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scene starts with Tobidara who was walking :
(in his way he finds someone who was crying )
Tobidara : hey bro are you allright??...
(Tobidara approaches him)
(sasuke bursts into tears )
Tobidara :what's wrong sasuke?? why are you crying..
sasuke : Nothing Tobidara ..
Tobidara : are you kidding me??? your noze is broken ..your eyes are swollen ...i didn't even recognize you..so tell me what happened...
sasuke( still crying) : nothing Tobidara ...
Tobidara : why are you crying?? just tell me what happened..maybe i can help you...
Sasuke : nothing i just miss my parents..,
Tobidara : BULL$h!IT !!! : these aren't tears of missing parents...i know you very well sasuke...you used to be my pawn.. remember??...so tell me teh truth...NOW!!
Sasuke : i....
Tobidara :..you.... what??
sasuke: i... i ....
Tobidara : just spit it out Goddammit !!!
Sasuke : i...
Sasuke : I LOST AGAINST NARUTO...he soloed me in teh valley of end... T_T
Tobidara
mg.. OMFG!!!!!!....that's impossible !!!...you ashamed teh uchiha clan!!!...and why did fight naruto...weren't you good good friends??...
sasuke : it's all Sakura's fault...
Tobidara : sakura's fault??...what you mean ???
(Sasuke uses his remaning chakra to creat a HD flashback genjutsu and showed it to Tobidara...teh flashback shows how sasuke came back home from his mission to suddenly find sakura cheating him with naruto...)
Tobidara : WHAT TEH....!!!!....that useless sakura..im gonna kill her...im gonna kill naruto too...
Tobidara then teleported sasuke into his Kamui dimension ..
Tobidara : stay here sasuke ...i'll be back bro!
sasuke : heyy tobidara wait!!..
Tobidara : what???
sasuke : thank you
(Tobidara then heads toward naruto's house)..
Tobidara : so here lives teh sofb..
(Tobidara surprises Naruto)..
Naruto surprised :
(Tobidara attacks naruto and beat him)
Tobidara then attacks Sakura....but suddenly sakura :
Sakura :come tobidara!!...come to me!!!
Tobidara teleports sakura into his dimension : ok i see you want it :
Sasuke : TOBIDARA WHAT YOU DOING!!!!!!!!!!
chapter 1 ends with sasuke being chocked and heart broken..
will tobidara do what you think he iz going to do???
next chapter you will find out!!
scene starts with Tobidara who was walking :
(in his way he finds someone who was crying )
Tobidara : hey bro are you allright??...
(Tobidara approaches him)
Tobidara : what teh........!!!...sasuke!!! iz that you!!!..why is your nose bleeding? why is your eye swollen...what happened to you!!!
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(sasuke bursts into tears )
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Tobidara :what's wrong sasuke?? why are you crying..
sasuke : Nothing Tobidara ..
Tobidara : are you kidding me??? your noze is broken ..your eyes are swollen ...i didn't even recognize you..so tell me what happened...
sasuke( still crying) : nothing Tobidara ...
Tobidara : why are you crying?? just tell me what happened..maybe i can help you...
Sasuke : nothing i just miss my parents..,
Tobidara : BULL$h!IT !!! : these aren't tears of missing parents...i know you very well sasuke...you used to be my pawn.. remember??...so tell me teh truth...NOW!!
Sasuke : i....
Tobidara :..you.... what??
sasuke: i... i ....
Tobidara : just spit it out Goddammit !!!
Sasuke : i...
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Sasuke : I LOST AGAINST NARUTO...he soloed me in teh valley of end... T_T
Tobidara
mg.. OMFG!!!!!!....that's impossible !!!...you ashamed teh uchiha clan!!!...and why did fight naruto...weren't you good good friends??...sasuke : it's all Sakura's fault...
Tobidara : sakura's fault??...what you mean ???
(Sasuke uses his remaning chakra to creat a HD flashback genjutsu and showed it to Tobidara...teh flashback shows how sasuke came back home from his mission to suddenly find sakura cheating him with naruto...)
Tobidara : WHAT TEH....!!!!....that useless sakura..im gonna kill her...im gonna kill naruto too...
Tobidara then teleported sasuke into his Kamui dimension ..
Tobidara : stay here sasuke ...i'll be back bro!
sasuke : heyy tobidara wait!!..
Tobidara : what???
sasuke : thank you
(Tobidara then heads toward naruto's house)..
Tobidara : so here lives teh sofb..
(Tobidara surprises Naruto)..
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Naruto surprised :
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(Tobidara attacks naruto and beat him)
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Tobidara then attacks Sakura....but suddenly sakura :
tries to seduce him...
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Sakura :come tobidara!!...come to me!!!
Tobidara teleports sakura into his dimension : ok i see you want it :
Sasuke : TOBIDARA WHAT YOU DOING!!!!!!!!!!
chapter 1 ends with sasuke being chocked and heart broken..
will tobidara do what you think he iz going to do???
next chapter you will find out!!
