*I head over to lake in the distance and I begin to channel my chakra into my feet as I once did a moment ago. I place my right foot on the water, noticing the constant change and shifting of the water, I try to adapt my flow of chakra into my foot in order to maintain balance. I then tamke my other foot, and begin doing the same, channeling the same amounts of chakra into it as my left. Keeping my flow of chakra ever chancing as to maintain my balance on the water, I begin to walk slowly but steadily to the center of the lake. I eventually begin to pick up the pace as I get the hang of the technique and I'm able to walk at normal pace on the water.*
Is this good sensei?