[Action] Susano'o's Awakening! (fanfic)

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(the era of the sage of the 6 paths was hardly anything different from any other time. Wars broke out, and people were divided by tribes. Alliances and betrayals were common. The world was filled with uncertainty and hatred. A certain jutsu emerged that will for a long time stand as a jutsu created by hatred)

sennin- Peace has been maintained but i predict war will break out. The tentails maybe sealed within me. But hatred still thrives in this world. May you endure this hatred and bring about a better world.

Elder son- Don't worry father. I shall ensure that order can be maintained.

Younger son- Oh sorry can you repeat that... (elder brother yells at younger brother.

E.S.- Quit being disrespectful!

Y.S.- Why do you have to be so mean all the time I swear you really need to calm down.

E.S.- I would calm down if someone can stop being ignorant and how dare you swear in front of father!

Y.S.- Ok ok. so what were you saying father? (Elder brother hits younger brother once again)

Sennin- A word of advise my sons. You must end the hatred between yourselves before you can end hatred all together.

(out on the battlefield the sons stand in between 2 tribes that are both prepared to fight.

E.S.- Stop causing more casualties. Fighting isn't going to solve anything.

tribe member- we are running out of land to grow crops. we made an alliance to ensure we'd have plenty for both of us. Give us our land back!

Tribe member- We want access to the river but you won't let us cross into your land to get it. Quit blaming it all on us!

Y.S.- Please we can work out a compromise! You're both important to one another!

tribe member- I understand what both of you are trying to do but working things out is impossible with them.

Both tribes- Charge take every last of them to hell!

E.S.- They're not compromising are you ready brother?

Y.S.- yeah. (Elder brother makes a wall of black flames on one side and the younger bother creates a wall of earth on the other.

E.S.- Everyone! Settle down! Killing is unnecessary here. Let's talk this over let's hear each of your wishes?

tribe member- All we want is access to the river is that too much to ask?

Y.S.- and you guys here. What is it that you want?

Tribe member-We don't need any other crops. we are just in need of food.

Y.S.- Oh sorry what was that again? I was talking to myself....

Tribes-?????

E.S.- Brother you are so embarassing....

tribe member- I guess we can work things out....

other tribe member- Hey what's that? (a dead body was on the outside line of the tribe with an arrow sticking out of his chest.)

tribe member- that's.... one of our men...

tribe member- this means war! the 2 tribes split in half going around the walls that separated them. along with the 2 brothers to settle things down. Both tribes clash. Causing many to die.

E.S.- argh! I have to regroup with brother.... Brother! where are you!? Let's meet up with.... (the elder brother looks to the other side seeing his younger brother on the ground wounded)

E.S.- (Shows him with darkness surrounding him speaking within his mind) Why is it so difficult just to not fight? Don't they see? That my family is trying to put in end to this? Why is it so HARD!!!!!! That's enough I had it with people like all of you. Use logic for once!!!!!

(the elder brother starts to glow then his chakra forms armor encasing his body. A huge explosion occurs.)

Y.S.- (the younger brother finally wakes up to both tribes being wiped out) Brother what ha.....
(the younger brother sees his older brother wearing glowing armor created from chakra.)

E.S.- So you're awake. You were always the stupid one. Useless maybe. You need to be stronger!

Y.S.-.... (the older brother turns around with his eyes dripping with blood. with a frightening expression on his face)

E.S.- Brother let me ask you one question Why is it so hard!!!!?

Y.S.- brother what do you..(the younger brother collapses and passes out)

E.S.- Foolish little brother....(the susano'o disappears from his body.the older brother picks up the younger brother carrying him on his shoulder into the distance.)

the end
 
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