[CJ] Thanks Devi!
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After some time traveling, Chōjūrō arrived at Amegakure. He took in the sights of the city and despite the rainy weather, he appreciated the similar weather to that of Kirigakure. He smiled as he passed the shops and wondered what to buy for a friend of his. He spotted a pub and decided to go in and have a drink. Whilst indulging himself to some orange juice, he met a man who perchance was interested in the art of the sword. Wanting to help a fellow swordsman like himself, Chōjūrō agreed to teach him a technique he had developed.
The next day...
Having arrived at their agreed location, Chōjūrō approaches the man, hands him a scroll, and then proceeds to speak to him.
"So take a look at this technique and give me your opinion of it. Then I would like for you to perform it on my clone so I can see if you have grasped its mechanics."
*summons a clone*
The next day...
Having arrived at their agreed location, Chōjūrō approaches the man, hands him a scroll, and then proceeds to speak to him.
"So take a look at this technique and give me your opinion of it. Then I would like for you to perform it on my clone so I can see if you have grasped its mechanics."
*summons a clone*
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
(Futsunushi no giman) - Sword God's Deception
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to their blade while gripping the handle and while still in the scabbard. The user then quickly unsheathes his sword which is imbued with a red-like glow. He then points forward with it and dashes towards his opponent's stomach area. The user intentionally misses his mark and instead, as his sword passes behind his opponent, he slashes back and releases the chakra from the sword, causing a powerful slash to the back. While the sword is still embedded into the enemies back, the user lifts the opponent up and off the floor, then slams them back on the floor again, face down. This is all done in a quick, clean motion and with his sword. The user then steps on the opponent's back and swings his sword rapidly and returns his sword back to his scabbard, ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
(Futsunushi no giman) - Sword God's Deception
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to their blade while gripping the handle and while still in the scabbard. The user then quickly unsheathes his sword which is imbued with a red-like glow. He then points forward with it and dashes towards his opponent's stomach area. The user intentionally misses his mark and instead, as his sword passes behind his opponent, he slashes back and releases the chakra from the sword, causing a powerful slash to the back. While the sword is still embedded into the enemies back, the user lifts the opponent up and off the floor, then slams them back on the floor again, face down. This is all done in a quick, clean motion and with his sword. The user then steps on the opponent's back and swings his sword rapidly and returns his sword back to his scabbard, ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
"Got it!"
Having his sword set vertically on his back, anbu style Yosamu held his left hand in the seal of confrontation, signalling focus while his right hand came up and just behind his head to grasp the handle of his infamous "Itsuki". Then, quickly unsheathing, it he dashed towards the clone in a deadly blur, removing the very earth from beneath his feet. All this while channeling his chakra through the blade giving it a crimson hue as it flew through the air with the guidance of his sword arm. His aim was at the abdomen area of the clone, or so it thought. Quickly tucking the blade lateral to his own body as he passed the clone the illusion was given of him going through the clone, but in reality he had deliberately missed hitting the target. As the dumbfounded clone stared in disbelief at its intact stomach he swung the blade with a deadly back strike to the blind spot, lodging the blade, before using the momentum of the swing to lift the clone into the air delivering a rude welcome back to the ground- face down. He then placed his right foot on the conquered being being expertly twirling the blade around his fingers, showing his swordsmanship and returned it to its scabbard on his back.
"How you like dem apples?"
"Very well done!", said Chojuro. He was pleased to have seen someone pick up his technique so well and so flawlessly. He smiled at his protege and then went on to say, "I think this will conclude the lesson for today. There's not much else I can ask of you. Just make sure you live up to your goal of becoming a legendary swordsman. If you need anything you know where to find me. (winks)"
With that said, he walks away and makes his way towards the closest coffee shop. ~_~
With that said, he walks away and makes his way towards the closest coffee shop. ~_~
After a while and getting to know his protege, Chōjūrō appears again to him. With the festivities closing in and a time of gift giving, Chōjūrō wanted to teach his friend something as a way to encourage him and help his growth. He sent a note to him and awaited his arrival. Until then, he decided he was going to take a quick nap.
Zzz
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Immediately receiving the note via his falcon,
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, Yosamu landed lightly beside his pal. A quick exhale proved his fitness as he turned to face him."Hey old friend, what can I do for ya?"
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"I wanted to teach a more simple sword technique for you to use at your own leisure", said Chōjūrō with an air of pride. He looked at his friend in the eye and smiled kindly. He handed him a scroll that was hidden in his pocket. Inside was the details of a sword technique he had developed earlier in his career. "This is called the "Kyōgiri" or the "Cross Slash". Essentially you are making a cross in the form of sword slashes. During the process, your chakra is imbued in the blade, giving it a crimson-like glow. It is more as a way to intimidate your foe but I made it that way to create what I call the "Red Dragon Sword Style". This technique is versatile in that you can perform on whatever terrain you are on whether it be on the ground or airborne. Keep in mind though that it is short range like most sword techniques so be careful with it." With that Chōjūrō stepped away from him and summoned a shadow clone and directed him to stand mid range of you. He moved out of the way and instructed his friend to demonstrate the jutsu on his clone.
"Wow, very nice details, Chōjūrō! I can't wait to actually try out it.."
Unsheathing 'Itsuki' quite ceremoniously Yosamu allowed the orange sun to lick is exquisite finish, as he always does before practicing his Iado. Well for a shinobi he didn't have a complete Iado but he was damn near it. Slowly waving the sword in he air, the dance seemed to fascinate his friend. Afterwards he lowered his body on his left knee and placed the scabbard to the side very quietly. Afterwards he got up, and the serious tone on his face suddenly disappeared.
"I'm sorry if that was weird, its just my respect for the blade that's all.. "
He then held the sword vertical to his face, the blade effectively dissecting his view coming down the middle of his face. A smirk curled up his lips as he jovially glanced at his friend's clone. Then he channeled his chakra from his stomach to his arms then onto his blade, making it glow red, just like his soft crimson eyes. With a quick motion he brought the blade up using his under strike before quickly bringing the blade downwards to release a red arc of chakra. He then spread his feet slightly apart and leaned his body weight on his right leg and swung his sword from right to left. Then, reversing the motion, he leaned his body weight on his left leg this time and swung from left to right releasing another arc of crimson chakra. This was done so quickly both arcs were not more than an inch in tandem. By he time it hit the clone it might as well have been a double attack. He then knelt on his knee to retrieve the scabbard before re-sheathing it.
"That was very useful, Chōjūrō, really thanks."
Seeing such a splendid way of honoring his blade, Chōjūrō then went on to tell his friend, "It is rare to see people showing respect to their blade. We are often unaware that a lot of energy and soul was put into creating it. As such, we must always remember the true purpose for its creation and respect it in that regard."
Chōjūrō then smiled after being quite serious and said, "Well anyways, that is all for now. You did better than I expected and await our next encounter. Godspeed and goodluck." With those words said, Chōjūrō then turned around and walked away to who knows where.
Chōjūrō then smiled after being quite serious and said, "Well anyways, that is all for now. You did better than I expected and await our next encounter. Godspeed and goodluck." With those words said, Chōjūrō then turned around and walked away to who knows where.
After some time, and after watching his heated battle with a renowned samurai, Kakashi sent a carrier pigeon to his friend to once again teach him another technique. He felt his skill was more than enough to handle the complexity of this new one. Although he had developed a long time ago, he had yet to find another as worthy as his teacher Ian-sama. Perhaps this young one would light the way to more swordsmen in the future or perhaps not. But time is not infinite, so better to teach as much as we can while alive than when we are dead.
Kakashi quietly awaits his friends in the usual training field spot known only to them.
"The sky is unusually bright today. (Deep breath) He better get my message as this is a limited time offer."
Kakashi quietly awaits his friends in the usual training field spot known only to them.
"The sky is unusually bright today. (Deep breath) He better get my message as this is a limited time offer."
Yosamu, after a rather lazy day finally landed in the training grounds clearing. His falcon, Metra brought with her the all too familiar message from an old friend. He was delighted to see the old geezer again!
"Oof! (exhales) Oh hey there old pal! What's on the agenda?" He asked cracking his knuckles.
"Nothing much my friend. Today we will be showing you the last jutsu so far from what I call the "Red Fang Style". I don't know if you've taken noticed but most of these I've taught you make your blade turn crimson. Use this one well."
*Passes you a scroll and then a pair of swords*
"Okay nothing new from last time. Perform it for me and if you have any questions, please feel free to let me know at any time."
Edit: By the way, this move was inspired by Sword Art Online. Watch this video at 2:40ish and you'll see the move. If you ever want to get to the trouble of making the entire move, just make sure you teach it to me. Of course you are always welcome to make variations of any of the techniques I've taught you. ^^
*Passes you a scroll and then a pair of swords*
"Okay nothing new from last time. Perform it for me and if you have any questions, please feel free to let me know at any time."
(Kaminokaze no danmaku) - Divine Wind Barrage
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to the blades of two swords while gripping the handles and while still in their respective scabbards. The user then quickly unsheathes the swords which are imbued with a red-like glow. The user then bends his dominant right leg slightly and towards the back, allowing the left leg to move forward slightly. The user then points the swords in an eastward position, his right arm holding the sword parallel to his stomach and the left hand holding the sword above and parallel to his head. The user then motions his right hand back, using it as a momentum builder so that once it comes back to its eastward position it propels the user into a spinning motion, slashing the opponent about four times. While spinning, the user places the weight of the body onto the left leg, spinning on it as he continues slashing and tilting slightly as well at a sort of sideways angle. After the fourth slash, instead of another slash, the user kicks the opponent in the face in a sideways motion similar to one of the sword slashes just performed, dropping the opponent into the floor and ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to the blades of two swords while gripping the handles and while still in their respective scabbards. The user then quickly unsheathes the swords which are imbued with a red-like glow. The user then bends his dominant right leg slightly and towards the back, allowing the left leg to move forward slightly. The user then points the swords in an eastward position, his right arm holding the sword parallel to his stomach and the left hand holding the sword above and parallel to his head. The user then motions his right hand back, using it as a momentum builder so that once it comes back to its eastward position it propels the user into a spinning motion, slashing the opponent about four times. While spinning, the user places the weight of the body onto the left leg, spinning on it as he continues slashing and tilting slightly as well at a sort of sideways angle. After the fourth slash, instead of another slash, the user kicks the opponent in the face in a sideways motion similar to one of the sword slashes just performed, dropping the opponent into the floor and ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Edit: By the way, this move was inspired by Sword Art Online. Watch this video at 2:40ish and you'll see the move. If you ever want to get to the trouble of making the entire move, just make sure you teach it to me. Of course you are always welcome to make variations of any of the techniques I've taught you. ^^
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Ohmagawd, I didn't see this technique you were teaching me!
Anyway, *devours*
Your turn;
(Kumo Senshi) Spider Suit
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The spider suit, perhaps the most iconic weapon/armor of all the Spider Warriors, is actually an ability learned by said warriors when they've reached the level of matriculation with Spider Ninjutsu. By first learning how to create silk/web from their bodies the warriors are sent through extensive training to learn how to produce this webbing from all conceivable parts of the exterior of their skins. After months and months only a few end up learning this technique, the failures are sent back to ground level to start over. How the suit comes into existence is by the user focusing his chakra throughout his skin and then release a thin layer of web all over his body, the web will seem to consume him and covers his clothes with skin tight silk. The webbing is alive like, with chakra constantly pulsing through it much like the user's own skin. It is intricately woven, capable of withstanding great force and stress a well as unique color changing capabilities to help the Warrior blend in with surroundings. Depending on his taste and mood the suit may change color giving him essentially a new identity. The main abilities of the suit is the way it allows the user to produce web strings from his hands or feet by using the webbing it is made up of. These webs spawned from the suit are very special in that they are directly linked to the user's chakra and are to be used as extensions of his own chakra system, allowing moves that would otherwise require direct contact to be performed via the webbing such as the Super Added Weight Technique. Of course as soon as the web is used its replenished due to the constant chakra circulating it.
Note(s):
-Can only be activated once per battle
-Once activated it, it lasts until cancelled
- Requires users to have signed the Spider Contract
- Web/silk projections are D ranked in strength, can extend up to mid-range and don't take up one of the allotted three slots, however, it can't be used to attack the opponent in a direct manner.
Anyway, *devours*
Your turn;
(Kumo Senshi) Spider Suit
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The spider suit, perhaps the most iconic weapon/armor of all the Spider Warriors, is actually an ability learned by said warriors when they've reached the level of matriculation with Spider Ninjutsu. By first learning how to create silk/web from their bodies the warriors are sent through extensive training to learn how to produce this webbing from all conceivable parts of the exterior of their skins. After months and months only a few end up learning this technique, the failures are sent back to ground level to start over. How the suit comes into existence is by the user focusing his chakra throughout his skin and then release a thin layer of web all over his body, the web will seem to consume him and covers his clothes with skin tight silk. The webbing is alive like, with chakra constantly pulsing through it much like the user's own skin. It is intricately woven, capable of withstanding great force and stress a well as unique color changing capabilities to help the Warrior blend in with surroundings. Depending on his taste and mood the suit may change color giving him essentially a new identity. The main abilities of the suit is the way it allows the user to produce web strings from his hands or feet by using the webbing it is made up of. These webs spawned from the suit are very special in that they are directly linked to the user's chakra and are to be used as extensions of his own chakra system, allowing moves that would otherwise require direct contact to be performed via the webbing such as the Super Added Weight Technique. Of course as soon as the web is used its replenished due to the constant chakra circulating it.
Note(s):
-Can only be activated once per battle
-Once activated it, it lasts until cancelled
- Requires users to have signed the Spider Contract
- Web/silk projections are D ranked in strength, can extend up to mid-range and don't take up one of the allotted three slots, however, it can't be used to attack the opponent in a direct manner.
Oh wow I forgot too that you didn't reply >_>
Anyways, very nice technique and how you expanded on the blue jurogumo technique. Okay so the chakra-infused webbing covers your body and makes the "spiderman" suit correct? This also allows you to use webbing for various purposes but one thing that bothers me is the projections aren't a higher strength. I am talking about using them to grapple or support your weight when doing acrobatic maneuvers. Or is that what Burū jorogumo is for?
Also, can you explain this more to me please? Like what can it withstand and what could potentially disable the technique/suit?
Well in the manga/anime Kidomaru's web techniques were quite formidable, only being able to be shattered by Neji's Gentle Fist. That being said this suit is like a body armor, counting as non-elemental Ninjutsu. Following this logic, this suit can defend/withstand your entire body from free form techniques (within reason), non-elemental Taijutsu and Ninjutsu up to A rank, and elemental Ninjutsu up to B ranked (only once though). But as I said, the true S/W of the Spider Contracts' webs aren't stated in our RP.
Next, the Spider Suit is able to change color and help you blend in with your surroundings, this can make you invisible to the normal eye so long as your opponent isn't a sensor, Doujutsu user, or one of them special sensing CC people. The suit also serves as an extension of your chakra system, meaning, certain techniques that would require explicit touch to perform such as Loss of Memory Technique can be done through the webs, as long as it's connected to your body/suit.
The webs/projections are D ranked and mid ranged in an effort to balance the technique. I'm not one of those people who aim just to make their CJs OP'd and sickly unreasonable, instead, I like to promote fair play. As such this is why I've 'limited' the Spider Suit per se. But as a plus these projections do not cost a move and can be used as many times and as creatively as the time frame will allow.
The Suit can be used even more intricately to free form dodge certain techniques, because, while it's active, it counts as a legitimate technique. So for example someone fires a kunai at you, if there is say a beam or object overhead you may attach a web to it and evade. To properly use the suit you'll need to get very, very creative. Over time you'll see what I mean.
You may perform it if you like
Well in the manga/anime Kidomaru's web techniques were quite formidable, only being able to be shattered by Neji's Gentle Fist. That being said this suit is like a body armor, counting as non-elemental Ninjutsu. Following this logic, this suit can defend/withstand your entire body from free form techniques (within reason), non-elemental Taijutsu and Ninjutsu up to A rank, and elemental Ninjutsu up to B ranked (only once though). But as I said, the true S/W of the Spider Contracts' webs aren't stated in our RP.
Next, the Spider Suit is able to change color and help you blend in with your surroundings, this can make you invisible to the normal eye so long as your opponent isn't a sensor, Doujutsu user, or one of them special sensing CC people. The suit also serves as an extension of your chakra system, meaning, certain techniques that would require explicit touch to perform such as Loss of Memory Technique can be done through the webs, as long as it's connected to your body/suit.
The webs/projections are D ranked and mid ranged in an effort to balance the technique. I'm not one of those people who aim just to make their CJs OP'd and sickly unreasonable, instead, I like to promote fair play. As such this is why I've 'limited' the Spider Suit per se. But as a plus these projections do not cost a move and can be used as many times and as creatively as the time frame will allow.
The Suit can be used even more intricately to free form dodge certain techniques, because, while it's active, it counts as a legitimate technique. So for example someone fires a kunai at you, if there is say a beam or object overhead you may attach a web to it and evade. To properly use the suit you'll need to get very, very creative. Over time you'll see what I mean.
You may perform it if you like
Not at this moment. >_>
But thank you for answering my questions so far. If I have more I'll let you know and we'll keep it to this thread. ^^
I appreciate this greatly senpai.
I would like to learn this technique from you. So please tell me what you require from me.
(Kumo Ninpo: Doku Heiki)- Spider Ninja Arts: Venomous Weaponry
I would like to learn this technique from you. So please tell me what you require from me.
(Kumo Ninpo: Doku Heiki)- Spider Ninja Arts: Venomous Weaponry
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: D
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to the concept of Malice Bombs, shinobi of the Spider contract have learned to harness the powerful venom of some of the most dangerous spiders in their arsenal. The venom, once gained, is then applied to the ninjas' weapons to offer much more lethal potential beyond sharp blades and blunt edges. Unlike Malice Bombs, the venom isn't specified (neither Necrotic or Neurotic) and is a cocktail of both variants. Also, the venom isn't vaporized but is kept in liquid form but dried when placed on the weaponry. This way the venom can stay discreet and catch the opponent by surprise should he be as much as grazed by said weapon(s). However, to coat so many weapons in venom it looses its toxicity as it is 'stretched' among so many tools. Instead of grim and immediate effects like that of Malice Bombs the effects of the venomous weaponry are much more mild, but when applied in large amounts can prove their destructive power. For an opponent grazed, slashed, or stabbed by the weaponry he/she will lose feeling in said limb area affected. They will still be able to move it and have it function on their behalf, but sensation would be lost as well as the spider venom settling in their system. One graze is mild and will probably go unnoticed. Each time the opponent is afflicted with these venomous weapons it equals to a D ranked attack, and it stacks each time they get exposed to the weapons so a second occasion will turn the D ranked affliction into a C ranked affliction. Then on the next exposure it turns to a weak B ranked, then a full fledged B ranked. If the opponent manages the venom to be stacked to that of a full S ranked technique they will die as the venom builds up in the their system over time. So in total it takes sixteen strikes from a venomous weapon to kill the opponent (x16 D ranks= 1 S rank) and this can come in the form of slashes, stabs, and cuts as mentioned before, below is a small table of ranks and accompanying afflictions:
D Rank= No noticeable affliction
C Rank= Slowed reaction and cognitive actions
B Rank = Blurred vision, slightly slurred speech
A Rank= Involuntary coughing, bleeding from eyes, nose, mouth and ears
S Rank= At the end of the turn victim dies
Note(s):
- Can only be applied to weapons with blades such as kunai, swords, shurikens
- Bios with this ability must specify which type of weapon is being used as venomous, meaning one can't have venomous shurikens and a venomous sword
- Must have signed the Spider contract
Rank: D
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to the concept of Malice Bombs, shinobi of the Spider contract have learned to harness the powerful venom of some of the most dangerous spiders in their arsenal. The venom, once gained, is then applied to the ninjas' weapons to offer much more lethal potential beyond sharp blades and blunt edges. Unlike Malice Bombs, the venom isn't specified (neither Necrotic or Neurotic) and is a cocktail of both variants. Also, the venom isn't vaporized but is kept in liquid form but dried when placed on the weaponry. This way the venom can stay discreet and catch the opponent by surprise should he be as much as grazed by said weapon(s). However, to coat so many weapons in venom it looses its toxicity as it is 'stretched' among so many tools. Instead of grim and immediate effects like that of Malice Bombs the effects of the venomous weaponry are much more mild, but when applied in large amounts can prove their destructive power. For an opponent grazed, slashed, or stabbed by the weaponry he/she will lose feeling in said limb area affected. They will still be able to move it and have it function on their behalf, but sensation would be lost as well as the spider venom settling in their system. One graze is mild and will probably go unnoticed. Each time the opponent is afflicted with these venomous weapons it equals to a D ranked attack, and it stacks each time they get exposed to the weapons so a second occasion will turn the D ranked affliction into a C ranked affliction. Then on the next exposure it turns to a weak B ranked, then a full fledged B ranked. If the opponent manages the venom to be stacked to that of a full S ranked technique they will die as the venom builds up in the their system over time. So in total it takes sixteen strikes from a venomous weapon to kill the opponent (x16 D ranks= 1 S rank) and this can come in the form of slashes, stabs, and cuts as mentioned before, below is a small table of ranks and accompanying afflictions:
D Rank= No noticeable affliction
C Rank= Slowed reaction and cognitive actions
B Rank = Blurred vision, slightly slurred speech
A Rank= Involuntary coughing, bleeding from eyes, nose, mouth and ears
S Rank= At the end of the turn victim dies
Note(s):
- Can only be applied to weapons with blades such as kunai, swords, shurikens
- Bios with this ability must specify which type of weapon is being used as venomous, meaning one can't have venomous shurikens and a venomous sword
- Must have signed the Spider contract