The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter NINE

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The Amazing Adventures of Kotetsu & Izumo

Chapter 9: Waterworld

[Review on last chapter]
An intense battle ensues

Kotetsu barely escapes a fatal blow though the nukenin still inflicts a wound

The nukenin eventually retreats in water form to nearby mountains

Izumo messages a report to the Hokage

The Konoha pair resume their search for the final gem which lies in ravine area

Note: I have an appointment tomorrow (I don't don't know what it is with Tuesdays -_-) and I doubt I'll be able to get on thus the reasoning behind this earlier release.


Narrator: The special gem began to glow a deeper green as they grew nearer.

Kotetsu: Hey I couldn't discuss this with you because of our situation back there but you came to the conclusion she was a nukenin..how?

Izumo: Everything about her pointed me in that direction and I’ve also been allowed into a bingo book meeting by Tsunade-sama-

Kotetsu: Why-aren’t those meetings only intended for ANBU and Jounin?

Izumo: I confessed my interest in becoming a Jounin to Tsunade-sama and I always wanted to get a feel of how it would be and when I attended one I was able to be a little more keen to these type of ninja-

Kotetsu: That's not fair!

Izumo: Perhaps if you did not slack off every so often and actually should more concern with your duti-

Kotetsu: Okay..Okay-no need to rub it in!

Izumo: *Chuckle*

Narrator: The pair then make their way into somewhat of a narrow ravine with high walls on each side. Upon arriving in between the vast pathway, they face the right side of the ravine as the gem begins to levitate causing the wall to begin cracking.

Izumo: Look!

Narrator: All of a suddenly, powerful flooding waves began to enter their location.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Bakusui Shouha (Water Release: Explode Water Wave)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: B-Rank
Class: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Hand seals: Snake
Description: The user spits out a great volume of water from their mouth which can potentially engulf and crush the target(s). The user can ride the wave, allowing them to move at high speed and attack. The amount of water created is proportional to the amount of chakra used.

Nukenin: (In thought) I may be taking a gamble with my life but I cannot afford to have them leak out my whereabouts...and by the look of it they seem to be treasure hunters or maybe smugglers-so either their village knows of this or continues to support members who have alliterative motives..hmm one of the many reasons why I hate these ninja villages

Izumo: I'll attempt to hold back the waves-you get the gem!

Kotetsu: Roger!

Izumo: Suiton: Suijinheki!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Suiton: Suijinheki (Water Release: Water Encampment Barrier)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: B-Rank
Class: Defensive
Range: Short-range
Hand seals: Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger
Description: This defensive technique creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth and raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user and it makes a defense without openings. It is possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change with the quantity of chakra used. Also, the field of vision is maintained even while defending, one can easily go onto the next move and the wall can be formed from a pre-existing water source as well.

Narrator: A barricade of water is blown out of Izumo's mouth onto the ground as it rises from below with immensive force.

Nukenin: Oh..

Izumo: (In thought) It must be her!-

Kotetsu: (In thought) Its almost completely cracked!

Nukenin: (In thought) Its time!

Kotetsu: (In thought) There it is!

Izumo: (In thought) She continues to remain hidden?!

Narrator: As Kotetsu reached for the intensive chocolate colored gem, the figure suddenly appeared diving downwards; crashing into him.

*Splash*

Nukenin: (In thought) Mizu Bunshin?

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Supplementary
Hand seals: Tiger
Description: This technique creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original user's power. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Narrator: She then sensed Kotetsu from behind her as he used a jutsu.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Doton: Doro Dangan (Earth Release: Mud Shot)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Offensive
Range: Mid-range
Hand seals: -
Description: The user shoots mud from their mouth at an enemy; the chakra-enhanced mud is able to trap and slow an opponent down.

Narrator: Her body dissipates just before the shot of mud was to come into contact with her. Kotetsu then quickly moved in and recovered the gem.

Kotetsu: (In thought) That jutsu of hers..

Narrator: However, the water reformed into her body and she proceeds to ambush Kotetsu from behind with her double bladed katana.

Nukenin: (In thought) A replacement!

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Body Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu, General Skill
Rank: E-rank
Class: Supplementary
Hand seals: Ram → Boar → Ox → Dog → Snake
Description: The user replaces their own body with a block of wood, etc. the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion making the enemy think the attack was successful.

Narrator: A poof of smoke ensues as a rock falls to the ground revealed to be the object used for the technique. Kotetsu appeared behind her as she began to turn her head; Izumo releases his barrier and quickly executes several hand seals initiating the Air Jet Technique on himself and his partner.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Fuuton: Kuuki Funsha no Jutsu (Wind Release: Air Jet Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Class: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Hand seals: Dog
Description: This technique either creates or utilizes the air around the user into a sphere of air in the palm of the hand which invokes small spurts of air granting the user brief blasts that enable the user to bounce off the ground. If used by both palms this jutsu will be even more effective. The length of each spurt and speed depends on how much chakra is used.

Narrator: They hastily begin bouncing out of the area and Kotetsu is able to avoid her next strike which impales the left wall side.

Nukenin: (In thought) Impossible-they make the perfect combo!

Narrator: Izumo's water barrier is then overcome by the torrent as it continued to surge into the ravine. The nukenin leaped onto the violent surface and kept track of their movement.

Izumo: She is relentless!

Kotetsu: (Whispers) I have it..

Izumo: Thank goodness-

Nukenin: (Shouting) You think I'll allow you the chance to escape?!-

Narrator: Both shinobi rebound onto the vigorous waves and what appeared to be a deep ocean. The nukenin comes into view riding the biggest wave as she stares at the two.

Izumo: (Whispers) It seems as though her chakra reserves are great-

Kotetsu: (Whispers) Yeah..her skills and reserves almost mirror that of Hoshigaki Kisame..

Narrator: Using the sea of water; she invokes thickened mist to rapidly develop.

Kotetsu: Not the dreaded Kirigakure no Jutsu again-

[Jutsu Insight]
Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type:
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Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Hand seals: -
Description: This displacement technique is a specialty of the ninja from Kirigakure where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth then goes in and out of sight at will from within the white colored realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it.

Izumo: We must not falter..

[Setting change: Konohagakure Hokage headquarters]

*Knock*

Narrator: The Hokage’s attendant opened the door enough to fit her head as she hesitantly spoke.

Shizune: Tsunade-sama..um-

Tsunade: (Shouting) Out with it!-I have so much work that its driving me insane!!!

Shizune: (Frantic shouting) I know your work is overwhelming but there is a message bird here for you!

Tsunade: (In thought) As if I’m not busy enough!-Wait Izumo?-I’ll receive it!

Shizune: Yes Tsunade-sama..

Narrator: She then motioned her arm in the Hokage’s direction as the bird flew and landed on her arm. Her eyes widened as she read the note and quickly wrote a notice to the Mizukage. As the bird was released through the open window, she then interlaced her fingers with a stern expression.

Shizune: Heeee!-I’ll leave you to your work!

Narrator: Frightened by her Kage’s facial expression, she quickly raised a cringed hand almost covering her face as she then hastily exited the office as several thoughts flashed through the stressed Tsunade.

Tsunade: (In thought) Mei will have much trouble with that nukenin and for my two-man group to run into her is the most surprising thing to happen in a while!

To be continued...next chapter entitled "Disaster"

Please don't hesitate to rate, comment and or rep as it is always welcomed ^.^


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Thanks for early release my friend :scorps:

Will Mei send some reinforcements in the upcoming episodes ?

and that Mist jutsu is the same as zabusa used against kakashi right , also that landscape seems too be unstable , I wonder how Izumo and Kotetsu will pull it off , seems to be a very challenging task + the crystal.

and thanks again + here is a little Repu for ya :blush:
 

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Excellent job, once again. It always amuses me how Tsunade can never seem to get on top of her work, whether in the Anime/Manga or Fanfictions, lol.

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pretty good ^_^
seems it is still a long way before it end :)
Thank you and that is an interesting assumption and even though I’d like to confirm whether or not you’re right I won’t xd

wow awsome
Thanks ^.^

Thanks for early release my friend :scorps:

Will Mei send some reinforcements in the upcoming episodes ?

and that Mist jutsu is the same as zabusa used against kakashi right , also that landscape seems too be unstable , I wonder how Izumo and Kotetsu will pull it off , seems to be a very challenging task + the crystal.

and thanks again + here is a little Repu for ya :blush:
Your welcome my friend. Yes it was the original hidden mist jutsu nothing more powerful or different about it lol I like your brief analyzation of this chapter ;) Yes, you will have to think how this will end as there are many possibilities :zonder: No thank you for +rep/reading ;)

That Chick is going down.
Thank you for reading an I love your posts! ;)

I totally like it, nicely done. ^^
Thank you very much :)

Excellent job, once again. It always amuses me how Tsunade can never seem to get on top of her work, whether in the Anime/Manga or Fanfictions, lol.

+Rep
Thank you, right? and I’m glad someone commented on the brief Tsunade segment xd I was beginning to think no one really felt like I captured her/Shizune thus wouldn’t even be worth mentioning but thank you for that my friend ;) Thank you for the +rep ^.^

Awesome work! Thanks for the early release!
Thank you and your welcome!

Outstanding work. :)
Thanks ^.^
 

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Your welcome my friend. Yes it was the original hidden mist jutsu nothing more powerful or different about it lol I like your brief analyzation of this chapter ;) Yes, you will have to think how this will end as there are many possibilities :zonder: No thank you for +rep/reading ;)
Also , the next episode title "Disaster" might imply some upcoming difficulties , I hope no one dies :ghehe: 0o0o0o wait , there shud be 10'th release soon?
 

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Also , the next episode title "Disaster" might imply some upcoming difficulties , I hope no one dies :ghehe: 0o0o0o wait , there shud be 10'th release soon?
Nice-I'm glad someone noticed the next chapter's title as it usually contributes to something ;) You'll have to wait till the following release for answers :D The tenth release should be next Tuesday if all goes well lol
 
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