The Akatsuki Chapters 2: Nagato's power

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Hey dudes, my second FanFic. First chapter is here. Enjoy ^^

The Akatsuki Chapters 2: Nagato’s power.

A few days pasted since the trio had decided to form the Akatsuki, but those days seemed like years. They hadn’t slept for the past three days, they had spent the days walking the streets. Not asking for jobs, but just looking out for things they could do. Things that could make their little group known. It was not till the fourth day of wondering the Hidden rain, did something happen.

Konan dropped, she had, had enough. She wanted to go home. She was wet and frozen to the bone, her nose was running and her eyes were puffy from the cold wind in her eyes. Nagato and Yahiko turned to face her, as she layed on her knees behind them. Yahiko Held out his hand to help her up, a comforting smile on his face. Nagato struggled to move as he had taken the job of carrying Konan’s Rucksack two days ago. As konan got up from the filthy, rain soaked floor, She turned to Yahiko and buried her head in his shoulder as she started to cry. “I want… To go home… I want to be dry and safe…” Yahiko patted her on the back and pulled her into a tight hug, his head turning to face Nagato. “Let’s find somewhere to stop for the night?”

“With what money? Huh?”

“Does it matter as long as it’s dry.” So the trio, Nagato with two rucksacks and Yahiko with the weeping Konan in his arms, turned on their heels and set backwards to find somewhere to sleep. After about ten minutes, They found a small hole in a warehouse. It wasn’t too big, but just big enough for Konan to slip in. So Konan Slipped through the hole and disappeared, not making a sound after the crash she made after she landed on the other side on to a crate of packed Ramen. She opened up the door for the inside, the boys quickly running into the warm Warehouse. With a place to sleep, They all got out their sleeping bags and Fell asleep on the floor.

That night Nagato couldn’t sleep. He was warm, Comfy and yet, he couldn’t sleep. He sat up in his bed and looked around. Konan and Yahiko had fallen asleep holding hands. What if they started having feelings for each other next? What if they wanted a relationship? What if they broke up and wouldn’t speak to each other after? What if they became too close and he was shut out of their lives? They worrying taughts swam around his head, when he heard a deafening bang. He Lowered himself at once, pretending to be a sleep.

The other two on the other hand, woke up. Lifting them to look at what had happened. What they saw wasn’t pretty. A group of five hidden leaf ninja had come in, two civilian girls tied up and bound to a large wooden board. One girl was short with flaming red hair, she was knocked out, blood dripping from a wound in her head. The other tall with jet black hair, she had a wound on her head, but she was wide awake and crying her eyes out, screams muffled by a gag in her mouth. The hidden leaf ninja laid the board on the floor and as one of them reach his hand down his trousers, Yahiko got up and yelled.

“No! Water style: Water dragon justu!”
And with this, Yahiko produced a large dragon made out of water from thin air. It raced towards the five ninjas, but not a single one moved. The tallest of the five stepped forward as the Dragon was just about to strike, slamming his giant fist on the floor and yelling in a deep and powerful voice. “Earth style: Rising rock pillar.” A pillar of rock started to form out of the ground, growing and growing till it touched the roof. Yahiko’s dragon just smashed into it and became no more, splattering all over the floor as a giant puddle. Another man ran forward this time, a tall man, but not like the lumbering brute that used the earth style. This man Placed his hands together, performing a load of seals, before taking in a deep breath. “Lightning style: Lightning stream jutsu.” The man let out his breath as a stream of electrical energy, zapping the water on the floor and Yahiko who was unfortunately standing in the water. As the Electric hit Yahiko and he fell to the ground, Konan got up. Her eyes full of tears, but she wasn’t the only one. Nagato remained in his bed, sobbing his eyes out. What could I do, he taught? I’m weak and a coward. Master, were you?

Konan reach into her pouch, most likely to pull out paper to attack with. But the leaf nin were too quick and the same pillar that rendered Yahiko’s dragon useless smash into her, sending her flying into the wall. Upon seeing Konan’s flying body and Yahiko withering in pain on the floor, Nagato knew what to do. He Stood up, the tears in his eyes fading. The leaf nin didn’t move or say anything, Some of them seemed to be in shock. Nagato ignored this, his head was filled with rage. All he wanted was these men to feel pain. The first Justu that came into his head, Fire style. He swiftly moved his hands, creating the correct seals for this jutsu. He then took in a deep breath and then blew it out, his breath becoming a large flaming dragon, that flew towards the leaf nin and consumed them, burning their bodies and reducing their features to ash. But they didn’t run, scream or show any signs of pain. They just all stood still, dropping to the floor one by one, dead.
Nagato wondered why they didn’t move or scream or do anything else. He approached the men, looking at their burnt bodies as his dragon flickered and died away. The big man who had done the earth style had weird eyes. It was red, with three totem seals around the pupil. Nagato turned around at once, he recognized genjutsu when he saw it and wanted to see the user. Behind were he had once slept, he saw a man. A tall man, wearing a orange mask with a spiral pattern. But before Nagato could speak or thank him. He started to fade, the spiral pattern on his mask growing. Before he disappeared into nothingness.

Yahiko stirred, so did Konan. Nagato went to help Yahiko first, but he got himself up. Clutch his ribs as they seemed to hurt most. The two went to Lift the rocks off Konan, she was out cold. Yahiko picked her up and draped her across his shoulders. Finally, they walked to the girls that were tied to the wooden board. Nagato carefully untied them both, before speaking to the awake girl. “Listen, take your friend and get somewhere safe. Okay?” She nodded to say she understood, Then the two turned and headed for the door. Yahiko turned his head to face Nagato. “Well, at least our first job was a success.”

“You call that a job?”

“Well, we kicked some ass didn’t we?”

“I did, don’t you mean.”

“Shut up.”

Just as they reached the door and was about to leave, the girl who was awake spoke for the first time. “You guys are a group of ninjas? Please, teach me and my friend Ninjutsu and take us with you. I don’t wanna get kidnapped again.”

Nagato smiled at Yahiko. Yahiko smiled at Nagato. “Look’s like the Akatsuki just started recruiting.”
 
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Daki Kibe

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Awh Konan and Yahiko :3
I really enjoyed this chapter. It focused on all the characters and the way the storyline unfolds is brilliant. I love how you've kept to the true personalities of Konan, Yahiko and Nagato. And we got to see some arse-kicking, so I'm pleased. :p
Good job! +rep for you~
 

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amaaaaazing! it's brilliant, I love it. +rep
 
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