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whitefox
Chapter 1: the new beginning
Some people see this as a very bad thing, and that something is the end of the world, but to be honest that was the best thing that could ever happen to this planet. I know what you are thinking how this could be true the end of the world is bad that means we will all be dead. Wrong the end of the world isn’t exactly that in my mind. The end of the world was the start of anarchy of this world and the reason that is good is because there are no rules, only the guide lines set by whoever your leader is but you choice if you follow them or not. I on the other hand have my own guide lines that no one but me follows, or at least that’s what I believe anyways. If that isn’t true then that means that there are other people with my views, and I need to find those people cause in a world with no rules there are sure a lot of rules.
It was something that wasn’t exactly beautiful. There was a lot of fighting a lot of politics and well I lot of drugs, alcohol, and a lot of other things that I really don’t want to list. Basically it was I bunch of well anarchy. I’ll try to go back as far as I can in my memory to try and explain what this epic story is about. It started around September of 3007 on a very actually pretty cold day to be honest. The walls of that hospital where covered in blood when I awoke from my coma. It turned-out that I had been in a coma for about 6 years which means I missed about half my teen years. As I walked down the hall though I started to get a felling of something awaking within the hospital. So I tried to find the closest exit I could find. Well the thing about that is all the exits seemed to be blocked and/ or locked so I had one option and that was to try and radio in someone. So I started down the creaky stairs to go to the security office. As I was walking down the stair case though I started to get that same felling as before, The felling of something awakening inside the hospital. The problem with it this time is that it felt a little worse like it was calling out to me trying to get my attention trying to get me to keep going down into the hospital. As a well trained military man I had no fear and I followed it.
The next thing that I remember is waking up in the security office surrounded by three other people. One was a very tall man that had arms the size of a small bolder. He had short hair with a face full of stubble. The only name that I could make out at this time for him was caption. One of the other ones was a very nicely sized woman who had long red hair tied in a pony tail she had no fear apparently of any kind from the way she was screaming at caption. The last was a smaller man that had black hair that ran down one side of his face. He was what appeared to me as asleep when I saw him so I didn’t know what to expect from him when he awoke. The first person that noticed me was the girl she looked down and chuckled toured her caption. “So your finally awake I see after that nasty spill down the stairs that you had I’m surprised your still alive son.” The caption laughed after he made his joke toured me. All I could do was ask him a simple question where was I. he looked at me and smiled you’re in the finest hospital in okra. I looked at him puzzled “okra where in the U.S. is that?” the man then looked at me and smiled. “ok look her son are you saying you haven’t heard about all the wars that have been fought and how the whole planet is in a state or well to be honest anarchy?” the caption replied. I looked at him and nodded. “Well then caption we have to get him up to speed on things won’t we.” The man that appeared to be asleep said as he was getting up out of his corner. He walked over to me and patted me on the should as if I was some kind of 2nd or 3rd grade child. I looked at him with piercing eyes because he entered my bounders un-wanted I didn’t know why I was being like this toward him but I didn’t like him for some reason and it just keep sticking out like a sore thumb. After awhile went by and they caught me up to speed about all the major things that I should know. “So what you’re saying is that I woke up to a world with no rules? That my whole life of trying to get somewhere in school is wasted?” I started to want to stand up and scream but something inside me just couldn’t do it in front of these strangers. “Well forget all of that crap.” the caption said as he started to pick me up from the ground, “my name is chuck but everyone calls me caption because I’m an anarchy leader and that’s just how it is.” The girl then step forward “and my name is Liz so don’t forget kay.” She kind of perched up a bit when she looked at me as if she was trying to move her eyes right threw my soul. “And don’t make fun of my name but I’m Clyde.” “The man that I hated at the moment for no reason was named Clyde” I thought in my head as he tried to shake my hand. I shook his hand just to not cause conflict between him and me in case he might not be so bad later.
“Just as I thought” the caption said as he stood up out of the tan painted chair. Liz looked up at him, because he stood a good 6’ 5”. What do you mean what is as you thought?” Liz said while she had an unnerved look on her face. Clyde was just standing and smirking to himself as if he was daydreaming. “What is going on anyways like why are you three here?” I said out of curiosity. All that happened after that was kind of like an action move the caption did his little hand signal and the other two followed him like little well trained lap dogs. Of course since I barely knew where I was I followed as well. We ended up coming to a small door that was in the lower levels of the hospital. The door had been blocked off from this side as if someone entered it from the outside and locked it so no one could follow. The caption then did another hand signal and Liz and Clyde went and opened the door. They lifted the poll off of the door and the caption kicked it in within just an instant they were already out the door and had it secure and clear. I followed them out. They started to rush up the bank and to the next building. It was as if they had no time to stop and take a breath or even to take a drink or even talk they just were trying their best to get somewhere. Unsure of what I was getting into I still followed because curiosity just got the best of me and when I say it got the best it got the best. I walked right over a crack in the ground unthinkingly innocent right? Wrong; it was not just any crack underneath was molting lave and well I just woke up from a coma I was still a bit unstable and tripped and of course my arm went in it was only for a split second and I still had my arm and it still worked but of course at this point the pain was almost unbearable. The only thing that I didn’t like was now I felt as if I just let the team down that I wasn’t even a part of yet. I tried to get up and act as if it didn’t hurt at all but who was I kidding I just got my arm stuck in molting lava. Liz was the first one to me. “Crap we might have to cut that arm off and I’m not playing.” She said with her breath coming out of her mouth as if she hadn’t breath within the whole time we were running. Caption showed up next and was just laughing at me. “Well just so you know you’re the worlds most unworthy for what just happened to you.” The caption said with a serious face. I looked at him to try to get him to explain a little more on the subject.
“Look at the hole you just fell into” the caption pointed at the hole as he said it. I looked and didn’t see anything under the ground nothing in the whole when just moments before I saw lava and I knew that I saw it to. I didn’t understand what had happened at all. The only thing that I could do was look at the hole in the ground. “Wait” Liz said “does that mean that he has it?” she looked at me as if I was abnormal somehow. She picked up my right arm and lifted what was left of my sleeve. What we saw after that was one of those things you only see in a movie my arm was set on fire underneath my shirt sleeve I tried to put it out but it wouldn’t. I started to panic but I just couldn’t because it didn’t hurt I had no burns that’s when I looked at the caption and had to ask him what was happening to me. He looked at me and told me of a few people that survived the sting of the mystic lava or better non as myla. Myla was special lava mix that only 3 other people besides myself that had been able to survive the sting. “Well what does it do to the person then?” the caption said no more he raised up his gun at me. Liz looked at the caption. “What the! What are you doing caption!” He only started laughing and said one simple sentence “not human anymore.” He then pulled the trigger and as the bullet started darting to my head. I noticed it just in time and turned just in time to dodge it. I then held my hand out as if to stop it and fire flew out of it as if I had the power to control fire. “What the hell was that?” I yelled as Clyde and Liz just looked at the captions remaining ashes. They could do or say nothing all that happened that day started to shut Liz down. “Liz its ok we can take him to the colony” Clyde said while staring right at me. After a short break for Liz they started leading the way to the colony. They said that it was only a few days away I just looked at them in surprise for I didn’t know what the days were like in this environment. I mean I had only been awake for two hours or so and well I had already been scared since less, knocked out, fell into this mysterious lava looking stuff, and well killed one of the only men that I knew to know what this lava crap was.
“Well you two I have a few questions.” I said as we were walking toward the mountains. Liz just tilted her head toward me, and clide said nothing as he just was kicking rocks and looking into the sky. “well what is this place that you are takeing me to?” liz then took a deep breath and tride to explain, “well it’s a place that we know were is at but have never been there before the caption always talked about it and said that he would like to go kill all the weirdos that lived there. He almost went crazy once with anger and started to go there. We stopped him luckily but we almost didn’t we were only 30 minutes to the location of the fortrase. Actually to be honest this is where we just came from we were finally leaving to go back to our home town.” “Oh really I’m sorry I didn’t mean for you to back track.” Clyde then looked at me and Liz talking and started to run. So of course in an attempt to not get separated Liz and I started to run as well. Clyde finally started to slow down until he eventually stopped. “What was I that about!” I said as I approached him. “Well I was trying to see something and it got away but it did have a very good resting place before it left.” Clyde said as he was trying to calm his breathing. “Well what made it so good as any other place?” “Well if you would take the time to look and not to ask so many damn questions you would be able to see for yourself!” Clyde said in a very annoyed voice. I looked up at the small hut looking building and so some symbol imbedded into it. It was some kind of cult looking symbol. Liz started laughing and just flopped down on the ground. “What is it? What’s so funny?” I said because I honestly didn’t understand. She then stood up and pushed Clyde toward the hut. Clyde opened the door and walked in. she followed and I ran up to the door and they weren’t there anymore. I didn’t know if I should enter or not but I had to stay with my group I didn’t know were anything was or where I could go to be safe to wait on them. So I walked into the hut and closed the door the next thing that I knew I heard two familiar voices. They were saying wake up we’re here.
whitefox
Chapter 1: the new beginning
Some people see this as a very bad thing, and that something is the end of the world, but to be honest that was the best thing that could ever happen to this planet. I know what you are thinking how this could be true the end of the world is bad that means we will all be dead. Wrong the end of the world isn’t exactly that in my mind. The end of the world was the start of anarchy of this world and the reason that is good is because there are no rules, only the guide lines set by whoever your leader is but you choice if you follow them or not. I on the other hand have my own guide lines that no one but me follows, or at least that’s what I believe anyways. If that isn’t true then that means that there are other people with my views, and I need to find those people cause in a world with no rules there are sure a lot of rules.
It was something that wasn’t exactly beautiful. There was a lot of fighting a lot of politics and well I lot of drugs, alcohol, and a lot of other things that I really don’t want to list. Basically it was I bunch of well anarchy. I’ll try to go back as far as I can in my memory to try and explain what this epic story is about. It started around September of 3007 on a very actually pretty cold day to be honest. The walls of that hospital where covered in blood when I awoke from my coma. It turned-out that I had been in a coma for about 6 years which means I missed about half my teen years. As I walked down the hall though I started to get a felling of something awaking within the hospital. So I tried to find the closest exit I could find. Well the thing about that is all the exits seemed to be blocked and/ or locked so I had one option and that was to try and radio in someone. So I started down the creaky stairs to go to the security office. As I was walking down the stair case though I started to get that same felling as before, The felling of something awakening inside the hospital. The problem with it this time is that it felt a little worse like it was calling out to me trying to get my attention trying to get me to keep going down into the hospital. As a well trained military man I had no fear and I followed it.
The next thing that I remember is waking up in the security office surrounded by three other people. One was a very tall man that had arms the size of a small bolder. He had short hair with a face full of stubble. The only name that I could make out at this time for him was caption. One of the other ones was a very nicely sized woman who had long red hair tied in a pony tail she had no fear apparently of any kind from the way she was screaming at caption. The last was a smaller man that had black hair that ran down one side of his face. He was what appeared to me as asleep when I saw him so I didn’t know what to expect from him when he awoke. The first person that noticed me was the girl she looked down and chuckled toured her caption. “So your finally awake I see after that nasty spill down the stairs that you had I’m surprised your still alive son.” The caption laughed after he made his joke toured me. All I could do was ask him a simple question where was I. he looked at me and smiled you’re in the finest hospital in okra. I looked at him puzzled “okra where in the U.S. is that?” the man then looked at me and smiled. “ok look her son are you saying you haven’t heard about all the wars that have been fought and how the whole planet is in a state or well to be honest anarchy?” the caption replied. I looked at him and nodded. “Well then caption we have to get him up to speed on things won’t we.” The man that appeared to be asleep said as he was getting up out of his corner. He walked over to me and patted me on the should as if I was some kind of 2nd or 3rd grade child. I looked at him with piercing eyes because he entered my bounders un-wanted I didn’t know why I was being like this toward him but I didn’t like him for some reason and it just keep sticking out like a sore thumb. After awhile went by and they caught me up to speed about all the major things that I should know. “So what you’re saying is that I woke up to a world with no rules? That my whole life of trying to get somewhere in school is wasted?” I started to want to stand up and scream but something inside me just couldn’t do it in front of these strangers. “Well forget all of that crap.” the caption said as he started to pick me up from the ground, “my name is chuck but everyone calls me caption because I’m an anarchy leader and that’s just how it is.” The girl then step forward “and my name is Liz so don’t forget kay.” She kind of perched up a bit when she looked at me as if she was trying to move her eyes right threw my soul. “And don’t make fun of my name but I’m Clyde.” “The man that I hated at the moment for no reason was named Clyde” I thought in my head as he tried to shake my hand. I shook his hand just to not cause conflict between him and me in case he might not be so bad later.
“Just as I thought” the caption said as he stood up out of the tan painted chair. Liz looked up at him, because he stood a good 6’ 5”. What do you mean what is as you thought?” Liz said while she had an unnerved look on her face. Clyde was just standing and smirking to himself as if he was daydreaming. “What is going on anyways like why are you three here?” I said out of curiosity. All that happened after that was kind of like an action move the caption did his little hand signal and the other two followed him like little well trained lap dogs. Of course since I barely knew where I was I followed as well. We ended up coming to a small door that was in the lower levels of the hospital. The door had been blocked off from this side as if someone entered it from the outside and locked it so no one could follow. The caption then did another hand signal and Liz and Clyde went and opened the door. They lifted the poll off of the door and the caption kicked it in within just an instant they were already out the door and had it secure and clear. I followed them out. They started to rush up the bank and to the next building. It was as if they had no time to stop and take a breath or even to take a drink or even talk they just were trying their best to get somewhere. Unsure of what I was getting into I still followed because curiosity just got the best of me and when I say it got the best it got the best. I walked right over a crack in the ground unthinkingly innocent right? Wrong; it was not just any crack underneath was molting lave and well I just woke up from a coma I was still a bit unstable and tripped and of course my arm went in it was only for a split second and I still had my arm and it still worked but of course at this point the pain was almost unbearable. The only thing that I didn’t like was now I felt as if I just let the team down that I wasn’t even a part of yet. I tried to get up and act as if it didn’t hurt at all but who was I kidding I just got my arm stuck in molting lava. Liz was the first one to me. “Crap we might have to cut that arm off and I’m not playing.” She said with her breath coming out of her mouth as if she hadn’t breath within the whole time we were running. Caption showed up next and was just laughing at me. “Well just so you know you’re the worlds most unworthy for what just happened to you.” The caption said with a serious face. I looked at him to try to get him to explain a little more on the subject.
“Look at the hole you just fell into” the caption pointed at the hole as he said it. I looked and didn’t see anything under the ground nothing in the whole when just moments before I saw lava and I knew that I saw it to. I didn’t understand what had happened at all. The only thing that I could do was look at the hole in the ground. “Wait” Liz said “does that mean that he has it?” she looked at me as if I was abnormal somehow. She picked up my right arm and lifted what was left of my sleeve. What we saw after that was one of those things you only see in a movie my arm was set on fire underneath my shirt sleeve I tried to put it out but it wouldn’t. I started to panic but I just couldn’t because it didn’t hurt I had no burns that’s when I looked at the caption and had to ask him what was happening to me. He looked at me and told me of a few people that survived the sting of the mystic lava or better non as myla. Myla was special lava mix that only 3 other people besides myself that had been able to survive the sting. “Well what does it do to the person then?” the caption said no more he raised up his gun at me. Liz looked at the caption. “What the! What are you doing caption!” He only started laughing and said one simple sentence “not human anymore.” He then pulled the trigger and as the bullet started darting to my head. I noticed it just in time and turned just in time to dodge it. I then held my hand out as if to stop it and fire flew out of it as if I had the power to control fire. “What the hell was that?” I yelled as Clyde and Liz just looked at the captions remaining ashes. They could do or say nothing all that happened that day started to shut Liz down. “Liz its ok we can take him to the colony” Clyde said while staring right at me. After a short break for Liz they started leading the way to the colony. They said that it was only a few days away I just looked at them in surprise for I didn’t know what the days were like in this environment. I mean I had only been awake for two hours or so and well I had already been scared since less, knocked out, fell into this mysterious lava looking stuff, and well killed one of the only men that I knew to know what this lava crap was.
“Well you two I have a few questions.” I said as we were walking toward the mountains. Liz just tilted her head toward me, and clide said nothing as he just was kicking rocks and looking into the sky. “well what is this place that you are takeing me to?” liz then took a deep breath and tride to explain, “well it’s a place that we know were is at but have never been there before the caption always talked about it and said that he would like to go kill all the weirdos that lived there. He almost went crazy once with anger and started to go there. We stopped him luckily but we almost didn’t we were only 30 minutes to the location of the fortrase. Actually to be honest this is where we just came from we were finally leaving to go back to our home town.” “Oh really I’m sorry I didn’t mean for you to back track.” Clyde then looked at me and Liz talking and started to run. So of course in an attempt to not get separated Liz and I started to run as well. Clyde finally started to slow down until he eventually stopped. “What was I that about!” I said as I approached him. “Well I was trying to see something and it got away but it did have a very good resting place before it left.” Clyde said as he was trying to calm his breathing. “Well what made it so good as any other place?” “Well if you would take the time to look and not to ask so many damn questions you would be able to see for yourself!” Clyde said in a very annoyed voice. I looked up at the small hut looking building and so some symbol imbedded into it. It was some kind of cult looking symbol. Liz started laughing and just flopped down on the ground. “What is it? What’s so funny?” I said because I honestly didn’t understand. She then stood up and pushed Clyde toward the hut. Clyde opened the door and walked in. she followed and I ran up to the door and they weren’t there anymore. I didn’t know if I should enter or not but I had to stay with my group I didn’t know were anything was or where I could go to be safe to wait on them. So I walked into the hut and closed the door the next thing that I knew I heard two familiar voices. They were saying wake up we’re here.
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