Tale of the God of Shinobi

[Gutsy]

i really like this lol at his dad sasuke the only thing that i dont like is that danzo is not there as his teammate but it still a grate story and i want to read the next one

in the story it is those two who are his teammates at the time but Danzo will appear...

Uffe: what you mean flawed...

 

[uffe0365]

write me on facebook i'll tell you it's easier to spot when not beeing the one to write

 

[kourosh]

nice , your plot was awesome , please send me vm when you write next chapter

 

[Gutsy]

nice , your plot was awesome , please send me vm when you write next chapter

I will this is the tale of Hiruzen Sarutobi as it has never been told throughoutly before so i decided to make it...

 

[Hanon]

Write another chapter...I only saw a few grammar mistakes..but :shrug: other than that its great...

 

[MriRoN]

nice +rep!

 

[Gutsy]

LOL thanks both of you i am working with my partner on the next chapter and we are not entirely sure when it will be out but please keep checking the FF sight and you will find it

 

[Shin Kaito]

.... gonna read it

 

[Killer Vision]

EL MAGNIFICO refferal..thumbs up! xd

 

[Korra.]

Amazing O_O

 

[Gutsy]

Thanks you 3 it is nice to see so many people reading it

 

[Mante]

Pretty good

 

[EYES OF ITACHI]

not bad...i enjoyed reading this

 

[Gutsy]

Next one will be out soon

 

[FinalRasengan]

I cant wait to read the next one ^.^

 

[Sophie Ezra]

thank you everyone for the nice comments so far we are both glad you like our Fan fic

 

[Gutsy]

Part two of the FF is out...

 

[Tsuki]

It's an awesome fanfic ppl, keep it up

 

[Gutsy]

It's an awesome fanfic ppl, keep it up

thanks tell your friends bout it