This is my FIRST FF. So, for those who will notice a not so good part, you could post it the way you want to say it. I want to know the TRUTH NOT LIES!
This FF of mine needs you to widen your imagination, im using great taijutsu skills here. It's hard for me to do it, especially if you lack of descriptive words to define certain positions of the characters, but i tried my best and i should say,
YEAH !!! I CAN DO IT !
So here we go, may i present to you my FF !!
Naruto: (Where are you sasuke? When will the Team 7 be ever complete again?)
Naruto: RASENGAN !!!
Sasuke: CHIDORI !!!
Naruto: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.
Sasuke: "Panting"
Naruto: Isn't it nostalgic Sasuke ?
Sasuke: ???
Naruto: You once saved my life here, from haku. Right?
Sasuke: HA! Just shut the F*ck up! Hand over Karin to me and don't interfere! If you don't interfere, then i promise that i'll spare your life!
Naruto: That wouldn't happen Sasuke.
Sasuke: Then this will be a memorable place for your friends on Konoha, because this is the place where i'll kill their beloved hero.
Naruto: Sage Bunshin no Jutsu.
Karin: !!?? (WHAT IS THAT JUTSU?)
Kakashi: Be alert Sakura, Sasuke may go straight to us.
Sakura: Yes Kakashi-sensei!
Sasuke: A clone again, eh?
Naruto: Hehe, not just a clone.
Karin: (Not just a clone? Yes, it isn't just a clone)
Sasuke: He! "SMILES!" (Let's see who's the original) Raiton - Denki no nagare no Jutsu *Electric Release - Electric flow technique*.
Naruto: Ugh!!!
Sasuke: ???
Naruto: Hehe!
Naruto: What's the matter Sasuke?
Sasuke: Hehe! Seems like your not the loser i knew before, eh? Naruto?
Naruto: Yeah! I think you're right! Hehe!
Sasuke: Then it's my turn for you to show what is the power of a REAL SHARINGAN!
Sasuke: ??!! (What the F*ck!? He is right, this isn't just a regular clone. They are just exactly the same. And the amount of chakra is equal.)
Naruto: It looks like you have figured it out, eh? Sasuke? Hehe! But still, your sharingan will change nothing.
Sasuke: ?? You know what i have noticed naruto?
Naruto: ??
Sasuke: You've changed, you become arrogant, but still you're talkative. Hehe.
Naruto: I'm not arrogant sasuke, me being talkative, well that's just being me. Hehe! You know what Itachi told me?
Sasuke: ??!! Don't you ever talk about Itachi!!!!
Naruto: In battle, you should always stay calm. Seems like you are losing your cool, eh? Sasuke?
Karin: ??
Sasuke: Katon Grand Fireball no Jutsu!
Naruto: Suiton - Mizu Funmu no Jutsu! *Water Release - Water Spray Technique*
Sasuke: (So you have Water Element? Seems like that one is the Original. The one who used a Water Element Jutsu.)
Sasuke: Chidori !!!!!
Karin: ??
Sasuke: Hehe!
Naruto: Ugh! "Cough! Cough!"
Sasuke: Sorry Naruto. I don't have enough time to play with you anymore.
Sasuke: HUH!?!
THUD THUD THUD !!!!!
? : NARUTO ?! NARUTO ?!!
Naruto: Wait! I'll be there.
Naruto: Hey! Shikamaru! What brings you here so early?
Shikamaru: Tsunade-sama wants to talk to you. What a pain, isn't it?
Naruto: Okay, Shikamaru! Just a minute.
?: Now that Sasuke has leaved, we can continue our research. Right? Kabuto?
Kabuto: Of course Orochimaru-sama. But im still wondering why are you still interested at Sasuke-kun?
Orochimaru: Why? I don't have to give a reason why. You should have seen it and still will see it. Kukuku!
Kabuto: ??
Orochimaru: By the way Kabuto-kun. We still have an appointment with our new ally, don't forget it.
Kabuto: Of course i don't forget that Orochimaru-sama.
Orochimaru: KUKUKU !!!
Note: I tried my best to make my FF looks clean and decent. HAHAHA ! and also, i want to ask if my FF is too short? Lastly, THANKS FOR READING!!!
This FF of mine needs you to widen your imagination, im using great taijutsu skills here. It's hard for me to do it, especially if you lack of descriptive words to define certain positions of the characters, but i tried my best and i should say,
YEAH !!! I CAN DO IT !
So here we go, may i present to you my FF !!
CHAPTER 1
The Battle at The Great Naruto Bridge.
A new day begun on the Leaf Village. Naruto woke up with a yawn, when suddenly his picture with the team 7 took his attention, naruto stare at it.
The Battle at The Great Naruto Bridge.
A new day begun on the Leaf Village. Naruto woke up with a yawn, when suddenly his picture with the team 7 took his attention, naruto stare at it.
Naruto: (Where are you sasuke? When will the Team 7 be ever complete again?)
"FLASHBACK STARTS"
Naruto: RASENGAN !!!
Sasuke: CHIDORI !!!
As the rasengan and chidori made a contact with each other, it made a huge blast throwing naruto and sasuke away. Naruto use a clone to prevent him to hit the wall.
Naruto: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.
Sasuke pierce his katana to the stone wall prevent the impact.
Sasuke: "Panting"
Naruto: Isn't it nostalgic Sasuke ?
Sasuke: ???
Naruto: You once saved my life here, from haku. Right?
Sasuke: HA! Just shut the F*ck up! Hand over Karin to me and don't interfere! If you don't interfere, then i promise that i'll spare your life!
Naruto: That wouldn't happen Sasuke.
Sasuke: Then this will be a memorable place for your friends on Konoha, because this is the place where i'll kill their beloved hero.
Sasuke charges to Naruto, Naruto form a hand seal but a bit different to Kage Bunshin. A new clone appeared at the left of naruto.
Naruto: Sage Bunshin no Jutsu.
Karin: !!?? (WHAT IS THAT JUTSU?)
Kakashi: Be alert Sakura, Sasuke may go straight to us.
Sakura: Yes Kakashi-sensei!
Sasuke: A clone again, eh?
Naruto: Hehe, not just a clone.
Karin: (Not just a clone? Yes, it isn't just a clone)
Sasuke slashes the newly appeared naruto with his katana from his right hand. The newly appeared naruto stops Sasukes katana by withholding it by his two hands, sasuke draw a kunai and stabbed naruto, naruto also draws a kunai and blocked sasukes kunai.
Sasuke: He! "SMILES!" (Let's see who's the original) Raiton - Denki no nagare no Jutsu *Electric Release - Electric flow technique*.
Electricity flow from sasukes hand through his katana and kunai through the two naruto.
Naruto: Ugh!!!
Sasuke: ???
Naruto: Hehe!
Sasuke was so shocked seeing that both naruto was still there, no one disappeared even though electricity flow through them. Because of the shock, sasuke jumped away from naruto
.Naruto: What's the matter Sasuke?
Sasuke: Hehe! Seems like your not the loser i knew before, eh? Naruto?
Naruto: Yeah! I think you're right! Hehe!
Sasuke: Then it's my turn for you to show what is the power of a REAL SHARINGAN!
Sasuke turns on his sharingan.
Sasuke: ??!! (What the F*ck!? He is right, this isn't just a regular clone. They are just exactly the same. And the amount of chakra is equal.)
Naruto: It looks like you have figured it out, eh? Sasuke? Hehe! But still, your sharingan will change nothing.
Sasuke: ?? You know what i have noticed naruto?
Naruto: ??
Sasuke: You've changed, you become arrogant, but still you're talkative. Hehe.
Naruto: I'm not arrogant sasuke, me being talkative, well that's just being me. Hehe! You know what Itachi told me?
Sasuke: ??!! Don't you ever talk about Itachi!!!!
Sasuke charges to Naruto with an intent to kill.
Naruto: In battle, you should always stay calm. Seems like you are losing your cool, eh? Sasuke?
Naruto rushes to Sasuke to clash with him. There is a mid distance between the two Naruto. As the first Naruto and Sasuke meet at the middle of the bridge, the first Naruto draw a kunai from his left hand, then slashes Sasuke, Sasuke blocks the kunai of the first one with his katana from his right hand pointing down, then Naruto punch Sasuke aiming at his face, but Sasuke stops Narutos right fist with his left hand. Suddenly, the second Naruto jumped off from the back of the first one. Sasuke quickly slide his katana making the tip of the katana touch the ground, then Sasuke lift himself and kick the first Naruto at it's chin.
Karin: ??
Both Naruto bumped with each other, leaving them defenseless on the air. Sasuke quickly performed a hand seal.
Sasuke: Katon Grand Fireball no Jutsu!
The first Naruto also performed a hand seal.
Naruto: Suiton - Mizu Funmu no Jutsu! *Water Release - Water Spray Technique*
Sasuke: (So you have Water Element? Seems like that one is the Original. The one who used a Water Element Jutsu.)
The clash of water and fire created a smoke. The second Naruto quickly jumped forward from the smoke to attack sasuke, while sasuke quickly run on to the first Naruto before it was able to land, Sasuke quickly perform a hand seal.
Sasuke: Chidori !!!!!
Sasuke attack the first Naruto at its chest.
Karin: ??
Sasuke: Hehe!
Naruto: Ugh! "Cough! Cough!"
The first Naruto cough off blood.
Sasuke: Sorry Naruto. I don't have enough time to play with you anymore.
POOFFF !!!
The first Naruto popped off!
The first Naruto popped off!
Sasuke: HUH!?!
Sasuke was so shocked. The clone made a smoke. Suddenly, the second Naruto come out from the smoke. Aiming a punch at Sasukes face. Naruto punched Sasuke with a brute force on the face. Sasuke rolled due to the impact of Narutos punched. Making Sasuke hit the wall.
THUD !!!
"FLASHBACK ENDS"
THUD !!!
"FLASHBACK ENDS"
THUD THUD THUD !!!!!
? : NARUTO ?! NARUTO ?!!
Naruto: Wait! I'll be there.
Naruto quickly ran into the door.
Naruto: Hey! Shikamaru! What brings you here so early?
Shikamaru: Tsunade-sama wants to talk to you. What a pain, isn't it?
Shikamaru scratches his head.
Naruto: Okay, Shikamaru! Just a minute.
"Scene changes from Konoha to Sound Village."
?: Now that Sasuke has leaved, we can continue our research. Right? Kabuto?
Kabuto: Of course Orochimaru-sama. But im still wondering why are you still interested at Sasuke-kun?
Orochimaru: Why? I don't have to give a reason why. You should have seen it and still will see it. Kukuku!
Kabuto: ??
Orochimaru: By the way Kabuto-kun. We still have an appointment with our new ally, don't forget it.
Kabuto: Of course i don't forget that Orochimaru-sama.
Orochimaru: KUKUKU !!!
A new ally on the side of Orochimaru. Who is this?
Will this peron be a new threat for the Shinobi world?
TAKA, AKATSUKI and Orochimaru's side. Will the 5 Great Nation stand a chance against them.
Will this peron be a new threat for the Shinobi world?
TAKA, AKATSUKI and Orochimaru's side. Will the 5 Great Nation stand a chance against them.
Next Chapter: The birth of a new enemy.
Note: I tried my best to make my FF looks clean and decent. HAHAHA !
and also, i want to ask if my FF is too short? Lastly, THANKS FOR READING!!!
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