[Romance] Sweet Rose

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Sweet Rose

Years ago, when I was still young,
I was naïve, and unaware,
love was something that I left unsung,
but then I met you, and fell for you, when I dared to enter the lion’s lair.

Before I met you, I was with another,
she was beautiful, like the petals on a rose,
to me, she was more than any sister or brother,
but she treated me just like another one of her daily foes.

Soon after that, heartbreak had consumed me,
betrayal and sorrow filled my heart, like water in a cup,
but meeting you meant I could break free,
and we are now here for each other, to prevent our hearts from acting up.

When you are close to me, I want to stay there,
when you are away from me, you are something I always miss,
even if it just one moment with you, it something I would like to share,
just come close, sweet rose, and give me a kiss.
 

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Sweet Rose

Years ago, when I was still young,
I was naïve, and unaware,
love was something that I left unsung,
but then I met you, and fell for you, when I dared to enter the lion’s lair.

Before I met you, I was with another,
she was beautiful, like the petals on a rose,
to me, she was more than any sister or brother,
but she treated me just like another one of her daily foes.

Soon after that, heartbreak had consumed me,
betrayal and sorrow filled my heart, like water in a cup,
but meeting you meant I could break free,
and we are now here for each other, to prevent our hearts from acting up.

When you are close to me, I want to stay there,
when you are away from me, you are something I always miss,
even if it just one moment with you, it something I would like to share,
just come close, sweet rose, and give me a kiss.
So it means you weren't sure either it was a girl or a boy XD (Don't take it personally)

OT :- Nice poem if you haven't copied it from somewhere :win:
 

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Are you going to recite it to your girlfriend ?

If yes, good luck

if no, why the hell did you write it?
I wrote it for someone today, and I will give it to them soon.

You really are a good writer/poet bruh. Keep it up! =D
Thank you.

So it means you weren't sure either it was a girl or a boy XD (Don't take it personally)

OT :- Nice poem if you haven't copied it from somewhere :win:
No, I said they were worth more to me than any brother or sister.

I do not copy works from others, otherwise what is the point of sharing it...
 
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