Taijutsu training with Better Pt. 2

[Shadou]

Last two techs in the first post I missed. Appreciate u continuing it XD

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(Raijin) – Zeus
Shadou starts to dash towards the clone of his sensei that waited to be used as a test dummy for the upcoming technique that Shadou would be practicing. As he nears the clone, Shadou clenches his left fist and keeps his right hand open while planting his feet, squared apart from each other. Shadou then tilts and lowers his body towards his right side and begins to gather some chakra while envisioning the nature of lightning. Once the lightning is infused within his palm, Shadou quickly brings his arm upward at full force, striking the clone in the chine, causing the clone to vanish.

(Konoha Gōriki Senpū ) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind
Making his way to another clone, Shadou begins to go over the second technique that he was instructed to do in his head. Once in front of the clone, Shadou stomps his left foot onto the grass, planting it firmly into the ground. With his left foot planted, Shadou bends his right leg while raising it up towards his mid-section. Shadou then performs a lightning-fast 360 degree spin that would be near impossible to track with the human eye. Towards the middle of his spin, Shadou extends his right leg outwards as his foot collides with the clone, sending it flying backwards before it poofs.

 

[Better]

Good, better descriptions for these last ones

(Toripuru Dainamikku Entorii) -Triple Dynamic Entry
Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uses Dynamic Entry on the opponent and then appears behind them to use it again. They are blasted into the air where they use a third Dynamic Entry to knock the enemy to the ground with great force and speed

Dynamic entry three times with the last one knocking them to the ground.

(Senkō Jūjiki) -Flash Cross Sever
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user delivers multiple punches to the foe before he slashes them with his chakra blades in a cross-style.

you first hit my clone with a bunch of punches. Afterwards take out a kunai or a sword and run chakra through it. Slash my clone up cross style.

Do these together in a combo. It's pretty basic, I want to see your wording.

(Konoha Shippūdan) - Leaf Hurricane Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will launch a succession of high and low kicks dealing a several continuous kicks to the chest region alternating between both legs.

(Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 35
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.

 

[Shadou]

Sees list and passes out

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Okay sensei, I will give it my all.

A sigh is released from Shadou as he prepares to perform the next several techniques. He breaks into a dash towards the clone, as he nears the clone, Shadou leans forward so that his tip toes are the only part of his foot touching the ground. He then pushes off his toes and jumps into the air. As he jumps into the air, Shadou bends his left leg and keeps his left knee tucked behind him while extending his right leg outward so that the bottom of his right foot is pointed towards the clone. SHadou’s right foot them comes into contacg with the clone’s face. The clone is then knocked back a few inches due to the kick. Shadou suddenly appears behind the clone and jumps into the air once again, taking on the same form that he used to deliver the first kick, striking the clone with another jump kick with his right foot to the head. The clone is sent flying into the air from the second kick. Shadou then jumps into the air, slightly higher then the clone. He bends his left leg and extends his right leg outward like before and strikes the clone again with his foot in the face. As the kick lands, the clone is sent crashing down onto the ground below.

Once he comes back landing on the ground, Shadou turns in a 180degree angle to face another clone of his sensei. Slightly bending forward, Shadou begins dashing toward the clone. Once within range of the clone, Shadou balls up both of his hands, forming a fist. As he is balling his hands, Shadou swings his left leg in front of him and plants it onto the ground. He then draws back his right arm so that his fist is aligned with his ear and then quickly snaps his right arm forward, delivering a hook to the clone’s chin area. Following right behind the hook, Shadou thrust his left arm outwards, nailing the clone with a jab. Keeping his combination going, Shadou delivers another left jab and then curves his right arm into a U shape with his fist pointed towards the sky and palm faced towards him . He then brings his right fist up, hitting the clone’s jaw with a devastating uppercut. As the clone becomes disorientated from the multiple punches, Shadou grabs onto the hilt of his katana with his dominant, right hand and withdraws it from his sheath. As he grasp onto the hilt, SHadou lets his chakra flow throughout himself and into the sword. With his chakra focused in the katana, Shadou keeps the sword by his left hip and then brings it straight up, delivering a cross-style slash on the clone.

Two more techniques, piece of cake.

Another clone enters Shadou’s path of vision. It seemed that his sensei was going all out with these last few techniques, but it didn’t faze Shadou. At the end of this session, he would have nearly completed his taijutsu training and would surely use what he was taught in future battles. As he approaches another clone, Shadou takes a deep breath as sweat begins to escape and drop from underneath his headband. Locking his eyes onto the clone’s, Shadou spreads his legs and then raises and bends his left leg. He swings his left leg across his body, the side of his foot hitting the pectoral of the clone. Shadou then raises his right leg and bends it, so that his knee is aligned with his chin. He then leans backwards and thrust his right leg out, delivering a kick on the clone’s chest area. As the clone steps back a few inches due to impact, Shadou lowers and then sweeps his right leg over, hitting the clone in the calf, after that he raises his left leg and thrust is outward, once again hitting the clone’s chest. He lowers his left leg back down onto the ground as the multiple chest kicks are performed and after the clone vanishes.

Eying a clone near the one he just performed the previous technique on, Shadou waste no time in dashing towards the last remaining clone. Before he could get in front of the clone, Shadou pushes off the ground with his feet, leaping high into the air. While mid-air, Shadou shifts his body so that he is vertical in the air and extends both of his legs outward so that the bottom of his feet are facing the clone. His feet then come into contact with the clone’s chest and due to the force and power behind the technique, the clone is sent flying backward once the dropkick is delivered. Once the clone hits the ground, it poofs and disappears, leaving nothing but Shadou and his sensei on the training field.

How was that sensei, anymore techniques I need to learn?

Shadou cracks a smile and gives his sensei a thumbs up before falling backwards onto the ground, dust rising and surrounding him once he hits.​

 

[Better]

last one,

( Konoha Toppū ) - Leaf Gust
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description:
Using simple, yet effective movement when performing a counter attack or a freeform hand attack, the user will manage to spin rapidly and performs a strong rotative high kick to hit the opponent. The technique can be triggered in many ways and more than one kick can be delivered if the user manages to gather enough momentum.

This is very useful. What do you think about it? Perform and and give me some advantages.

 

[Shadou]

Shadou approaches the final clone created by a sensei while going over the last technique he would be performing in is head. Once near the clone, Shadou acts if he is countering a punch thrown by a clone. He raises the heel of his left foot off the ground while maintaining balance by planting the toes of his left foot on the ground while pushing back with his right leg to enter a spinning motion. As Shadou completes half of his spin, he raises and bends his right leg into his stomach and then extends it outwards. The heel of Shadou’s right foot then comes into contact with the clone’s chin as Shadou completes his spinning, high kick.

I believe this technique could definitely come in handy when in a close-range, taijutsu fight. Only problem I would have with it is the spinning required, which a quick opponent may be able to interrupt while the user is rotating. Advantages are that the user can deliver multiple kicks depending on how much “momentum” he puts forth into the attack and the technique can be performed in multiple situations.
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[Better]

Nice when you update your bio as a tai master you can use ryujin. Any questions on it?

If not, we're all done

 

[Shadou]

No questions at all

 

[Better]

done then o-o