The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter SEVEN

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 7: Rain

[Review on last chapter]
Kotetsu and Izumo are seemingly burned to death but later revealed to be clones the two sent out due to suspicion

The pair are practically forced into fighting a four man group of Suna ninja

In the end, the Konoha pair gain the upper hand as the enemies are defeated but Izumo’s condition remains unknown

Kotetsu: Izumo!

Izumo: I've exhausted my chakra reserves *panting*

Kotetsu: I'm in a similar condition *pant*

Narrator: A column of Earth then swallows the Suna leader at torso level.

Kotetsu: This should hold you all for awhile-

Suna Leader: This is unexceptable! *panting*

Narrator: Their situation is summarized and the summoned messenger falcon flies away with the given command to message Gaara. Concerned by his friend's worsened condition, he positions him behind his back and begins a gradual downward climb.

Izumo: ..Thanks *panting*

Kotetsu: *Pant* You shouldn't have pushed yourself to the brink of death!

Izumo: I didn't have a choice *pant* ..in the matter-

Kotetsu: He was that strong? *pant*

Izumo: Yes *panting*

Kotetsu: I see *pant*

Izumo: We need to lay low until we recover-

Kotetsu: I know *pant*

Izumo: (In thought) We cannot camp out in this desert-we must find grounded land!

Narrator: A Suna ninja receives the aerial message and carries it on his arm to Gaara.

Suna Ninja: Kazekage-sama..there is a message for you-

Gaara: Read it..

Narrator: The note is unwrapped and the falcon summoning pops in a poof of smoke. It is read briefly entailing the betrayal and attack carried out by his own people. Gaara closes his eyes, lowering his head slightly and nods. He then gives orders to collect the traitors and bring them before him so that he could decide their punishment.

Gaara: Begin writing this...

Narrator: An expression of gratitude for the two who exposed and caught the criminals was underway to be sent to Konoha headquarters.

Gaara: (In thought) I thought my village abolished any existing negative emotions however the rancor remained and prospered right under my nose...*great sigh*

Narrator: After letting out a sigh the young Kage closed his eyes and thought back to how he gradually changed. A couple of hours into the chilly night, Kotetsu and Izumo continued their harsh walk through the vast desert.

Izumo: You can put me down..I’ll walk the rest of the way-

Kotetsu: You sure?

Izumo: You’ve done enough for me

Kotetsu: Understood

Narrator: They then continued as the sandy landscape became rocky and the finally the outskirts of Ishigakure no Sato was in view.

Ishigakure no Sato Translation
[Hidden Stone Village]

Izumo: I suppose we’ll camp by that boulder

Kotetsu: And now I feel dead..

Narrator: He stated basically throwing himself to the ground in exhaustion from carrying his friend for a good portion of their journey.

Izumo: *Chuckling* I apologize Kotetsu

Kotetsu: Its fine *panting*

Izumo: (In thought) It feels like we’ve traveled well into the morning hours and we may oversleep as a result!

Narrator: Not knowing what to expect from the small village amidst Kaze and Tsuchi no Kuni, they begin to setup camp. It wasn’t long before Kotetsu was out cold and Izumo for the rest of the early morning hours fell in and out of sleep. As a result, Izumo was able to continue the schedule of waking up the earliest possible in order to resume their mission.

Tsuchi no Kuni Translation
[Land of Earth]

Izumo: Kotetsu!-Its time to wake up!

Kotetsu: Wha-what.. *yawning* Its still dark!..

Izumo: We need to make up for lost time-

Kotetsu: Just how long have you been up?!

Izumo: Well besides you being a deep sleeper-my sleep pattern was disrupted due to the irregular hour

Kotetsu: Hehe..I see

Izumo: You know..I've been thinking-I believe those Suna ninja attacked us out of hatred-

Kotetsu: Hatred?

Izumo: Perhaps they held old grudges towards Konoha from the past-

Kotetsu: And we received a nice cut of that hate...

Narrator: The Konoha comrades then packed up and headed out of the mainly rocky landscape for the eventual grasslands that led up to a rocky mountain range which connected the Tsuchi boarder. Due to their determined wills, they make it into Tsuchi territory well before noon. Suddenly the next steps they take leave them sinking.

Kotetsu: Water?!

Izumo: Its some sort of drowning jutsu!-

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Suiso (Water Release: Water Burial)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Short range
Hand seals: -
Description: This jutsu transforms the ground into a deep body of water. The jutsu acts like that of quicksand and is intended to suck down and drown the target(s). Struggling will advance the suction. Depending on the usage of chakra will determine the body of water's size and effectiveness.

Izumo: Don't move!

Kotetsu: Right!

Narrator: As the two attempt to stay afloat; Izumo quickly devices a plan.

Izumo: Follow my lead Kotetsu!

Kotetsu: Roger!

Izumo: Suiton: Mizuame Nabara!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Mizuame Nabara (Water Release: Water Candy Capture Field)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Hand seals: Ram → Tiger
Description: The user spits out high-viscosity chakra infused water aimed for a surface of wide scope. It is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a target(s)'s mobility.

Narrator: Chakra begins to emit out of the pair's body in order to repel the sticky jutsu as Izumo spouts chakra infused water out of his mouth and onto the body of water. This changes its fluid property into an adhesive substance. Kotetsu quickly removes his scroll unraveling it and summons his Conch Shell Mace as he then slams it onto the current.

Enemy Ninja: (Shouting) DIE!!!!!

Narrator: The two use the large weapon as a lift leaping from it onto the ground as their opponent surfaces with a twin bladed katana in hand but misses them by seconds.

Izumo: (Shouting) Why do you want us dead?!

Narrator: He asked as he released his summoning. She begins to rise up out of her sinking jutsu as chakra infused water seeps throughout her body acting as a support.

Enemy Ninja: (Shouting) Don’t play around-you’re here to assassinate me!

Kotetsu: (In thought) What?

Izumo: (Shouting) Are you attacking us because you’re a nukenin?!

Enemy Ninja: This is my territory-I've dwelled in this area for as long as I can remember without being caught and I will kill any trespassers-no way in hell will I be killed!

Izumo: Just as I thought-you have confirmed your status even though we were not assigned to assassinate you-this just came about however we will bring you in as the opportunity has risen-simply surrender yourself!

Nukenin: (Shouting) NEVER!

Narrator: She answered in an enraged tone as she lowered herself onto the ground.

Kotetsu: (Whispering) Seems like we have no choice..

Izumo: (Whispering) I suppose so..

Kotetsu: (Whispering) I'll take her on-you cover me..

Izumo: (In thought) He does have her affinity's weakness-

Izumo: (Whispering) Fine but don't underestimate her-

Kotetsu: (Whispering) I know..she looks fierce-

Izumo: I won't hesitate to join in

Kotetsu: Understood..

Kotetsu: (In thought) First the Kumo kunoichi now this sexy nukenin..I hate facing women but we’re once again obligated..

To be Continued...next chapter entitled "Fatality"

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Wow an amazing chapter, though I should've waited until I finished the previous ones, but anyway Good Job bro ^^
xd Well nevertheless I thank you for checking it out as well as for the compliments-nice ava by the way ;)

This is great series. I hope you will keep up the good work!
Thank you for checking it out so quickly and glad you liked it ^.^
 

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My eyes hurt because of studying 8 hours at school, but anyway I read it. Nice job, I always look forward to read your FF's.
 

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cool story, keep it up! ^^
Thanks and will do ^.^

My eyes hurt because of studying 8 hours at school, but anyway I read it. Nice job, I always look forward to read your FF's.
Well as your doctor I would've said to get rest before reading my fanfiction *joke* xd I thank you for reading/replying at that critical time ;)

awesome as always, keep it up.
Thank you and I will :)

Amazing. Keep it up! :) +rep
Thank you! ;)
 

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First thought I had while reading it? Gaara too boss to read for himself :D I see there are more kunoichi in the duo's adventures :p Don't disappoint us on this last or near last battle! (just joking around since as far as I remember you get nervous for no reason because you think you will disappoint us readers :) ) My prediction for coming events - battle, last gem being found, battle (not sure about the last part, also could be finding gem + battle) God, I'm too sleepy to make a proper comment xd
 

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First thought I had while reading it? Gaara too boss to read for himself :D I see there are more kunoichi in the duo's adventures :p Don't disappoint us on this last or near last battle! (just joking around since as far as I remember you get nervous for no reason because you think you will disappoint us readers :) ) My prediction for coming events - battle, last gem being found, battle (not sure about the last part, also could be finding gem + battle) God, I'm too sleepy to make a proper comment xd
I'm happy to see that someone commented about Gaara and in the manner you did-its hilarious xd (though I didn't mean to to depict Gaara coming off as the conceded type" lol) Yes-I thought lets go the female route than the usual male lol (and no this wasn't in no shape or form-I repeat to further Kotetsu's comedy-seriously). Thanks I just want to be read by everyone and that it be liked rather than disliked due to the dialogue, etc. lol Your prediction sounded somewhat comical and I liked it ;)

kotetsu really is a perv
Yes-that he is xd

nice its getting interesing keep up the Good work plus Rep
I like that my work can be deemed as interesting and thanks for the +rep ;)
 
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Not Much Fighting, As You Stated In The Previous Chapter, But It Was Still Enjoyable, Nonetheless - Looking Forward To The Eighth Release Next Week.
 

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Not Much Fighting, As You Stated In The Previous Chapter, But It Was Still Enjoyable, Nonetheless - Looking Forward To The Eighth Release Next Week.
Yeah which is why I decided to ease you into this chapter as the fighting would be pretty minuscule xd However, I will put your mind at ease once again as the next chapter is jam packed with action lets just say ^.^ I definitely cannot wait for your feedback on the following release as I know you'll <3 it! :D
 

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Aha, Can't Wait!
I'm glad that you're hyped up about it and if you only would've known about my second fanfiction called Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] :sy: That fanfic was filled with non-stop action pretty much every chapter lol Lets just say this fanfic pales in comparison to Helvetes in the action aspect xd
 

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I'm glad that you're hyped up about it and if you only would've known about my second fanfiction called Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] :sy: That fanfic was filled with non-stop action pretty much every chapter lol Lets just say this fanfic pales in comparison to Helvetes in the action aspect xd
A Fan-Fiction With Non-Stop Action? Sounds Pretty Intense, Aha. I Prefer Action And Then A Few Scenes To Cool Down And Focus On The Plot, Then Some More Action; However, I'll Be Sure To Check Out Internal Rebirth When I Have Some Time.
 

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Suiton: Mizuame Nabara! , That will be my new Fus ro dah ^^ I liked this jutsu , + a good cliffhanger , Also this battle was epic.

Sorry for late reply lol , I had been busy for few days ^^

Also + Rep
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