapter.
Thanks-I thought this chapter might be up your alley xd Your words make me joyous and I’m glad that you thoroughly liked it ^.^ However, the action will toned down next chapter thus I’m sure you will be disappointed. Although, after this next chapter I think you will be thrilled! Call it a future prediction xd We’ll see I suppose...
 
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