[Adventure] Tenseness

[Waindo]

This tenseness is throbbing,
Across my arid mind.
Screw after screw it slowly unbinds,
Loosens and unwinds.

A screeching noise grinds my sense,
Chews it out to it's end.
And suddenly there's no sound;
Only muteness - long and dead.

But than it screams at my worried ears
And upon my tired soul;
My unreachable hands full of hope,
Now reach out towards their goal.

But ponderous is heart's solitude,
In this world of superficial growth.

Yet again the tenseness loosens,
All the screws in my thoughts;
Is there any screwdriver out there,
That could be able to cope?​

 

[Urda]

Only muteness - long and dead.

I think you should have said, "Only muteness - deafness and unaccompanied"

 

[Waindo]

I think you should have said, "Only muteness - deafness and unaccompanied"

Well I wrote what I meant, but thx for the suggestion though.
Hope you enjoyed the read.

 

[Starkk]

Whoah...is there any song/poem you wrote that isn't fantastic?
Mindblowing song man, keep up the good work!

 

[Waindo]

Thanx a lot.