Leathercandle
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-Tokyo Ghoul
-Rosario Vampire
-Naruto
-Highschool DxD (not the fan-service parts lmao)
[10:54 P.M.]
[Wednesday, September 19th]
[Unknown location]
Mystery Figure 1: ...
Mystery Figure 2: Do you, or don't you understand, punk?
The second man sneered as he said the word "punk" putting emphasis on it, bent at the waist with his chest slung forwards, looking down on a teenager dressed in a white flannel shirt and jeans. The boy had short-spiky brown hair, and a wild look of fear in his eyes. The first man was a few meters behind the second, turned slightly to the side, with a dark shadow covering his face, his shining silver hair poking out slightly from the confines of the hoodie blanketed around his head. The man who was questioning the kid suddenly produced a small knife from his sleeve and took a step towards him.
Mystery Figure 1: You answer me when I'm talking to you, punk!
The man slashed at the kid with the knife, bringing all of his weight down into the blow. Smirking slightly, the man with silver hair held his palm out toward the back of the other man's head, and produced a projectile from it that shot towards him. Before the man with the knife could reach the teenager, a bone pellet had completely pierced through his skull. Falling down to his knees, he uttered his last words,
Mystery Figure 2: Sc- *cough blood* -rew you, Carter...
Carter: I told you not to hurt him, Paul, he's a prime candidate, unlike how you were.
Carter, not even looking at the boy, tore off the Paul's shirt. At the same time, he held his palm above Paul's back, and produced a long bone spear from his hand that pierced his skin. The bone quickly began sucking up the blood of Paul, visibly shown as it slowly stained red, the color taking over the white slowly like how water fills up a cup.
Carter: Boy, you have much to learn.
Carter turned towards the boy, slouched over on his knees, stricken with terror.
Carter: It all begins here.
Carter drove the bone into the boy's back, injecting the blood into him as he did so. The boy let out a horrifying scream like a banshee, echoing into the night as tears of pain escaped his eyes. He felt the cold slick bone rubbing against his muscle and other insides, an excruciating pain accompanied it as it dove deeper and deeper into his back.
Carter: We'll meet again.
Carter turned on his heel as he stood up, ripping the bone out of his body and then snapping it off his hand, accidentally cutting his hand in the process, producing a sizable amount of blood before he sealed it up with a small bone. The blood spilled all of the the ground in that dark alleyway, but it's not like that matters...
right?
This is the pilot to my newest and first ever Fan Fiction! I want tons of feedback, and I also want constructive criticism. Do you want to see more? Let me know.
-Tokyo Ghoul
-Rosario Vampire
-Naruto
-Highschool DxD (not the fan-service parts lmao)
[10:54 P.M.]
[Wednesday, September 19th]
[Unknown location]
Mystery Figure 1: ...
Mystery Figure 2: Do you, or don't you understand, punk?
The second man sneered as he said the word "punk" putting emphasis on it, bent at the waist with his chest slung forwards, looking down on a teenager dressed in a white flannel shirt and jeans. The boy had short-spiky brown hair, and a wild look of fear in his eyes. The first man was a few meters behind the second, turned slightly to the side, with a dark shadow covering his face, his shining silver hair poking out slightly from the confines of the hoodie blanketed around his head. The man who was questioning the kid suddenly produced a small knife from his sleeve and took a step towards him.
Mystery Figure 1: You answer me when I'm talking to you, punk!
The man slashed at the kid with the knife, bringing all of his weight down into the blow. Smirking slightly, the man with silver hair held his palm out toward the back of the other man's head, and produced a projectile from it that shot towards him. Before the man with the knife could reach the teenager, a bone pellet had completely pierced through his skull. Falling down to his knees, he uttered his last words,
Mystery Figure 2: Sc- *cough blood* -rew you, Carter...
Carter: I told you not to hurt him, Paul, he's a prime candidate, unlike how you were.
Carter, not even looking at the boy, tore off the Paul's shirt. At the same time, he held his palm above Paul's back, and produced a long bone spear from his hand that pierced his skin. The bone quickly began sucking up the blood of Paul, visibly shown as it slowly stained red, the color taking over the white slowly like how water fills up a cup.
Carter: Boy, you have much to learn.
Carter turned towards the boy, slouched over on his knees, stricken with terror.
Carter: It all begins here.
Carter drove the bone into the boy's back, injecting the blood into him as he did so. The boy let out a horrifying scream like a banshee, echoing into the night as tears of pain escaped his eyes. He felt the cold slick bone rubbing against his muscle and other insides, an excruciating pain accompanied it as it dove deeper and deeper into his back.
Carter: We'll meet again.
Carter turned on his heel as he stood up, ripping the bone out of his body and then snapping it off his hand, accidentally cutting his hand in the process, producing a sizable amount of blood before he sealed it up with a small bone. The blood spilled all of the the ground in that dark alleyway, but it's not like that matters...
right?
This is the pilot to my newest and first ever Fan Fiction! I want tons of feedback, and I also want constructive criticism. Do you want to see more? Let me know.
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