Teaching Better how to teach me Raiton :|

[Trollo Lucilfer]

1)
I gather Lightning release chakra, then i focus it in my hands, concentrating the gathered chakra and with manipulation it turns to electric waves, i add more chakra to make them much stronger, then i channel the lightning into the ground, by controlling the chakra i send the lightning underground to the boulder, and destroying it for good.

Advantage: Using lightning underground, mixed with water the jutsu can be harmful, and damage the whole area, also it's useful to destroy some Doton defensive jutsus.
Disadvantage: Wind style can deal with it easily.
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I start gathering my lightning release chakra, i focus the chakra in my hands, (I'm gonna use this chakra to control the jutsu), i gather the rest of the Lightning chakra needed from the air, with manipulation, the lightning begins to come out, i then mix the Raiton chakra with the gathered lightning to increase the power and the size, then i concentrate the chakra in form of a ball of lightning, after that i launch the lightning ball at my target. ( WAIT!! THIS AIN'T DRAGON BALL :|)

Advantage: Attacking enemies from mid range, just like shooting them with a gun :|
Disadvantage: Doton and Fuuton can stop the jutsu.

 

[Better]

1)
I gather Lightning release chakra, then i focus it in my hands, concentrating the gathered chakra and with manipulation it turns to electric waves, i add more chakra to make them much stronger, then i channel the lightning into the ground, by controlling the chakra i send the lightning underground to the boulder, and destroying it for good.

Advantage: Using lightning underground, mixed with water the jutsu can be harmful, and damage the whole area, also it's useful to destroy some Doton defensive jutsus.
Disadvantage: Wind style can deal with it easily.
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1)
I start gathering my lightning release chakra, i focus the chakra in my hands, (I'm gonna use this chakra to control the jutsu), i gather the rest of the Lightning chakra needed from the air, with manipulation, the lightning begins to come out, i then mix the Raiton chakra with the gathered lightning to increase the power and the size, then i concentrate the chakra in form of a ball of lightning, after that i launch the lightning ball at my target. ( WAIT!! THIS AIN'T DRAGON BALL :|)

Advantage: Attacking enemies from mid range, just like shooting them with a gun :|
Disadvantage: Doton and Fuuton can stop the jutsu.

@Bolded what rank doton?

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

C-rank and B-rank

 

[Better]

Good I asked, C rank Doton would get destroyed and will leave a D rank Lightning ball headed towards you, B rank would just get destroyed and cancel out the lightning ball. A rank Doton will stand its ground against C rank Lightning.

I want you to read this,

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It'll give you a better understanding of elemental jutsu and strength and weaknesses

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

Okay,thanks

 

[Better]

You read it? lol

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

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haha xd, lets move on

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

I want you to focus raiton out of every inch of your body, then it'll create an electrical field around you, think about it like a poor mans Raikage armor, no speed enhancement and you just get a c rank atttack ability.

Detail, and Disadvantages and Advantages.

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

I start gathering my lightning release chakra, then i focus it in my whole body; i manipulate the chakra, then i convert it to strong lightning, i add more chakra to the lightning to increase it's size and power, then i concentrate the chakra (Lightning) to stay in the same position around my body, creating an aura of strong electricity that shocks the attacker.

Advantage: A complete defense against Taijutsu, i'm gonna use this for close combat.
Disadvantage: I can imagine what'll happen if the enemy attacked me using water style xd

 

[Better]

lmao yup, you'd die... xd

Alright you see that cliff, i want you run up it

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

run up it, form the hand seals and then clap your hands together and send your raiton chakra into the cliff, this will make all the rocks and stone come off the cliff and fall down to the ground, usually you'll have an opponent there.

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

"Agent 47 sees his foe under the cliff, he stands back, and performs the Snake → Upside down Tiger → hand seals, Then he gathers Raiton chakra in his body, and focusing it in his hands, then he claps them and by doing that he manipulation the chakra so it can become a strong wave of lightning, by sending the wave of lightning into the cliff, he makes all the rocks and stone come off the cliff and fall down to the ground at the foe's head."

 

[Better]

excellent

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Raise your hand in front of you and begin focusing raiton chakra on it. it will change the color of your hand and then release it into bolts of lightning in the sahpe of a horn that spreads outward.

a good description please

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

I start gathering lightning release chakra, then i focus it in my right hand, i raise it, then i manipulate the chakra to lightning, i add more chakra, and my hand starts glowing a pale yellow, i concentrate the lightning, then i use the chakra to create several bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn, with some effort i release many lighting bolts at the enemy attacking him from all sides.
The advantage of this jutsu is that i can attack multiple targets at the same time.

 

[Better]

good moving on

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

Catch my sword! Then i want you to focus lightning chakra into it to increase it's cutting ability, then make it levitate and multiply into two extra copies. Then send those swords spinning right at my clone.
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( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

Focus your lightning chakra in your dominant hand, this will make electrical bolts form around your hand and forearm. Then jump into the air and land slamming your palm into the ground causing lightning to become to send through the ground and around you up to five meters.

*creates clones for both techs. Clone for the second one begins to run at you.

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

Gimme the sword,
"takes the sword", can i cut some potatoes with this? xd

I gather my Raiton chakra, i focus it in my hands, while catching the sword, i channel a large amount of Raiton chakra to it, giving it an electric power, and increasing it's shape, the Riiton chakra takes the form of the sword and creates 2 copies, of it, i aim at the opponent's chest then i attack him sending the 2 Riton katanas at him.
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I see the clone running at me, then i gather some Raiton chakra i focus it my right hand, then i jump in the air while in the air i manipulate the lighting to bolts, then i slam my hand to the ground, channeling all the bolts into the ground, destroying the approaching clone with the jutsu.

 

[Better]

i've cut steel with it, O_O so yea

( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

I want you, Shirohige to manipulate your chakra and stick your hands out and then generate a wall of lightning energy to defend from these kunais. :zonder:

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

As i see you trying to toss some kunais at me, I gather some Lightning release chakra then i focus it in my hands, after manipulating the chakra into pure lightning, i add more chakra to control it, then i channel the lightning in form of electric bolts, i control the chakra inside the lightning, then with some concentration i give it a form of wall, so by creating a wall of lightning i defend my ass and i block your kunais.

 

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

I want you to send an electrical essence (lightning chakra) into the clouds, this will form a lightning strike to come crashing down at you desire location.

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

I gather some lightning chakra in my body, then i focus it in my right hand, then i convert the chakra to electricity, after doing that, i send it to the clouds in form of an electric bright chakra essence , once the electric essence reaches the sky, i use my chakra controlling to pull a large amount of lightning atoms, creating a huge lightning strike that travels in the clouds, and when i release it it comes down at my opponent's head

 

[Better]

Nice man Nice

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

I want you to form the hand seals, Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare and then summon four giant pillars that surround my clone and then have the pillars shoot out lightning bolts at the clone causing it to disperse.

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