[CJ] Testing out a Prototype with Zaph

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Wait, what?

Ok Yusei, I'll post the technique here and you give me an analysis.

(Genjutsu: Midare)- Illusionary Technique: Disturbia
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will and cast an illusion on the opponent's mind that sees a single figure appearing on the terrain- this figure can be anyone and anywhere the user chooses but it can't be made within 5 meters of the opponent. This figure will have a distant look at everything, as if looking through you and won't appear to be concerned with the world around them. They can't move, can't talk, not even think- they are essentially living statues. If left ignored by the opponent after one turn this figure multiplies into two figures with the second one being set anywhere the user pleases, even beside the opponent which is unlike the first figure. After the second turn these two multiply into 8 figures, and after the third turn 16 and so on until the entire field is completely filled and the opponent has nowhere to move. In reality, these multiplying statues are actually explosive kunai that the user throws at strategic locations- of course the opponent wouldn't actually see when the user throws these kunai. The more turns that pass the user throws more around the field until it is riddled with explosives. Then, with a single hand seal the user will detonate all the tags he had set. The aim is to get as many as close to the opponent as possible to ensure death before the illusion is broken.
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- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown
 

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I really like this tech Zaph , nice work.Basically the User puts his opponent under an illusion in which they see a dark figure on the field the dark figure is just there really it doesn't interact at all just staring at the target.Being that it doesn't do anything there is a high chance that no one bothers countering it at first.And that's when the magic truly happens after a turn the figure doubles and the new figure can be set anywhere on the field and on the third turn (if still not countered) become 8 figures on the field appearing wherever the user wants and so on.However these figures in reality are explosive kunai set up where these figure lie and as such don't move which is why the figure themselves dont move.Anyways when the user decided to he can have these figures/explosive kunai explode.

Question-

Is the gen set up after the user throws the first kunai , as he is throwing the first , or before he actually throws the first kunia

I believe the reason they dont move is because you lodge the kunia into the ground so is it safe to assume if you threw it towards the opponent the figure would move or is it beyond the scope of the technique to make them move at all.
 

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I really like this tech Zaph , nice work.Basically the User puts his opponent under an illusion in which they see a dark figure on the field the dark figure is just there really it doesn't interact at all just staring at the target.Being that it doesn't do anything there is a high chance that no one bothers countering it at first.And that's when the magic truly happens after a turn the figure doubles and the new figure can be set anywhere on the field and on the third turn (if still not countered) become 8 figures on the field appearing wherever the user wants and so on.However these figures in reality are explosive kunai set up where these figure lie and as such don't move which is why the figure themselves dont move.Anyways when the user decided to he can have these figures/explosive kunai explode.

Question-

Is the gen set up after the user throws the first kunai , as he is throwing the first , or before he actually throws the first kunia

I believe the reason they dont move is because you lodge the kunia into the ground so is it safe to assume if you threw it towards the opponent the figure would move or is it beyond the scope of the technique to make them move at all.
For the question, the kunais are thrown after/as the Genjutsu has been set in motion, because each figure is a kunai basically. And yes, the technique doesn't allow these figure to move at all. So that logically means the kunai would have to be thrown into the ground and not flung through the air.
 

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Alright, the way the technique works is similar to that of the FTG concept of having lots of marked kunais on the battle ground. This one however uses the genjutsu to mask the real kunai with the explosive tags. The non moving object is simply to confuse and distract the enemy while you keep placing more and more explosive tags each which I assume is done by double the amount the of each kunai already placed.

My question is how you make it to be, lets say I throw one in the first turn, but i then throw another at a different location. The genjutsu would mask this as a statue as well or i wont?
 

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Alright, the way the technique works is similar to that of the FTG concept of having lots of marked kunais on the battle ground. This one however uses the genjutsu to mask the real kunai with the explosive tags. The non moving object is simply to confuse and distract the enemy while you keep placing more and more explosive tags each which I assume is done by double the amount the of each kunai already placed.

My question is how you make it to be, lets say I throw one in the first turn, but i then throw another at a different location. The genjutsu would mask this as a statue as well or i wont?
Yes, the explosive kunai you place will be masked as figures inside the Genjutsu. Although I just realised a mistake I made, it should have been;

Damage: (+10) per kunai placed. Instead damage says N/A :/ How did I miss that?
 

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lol ok

(Sukai doragon no hasai kiba)Sky Dragon's Crushing Claw
Typeffensive
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra:20(-per turn)
Damage:40
Description:The user will perform 2 seals,after performing them the user will clap there hands together gathering chakra into there hands.Using chakra manipulation the user will coat there finger nails with short,sharp spinning wind.There user will then run up the do a uppercut having the wind drill into the enemy.There wind around the fingers for about 2 turn

~Last 2 turn if continued~
~No jutsu can be used with hands while in effect~

(Sukai doragon no tsubasa surasshu)Wing Slash Of The Sky Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank:A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will grasp there hands together,in a prayer form.The user will begin gathering chakra to the arms,they will then manipulate there chakra to create to long wind blades extending from each arm.After to which the user using chakra manipulating will propel them self foward at great speeds and slash along the torso of the opponent,leaving a X cross there chest about 2 inches deep causing mild bleeding.

~Can ony be used 3 times per battle~
~Cannot use another hand required jutsu while in effect~

Here are my two for you
 

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lol ok

(Sukai doragon no hasai kiba)Sky Dragon's Crushing Claw
Typeffensive
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra:20(-per turn)
Damage:40
Description:The user will perform 2 seals,after performing them the user will clap there hands together gathering chakra into there hands.Using chakra manipulation the user will coat there finger nails with short,sharp spinning wind.There user will then run up the do a uppercut having the wind drill into the enemy.There wind around the fingers for about 2 turn

~Last 2 turn if continued~
~No jutsu can be used with hands while in effect~

(Sukai doragon no tsubasa surasshu)Wing Slash Of The Sky Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank:A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will grasp there hands together,in a prayer form.The user will begin gathering chakra to the arms,they will then manipulate there chakra to create to long wind blades extending from each arm.After to which the user using chakra manipulating will propel them self foward at great speeds and slash along the torso of the opponent,leaving a X cross there chest about 2 inches deep causing mild bleeding.

~Can ony be used 3 times per battle~
~Cannot use another hand required jutsu while in effect~

Here are my two for you
Pretty Straight forward no questions. Thanks Ian ^^
 
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