The 6th Great Ninja War XXXIV

[Jokey]

Omfg. Waited YEARS for this.

Edit: This Roku, just proofs that you are a legend, in the RP. The way you describe what they do, it's like I am reading manga, without the use of pictures, picture's aren't even necessary in this case, because the moment I start reading, everything in my head turns into a anime episode, with the characters you created within', it's something rare that you have on your very own finger tips and mind.

AWESOMEEEEEEEE ~ Kirabi seems so badass, but I know how this'll end eventually, I'm sure that you'll make/made the next chapter awesome. Big applause Roku, and I truly respect you because you can write stuff like this.

Pssssst, ya'll don't forget Nexus.

 

[RokuNR]

Very nice fanfic!! I love reading people's hard work! Keep it up! Can't wait I read more!!

And for the people spamming: it's a fanfic... It's supposed to be long... Please read what section it's posted in before making your smartass comments... Thanks

Thank you! ^^

Haha, understandable. It's your style, do what you want with it. I only offer suggestions.

Well, welcome back to the fold of writing in that case. ^ . ^

Oh, I totally understand though, don't get me wrong. I even agree with it.

And thanks.

Nice work bro

Thanks

I am mad I didn't get a link but how can I be made at my sensei. I still have love for the FF since the first chapter. I do need to refresh from the first couple chapters since it has been so long. I still know what is going on.

I had a feeling that Rag was going to come in somewhere in the chapter but Madara caught me off guard. The staff is getting more powerful as it go along. I do have a theory, though on what will happen to Kirabi lol but I doubt you will do something like that.

Roku!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU UNGRATEFUL OLD FART!!!! :T_T: why you no link me to this, after all my love...GRANDPA WHY!!!!!! :T_T:

*will read this tomorrow*

I'm sorry guys! :T_T:

I didn't have time to link it to everyone since I had to log off early >_>'

This is awesome Roku!!!
Loved the stormy entrance of Rag and Madara^^
Great job! xD

Lol. Thank you ^^
Look out for the next chapter soon.

not only did you post another chapter but you made me the hero thanks xD

I told you that you'd be coming into the fray soon >_>'

I like how there's an appropriate balance between dialogue and narration.
Both do its job relatively well; The dialogue enhances the story's overall feel and portrays the characters well.
The narration, on the other hand, describes the physical stuff well, though I feel is a bit lacking in emotions. Feels a bit flat, and some words are used repeatedly with parallellistic intent, and is slightly verbose. Maybe the diction is the thing slightly lacking.
Overall though, I enjoyed the story, and I'm intrigued to read more :3

Thanks for the feedback. I agree, in fact. I usually distinguish the chapters with somewhat dry narration from the ones with active, engaged, and riveting narration. This was clearly one of the former, but I figure that these kinds of chapters need to be for there to be contrast and a sense of seriousness.

Meh, parallelism. I can't stand to have it not be parallel in syntax without purpose. Just my preference, I guess.

I have to read all the previous chaps before reason this >_> Damn X.X

Yes...o_o

Are you fu-... Never mind, you know, this is actually short to be a chapter (RokuNR wise, and every other decent writer on the base). If you think this is long, then you have nothing to do in this section, goodbye :| U__U



The question is, who are you? o__O



Is this irony or something? Because it is not funny at all... You can't have read much in your life I suppose U__U If you think this is long, you should have seen my latest chapter which is seven times this length, which again is normally Roku's standard too.



Just...

Anyways, great to see you back Roku! I never thought you would make it man to be honest And for your fans sake, don't let it be a year till next time And don't forget to stop by the contests when you get enough chapters too O__O ^^

Ah, Michael92. Good to have you around. Thank you ^^
And yes, well, I have about 20 chapters that I could enter into the contest right now since I haven't entered in over a year.

Omfg. Waited YEARS for this.

Edit: This Roku, just proofs that you are a legend, in the RP. The way you describe what they do, it's like I am reading manga, without the use of pictures, picture's aren't even necessary in this case, because the moment I start reading, everything in my head turns into a anime episode, with the characters you created within', it's something rare that you have on your very own finger tips and mind.

AWESOMEEEEEEEE ~ Kirabi seems so badass, but I know how this'll end eventually, I'm sure that you'll make/made the next chapter awesome. Big applause Roku, and I truly respect you because you can write stuff like this.

Pssssst, ya'll don't forget Nexus.

You're too kind, but thank you ^^ That means a lot.

And you're right...glad to see someone hadn't forgotten about Nexus so soon

 

[Kages]

Nice work RokuNR samaaaaa!

 

[Reborn]

Thank you! ^^



Oh, I totally understand though, don't get me wrong. I even agree with it.

And thanks.



Thanks





I'm sorry guys! :T_T:

I didn't have time to link it to everyone since I had to log off early >_>'



Lol. Thank you ^^
Look out for the next chapter soon.



I told you that you'd be coming into the fray soon >_>'



Thanks for the feedback. I agree, in fact. I usually distinguish the chapters with somewhat dry narration from the ones with active, engaged, and riveting narration. This was clearly one of the former, but I figure that these kinds of chapters need to be for there to be contrast and a sense of seriousness.

Meh, parallelism. I can't stand to have it not be parallel in syntax without purpose. Just my preference, I guess.



Yes...o_o



Ah, Michael92. Good to have you around. Thank you ^^
And yes, well, I have about 20 chapters that I could enter into the contest right now since I haven't entered in over a year.



You're too kind, but thank you ^^ That means a lot.

And you're right...glad to see someone hadn't forgotten about Nexus so soon

Excuses!!!

 

[Michael92]

Ah, Michael92. Good to have you around. Thank you ^^
And yes, well, I have about 20 chapters that I could enter into the contest right now since I haven't entered in over a year.

Excellent, see you next month then ^_^

 

[Scorps]

Awesome but could be more awesome if someone was in it *hint hint*


Lol but again, great job. its amazing man! ^^

 

[BazzBee]

Awesome bro awesome i was n easy read cause of the colors

 

[Daemon]

O______________________O You are still writing these?!

 

[King Cobra]

The legend has been resurrected!!!!!!!
All hail Lord Roku!!!!!!
This was amazing!!!! Simply awesome I can't even put it in all the right words. Ah this has Inspired me more! I'm going to wrote more in my fic! Link me more Lord Roku, I'm not on a lot so it might take me time to comment.

 

[Hori]

I want more more please!!!

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