(I'll start posting a chapter or two a day!)
Thunder yelled, lightning screeched, the wind howled, and the rain pelted Hi and his father. "Please son....also.....HIN!"
A figure of a woman leaped towards him. "Yes sir?"
"Commence the operation after he kills me. Please son, kill me."
"What? No! Why?"
"I have kept you away from the other children and have trained with you because I wanted you to become close to me. When you kill me, your Sharingan will be greater than you have ever imagined. Your eyes with be mine."
"Father, I cannot-" Blood sprayed across his face. His father's cold hand held his hand. His hand with a kunai stabbed his father.
"I...love...you..pros..per"
"NOOOOOOOO!" Hi went into a frantic fit of sobbing and anger at his actions. The woman poked a needle into him and he feel into a deep slumber. He awoke half-asleep and with his eyes sore. He was comfortably seated against a velvet cushion. He also heard familiar voices.
"I'm just glad we got out of there before Danzo's men. Those ANBU are really angry over the escape, but we're all coming home anyways, the war is over."
"The war's over?" Hikusa suddenly exclaimed. His mother, who had just spoken, peered at him.
"My, your father's eyes are yours now, but aside from that yes dear. Your father would have been so happy." She immediately started crying. He realized he was rested in a carriage that was passing through a gassy meadow.
"It won't be long until we pass through the Land of Iron" , Shinda said and then kissed her son, "It is a land of snow and instead of having ninja it has samurai. Here, have stew." The warm meat kissed his tongue and radiated the heat throughout his body.
'How heavenly!' He soon drifted to sleep again. After a couple of hours, the carriage suddenly halted. Outside, in the cold snowy forest, a boy that was Hi's age with silver hair and a covered face stood next to a girl of the same age. Hi observed his surroundings for he had never seen snow before or a ravine so deep.
"Hello, I am Hatake Kakashi and this is Rin. We have assigned to escort you through here," stated the boy.
"Of course," replied Shinda, "and who is he?" She pointed at an armored man with swords.
"A samurai, ma'am"
"EARTH STYLE GREAT MUD RIVER!" exclaimed the so-called smaurai. A river of mudswept the carriage away and ensnared Hi. Shinda sharted forming hand signs in conjunction with the two Leaf genin. "EARTH STYLE DRAGON MISSILE JUTSU!"
'Damn! I have to do something, they won't make it in time!' He then shouted, "FIRE STYLE FIRE BALL JUTSU!" The earth ninja grinned and laughed hysterically.
"No Hi!", yelled his mother. The fire only strengthened the mud missiles and transformed them into lava.
"LIGHTNING BLADE!", shouted Kakashi. His appeared to be holding lightning, it even stabbed the man in the heart.
"What the? A mere child did this.." He then rolled down cliff and grabbed Hi.
"NOOOO!", Shinda repeated and tried to tackle the man, but missed. The man and Hi fell into the icy water, but before reaching it, Shinda exasperated, "Find me in Konoha son!"
The earth ninja died before reaching the ice, but Hi, when fully submerged, became frozen. His living stayed there for years until one day, after a landslide, the ice cracked and his eyes slowly opened.... TO BE CONTINUED!
Thunder yelled, lightning screeched, the wind howled, and the rain pelted Hi and his father. "Please son....also.....HIN!"
A figure of a woman leaped towards him. "Yes sir?"
"Commence the operation after he kills me. Please son, kill me."
"What? No! Why?"
"I have kept you away from the other children and have trained with you because I wanted you to become close to me. When you kill me, your Sharingan will be greater than you have ever imagined. Your eyes with be mine."
"Father, I cannot-" Blood sprayed across his face. His father's cold hand held his hand. His hand with a kunai stabbed his father.
"I...love...you..pros..per"
"NOOOOOOOO!" Hi went into a frantic fit of sobbing and anger at his actions. The woman poked a needle into him and he feel into a deep slumber. He awoke half-asleep and with his eyes sore. He was comfortably seated against a velvet cushion. He also heard familiar voices.
"I'm just glad we got out of there before Danzo's men. Those ANBU are really angry over the escape, but we're all coming home anyways, the war is over."
"The war's over?" Hikusa suddenly exclaimed. His mother, who had just spoken, peered at him.
"My, your father's eyes are yours now, but aside from that yes dear. Your father would have been so happy." She immediately started crying. He realized he was rested in a carriage that was passing through a gassy meadow.
"It won't be long until we pass through the Land of Iron" , Shinda said and then kissed her son, "It is a land of snow and instead of having ninja it has samurai. Here, have stew." The warm meat kissed his tongue and radiated the heat throughout his body.
'How heavenly!' He soon drifted to sleep again. After a couple of hours, the carriage suddenly halted. Outside, in the cold snowy forest, a boy that was Hi's age with silver hair and a covered face stood next to a girl of the same age. Hi observed his surroundings for he had never seen snow before or a ravine so deep.
"Hello, I am Hatake Kakashi and this is Rin. We have assigned to escort you through here," stated the boy.
"Of course," replied Shinda, "and who is he?" She pointed at an armored man with swords.
"A samurai, ma'am"
"EARTH STYLE GREAT MUD RIVER!" exclaimed the so-called smaurai. A river of mudswept the carriage away and ensnared Hi. Shinda sharted forming hand signs in conjunction with the two Leaf genin. "EARTH STYLE DRAGON MISSILE JUTSU!"
'Damn! I have to do something, they won't make it in time!' He then shouted, "FIRE STYLE FIRE BALL JUTSU!" The earth ninja grinned and laughed hysterically.
"No Hi!", yelled his mother. The fire only strengthened the mud missiles and transformed them into lava.
"LIGHTNING BLADE!", shouted Kakashi. His appeared to be holding lightning, it even stabbed the man in the heart.
"What the? A mere child did this.." He then rolled down cliff and grabbed Hi.
"NOOOO!", Shinda repeated and tried to tackle the man, but missed. The man and Hi fell into the icy water, but before reaching it, Shinda exasperated, "Find me in Konoha son!"
The earth ninja died before reaching the ice, but Hi, when fully submerged, became frozen. His living stayed there for years until one day, after a landslide, the ice cracked and his eyes slowly opened.... TO BE CONTINUED!
