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Ok, here goes my first ever submission of a character.
Hope you guys like it.:ghehe:
Took a lot of hard work
Hope you guys like it.:ghehe:
Took a lot of hard work
Name: Teion Shiin, 低音 死韻
Clan: Shiin 死韻
Previous Village: Otogakure, Village Hidden by Sound
Current: Konohagakure, Hidden Leaf Village, 木ノ葉隠れの里
Age: 14
Clan: Shiin 死韻
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Previous Village: Otogakure, Village Hidden by Sound
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, 音隠れの里
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Current: Konohagakure, Hidden Leaf Village, 木ノ葉隠れの里
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Age: 14
Appearance: Cold Blue/grey eyes. Short white spiked un-styled hair. About 69” tall (5’ 7.5”) always wearing headphones, unless in battle. Three purple bands tattooed around right arm, but only visible while sweating. Usually wearing tight black form fitting shirt without sleeves, black pants, and a red scarf. Scars are seen along his arms from various beatings and torture. Two scars starting by the outside corner of eyes going to a 45 degree angle to about an inch above the corner of mouth, and one starting in the middle of forehead, centered above right eye, down to jaw bone.
Personality: Stoic and mostly quiet, seems cold. Mostly listens to his music and stays to himself. Has a hard time fully making friend for fear of losing them. Loves life and wants to preserve it, even at the coast of his own or an enemy. Has a good sense of humor but rarely shows it. Spend most of his time around animals singing to them.
Background:
Born in Otogakure , Teion was born into the Shiin clan and was taught the various sound techniques. He never really felt right in the clan, most of whom were very spiteful and mean. He, on the other hand was more kind hearted and gentle. His parents were not.
He found himself beaten and punished for showing kindness, being told “ Kindness and mercy were for the weak”. In his heart he knew this to wrong, but adhered to their rules and ways. Eventually he too, became more and more cold inside.
His training was brutal and dark, being beaten and made to kill innocent people during missions, one such he had to help slaughter a neighboring village due to a gold mine, he didn’t know or care, it just made him feel more and more numb.
The only solace he found was in music. A style called dubstep was the only that calmed him and kept him from going insane. He eventually began to always carry a music player and constantly wear headphones.
One day his parents finally pushed him beyond his breaking point. He came home from another slaughter mission to find his mother and father at the table talking to one of his best friends. This was a huge surprise to him, because friends were seen as a weakness to them.
They all seemed to be joking and having fun over a nice lunch and tea. His father got up and greeted him with a fake smile that Teion absolutely hated. A knot formed in his stomach when his father put his arm around him and whispers in his ear “You can’t hide anything from me my naive son.”
Suddenly Teion’s mother grabs his best friend and slams him on the ground knocking him out. Stunned, Teion goes to help but is punched in the gut by his father, who then walks over to his friend and begins to tie him to a chair. Once in the chair the horrid mother ties him up. Teions father then helps him to his feet and tells him “ Kill the little brat, or you both die.” Then hands him a kunai. Teion looks blankly at his friend and whispers “no” .
Suddenly his father punches him in the face and yells “Then we will you little worm!” In a daze Teion looks up and witnesses the absolute slaughter of his one and only friend. Blood every where and the demons of parents laughing, his mind breaks.
Teion jumps up, screaming, and grabs his mother by the throat and throws her at his father, sending him sprawling. Before they hit the ground he starts impaling them with every sharp weapon he has. His horrid father holds his mother up who takes most of the damage, but also crippling his father.
Teion walks to his father drenched in everyone’s blood but his own, bends down close to his ear and whispers “mercy is for the weak, right, father?” "heh, you finally get it boy. Not such a worm after all. Too bad it cost you this much." his father gurgles out. As these words seep into Teions mind a well of hatred forms in his stomach, forming, brewing and building, then suddenly a Scream Of Despair is unleashed, entering and blasting his father’s head off. Teion did not understand what happened, but it always fascinated him. From that day forward the rest of the Clan both feared and somewhat Idolized him for what he did. To them he is a true shinobi, one who feels for no man or woman a true killing tool. What a pitiful and twisted clan they were.
Eventually Teion came to Konoha to infiltrate and attack once chaos ensued during the attempted assassination of the third Hokage. Once in the village he began to see the kind heartedness of the people and slowly began to like the people.
After a few months of undercover work he began to become more accustomed to the inhabitants than his teammates. On the day of the attack he hid many of his friends and helped as many people as he could without being found out by his teammates.
Unfortunately his teammates found some of the people he was trying to save and slaughtered them all. In his rage he ended up killing all of his teammates. He fought off as many other sound ninja as he could and was very successful due to them knowing him.
Many of the jonin respected him and where happy to have a hand in killing more innocents. Unfortunately for them he would hinder all sound ninja in any battle they had and killed most them without them even realizing it. Teion repeated this many times until one of the platoons he joined was completely defeated by leaf ninja. Teion was found killing his own by a leaf ninja, knocked out, and taken captive for interrogation. The leaf ninja found Teion to be very helpful and accurate when it came to giving location and weaknesses of his “comrades”.
Eventually Teion gave locations of where he told villagers to hide and gained the trust of the leaf ninjas. After the war he was still kept captive under suspicion, he understood very well this was fine, and standard for someone in their position. These ninja seemed so kind in their torture compared to back home. They found that he was genuine in his “change of heart” they called it. Teion know deep down that he hated the sound ninja more than any of them would ever know.
Teion was let into society but knew he had a eye on him at all times. A traitor who joins you may always have a chance of betrayal again. He could live with them thinking that, but he really loved this village. Everyone smiles, not towards him, but they smile. They all see him as an ex-sound, a threat. It doesn’t matter though, his music blocks all that out. Now he devotes his life to protecting the people who smile. Stoic as he may seem, he is happier than ever he’s been in his life. Maybe he can find someone to teach him sound techniques. maybe he can find.....friends.
Maybe.
He found himself beaten and punished for showing kindness, being told “ Kindness and mercy were for the weak”. In his heart he knew this to wrong, but adhered to their rules and ways. Eventually he too, became more and more cold inside.
His training was brutal and dark, being beaten and made to kill innocent people during missions, one such he had to help slaughter a neighboring village due to a gold mine, he didn’t know or care, it just made him feel more and more numb.
The only solace he found was in music. A style called dubstep was the only that calmed him and kept him from going insane. He eventually began to always carry a music player and constantly wear headphones.
One day his parents finally pushed him beyond his breaking point. He came home from another slaughter mission to find his mother and father at the table talking to one of his best friends. This was a huge surprise to him, because friends were seen as a weakness to them.
They all seemed to be joking and having fun over a nice lunch and tea. His father got up and greeted him with a fake smile that Teion absolutely hated. A knot formed in his stomach when his father put his arm around him and whispers in his ear “You can’t hide anything from me my naive son.”
Suddenly Teion’s mother grabs his best friend and slams him on the ground knocking him out. Stunned, Teion goes to help but is punched in the gut by his father, who then walks over to his friend and begins to tie him to a chair. Once in the chair the horrid mother ties him up. Teions father then helps him to his feet and tells him “ Kill the little brat, or you both die.” Then hands him a kunai. Teion looks blankly at his friend and whispers “no” .
Suddenly his father punches him in the face and yells “Then we will you little worm!” In a daze Teion looks up and witnesses the absolute slaughter of his one and only friend. Blood every where and the demons of parents laughing, his mind breaks.
Teion jumps up, screaming, and grabs his mother by the throat and throws her at his father, sending him sprawling. Before they hit the ground he starts impaling them with every sharp weapon he has. His horrid father holds his mother up who takes most of the damage, but also crippling his father.
Teion walks to his father drenched in everyone’s blood but his own, bends down close to his ear and whispers “mercy is for the weak, right, father?” "heh, you finally get it boy. Not such a worm after all. Too bad it cost you this much." his father gurgles out. As these words seep into Teions mind a well of hatred forms in his stomach, forming, brewing and building, then suddenly a Scream Of Despair is unleashed, entering and blasting his father’s head off. Teion did not understand what happened, but it always fascinated him. From that day forward the rest of the Clan both feared and somewhat Idolized him for what he did. To them he is a true shinobi, one who feels for no man or woman a true killing tool. What a pitiful and twisted clan they were.
Eventually Teion came to Konoha to infiltrate and attack once chaos ensued during the attempted assassination of the third Hokage. Once in the village he began to see the kind heartedness of the people and slowly began to like the people.
After a few months of undercover work he began to become more accustomed to the inhabitants than his teammates. On the day of the attack he hid many of his friends and helped as many people as he could without being found out by his teammates.
Unfortunately his teammates found some of the people he was trying to save and slaughtered them all. In his rage he ended up killing all of his teammates. He fought off as many other sound ninja as he could and was very successful due to them knowing him.
Many of the jonin respected him and where happy to have a hand in killing more innocents. Unfortunately for them he would hinder all sound ninja in any battle they had and killed most them without them even realizing it. Teion repeated this many times until one of the platoons he joined was completely defeated by leaf ninja. Teion was found killing his own by a leaf ninja, knocked out, and taken captive for interrogation. The leaf ninja found Teion to be very helpful and accurate when it came to giving location and weaknesses of his “comrades”.
Eventually Teion gave locations of where he told villagers to hide and gained the trust of the leaf ninjas. After the war he was still kept captive under suspicion, he understood very well this was fine, and standard for someone in their position. These ninja seemed so kind in their torture compared to back home. They found that he was genuine in his “change of heart” they called it. Teion know deep down that he hated the sound ninja more than any of them would ever know.
Teion was let into society but knew he had a eye on him at all times. A traitor who joins you may always have a chance of betrayal again. He could live with them thinking that, but he really loved this village. Everyone smiles, not towards him, but they smile. They all see him as an ex-sound, a threat. It doesn’t matter though, his music blocks all that out. Now he devotes his life to protecting the people who smile. Stoic as he may seem, he is happier than ever he’s been in his life. Maybe he can find someone to teach him sound techniques. maybe he can find.....friends.
Maybe.
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Wind:
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Jutsu
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