CaveJohnsonHere
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Aright people, before you read super duper awesome I need you to kept three things in your mind when reading this:
1. This idea came from a magazine cover assignment me and my friend had in design 2 years ago, a Manga magazine I should add, when writing the evaluation we kind off goofed off, which is why this story is kind of crazy.
2. The story is only the DRAFT script, and yes I (we) what to make SDA into an online Manga-like spoof comic. So don’t go crazy if you wonder why it’s so simple. We did do a long, detail version of this, so if you what to see that please say so in the threads.( it’s much better than this...)
3. I need FEEDBACK!!! I am (I don’t know how) using this for my Community studies to make it into a Manga comic short, and I need feedback on this, I don’t care if you hate it or love it, please thread your opinions.
Also, the story doses get better, trust me, so can you please PLEASE read the whole thing and comment? I would be very grateful
1. This idea came from a magazine cover assignment me and my friend had in design 2 years ago, a Manga magazine I should add, when writing the evaluation we kind off goofed off, which is why this story is kind of crazy.
2. The story is only the DRAFT script, and yes I (we) what to make SDA into an online Manga-like spoof comic. So don’t go crazy if you wonder why it’s so simple. We did do a long, detail version of this, so if you what to see that please say so in the threads.( it’s much better than this...)
3. I need FEEDBACK!!! I am (I don’t know how) using this for my Community studies to make it into a Manga comic short, and I need feedback on this, I don’t care if you hate it or love it, please thread your opinions.
Also, the story doses get better, trust me, so can you please PLEASE read the whole thing and comment? I would be very grateful
We where super duper awesome!
We made a Mag cover, Two! And they were epic!
Then we went backwards and made the logo last! Because we are that cool!
Then we read Manga all night long! And talked about Chouji’s fatness
Then we had a party, and Tobi wasn’t invite but he snuck in! And got on the Magazine cover,! (The horror!)
Then we cut out his body! And Tobi wasn’t happy….
So he glares at us.
Then Edward attacked Tobi, and called Ichigo to help!
There was an epic battle.
Naruto and Allen suddenly showed up! (
)
Then to everyone’s horror they were attacked by trillions of purple writing!
Then Yamato came with the logo and everyone cheer!
Then Yamato slammed the logo in Tobi’s face, and Tobi, in Anger, head butted him, killing Yamato.
Allen and Naruto cried.
Edward went emo and dyed his hair black and became Edemo.
Ichigo tried to kill Tobi, to avenge Yamato’s death, but Tobi was more focus on the new Edemo, and Bobbed away from Ichigo’s sword.
Allen ate some pie, watching the scene. While Naruto dose the sexy-no-justu and Ed becomes no longer Emo! (Yay!)
Edward snaps out of depression and knees Tobi’s head; But Tobi turns into a giant pig and flattens Edwards.
Allen’s eats more pie.
Purple writing dances around.
When suddenly Saito and edgeii appears! Killing the dancing writing! Edgeii was Caw Cawing and Tobi the pig, heard and charge at Eiji.
Ichigo gasped (!!!) and tried to cut off Tobi, and dose the Persona 4 save your friends life, and Ichigo died!!! (Bleach fans cry here)
Sasuke flies over on his giant hawk (named Hawky) and steals Allen’s pie; claiming it will kill all the leaf Village!
L pops in, giving Allen some more pie.
Naruto snaps out of La La land and tickles Sasuke to the ground. Allen screams as the pie flies out of Sasuke’s hand.
Only to land in Tobi’s Mouth!
Allen swore vengeance over the pie, and Sasuke laughing yells at Tobi that he ruined his plan,
Hawky and Edgeii had a nice conversation about crows, while Saito yells for him to help him, but is attacked by the purple words!
L decides to use the Death Note to try and kill Tobi, but he can’t find his pen!
So he asks Allen if he has a pen.
He did not.
L was devastated and ran away to England to find his long lost brother for a pen.
Allen charges at Tobi the pig, but Tobi put Allen in a genjustu all about pie attacking him which causes him to have a seizer and falls into a coma.
Sasuke head butts Naruto and stops beginning tickle, and calls Hawky.
Hawky apologises to Edgeii that he must leave conversation to help Sasuke.
Tobi, not liking his pig form, decides to transform into a Flamingo. Hawky is shocked because he is scared of Flamingos, and flies aways leaving Sasuke behind.
Sasuke swears after Hawky.
Sasuke, now pissed off, attacks and kills Edgeii because he was out of character in the situation.
Naruto, believing in peace and harmony, gets pissed off at Sasuke.
Tobi, seeing that an epic battle was afoot, he decided to eat the left over pie that Allen left behind and watches.
Sasuke grabbing a kunai and throws it at Naruto, but the Kunai bounce of his awesome leaf focus field and the Kunai was thrown back at Sasuke! Hitting Him.
Sasuke got really anger now and threw his sword, getting a paper (sword) cut. And screams like Justin Berber.
Naruto meanwhile has a giant sword though his stomach, fascinated by this, he looked behind him to see if it had gone though.
But as he turned around he trips over the reminder of the pie, falling onto the screaming paper (sword) cut Sasuke, crushing them.
In their last moments Sasuke tells Naruto of his impressive plan about how the pie would kill everyone by making them obese and all dying of a heart attack. And his life story, about how he never got a puppy when he a little kid, how he is so angry about all the Yoai about him, and how he was an only kid, because Itachi was a man , and that he felt that he should have been a man too. And lastly that Naruto was his first kiss because he wanted it to be Kakashi, that he was really a girl.
Meanwhile Naruto was looking at Tobi, angry because he wanted to avenge his parents, and he couldn’t while he was pinned down by Sasuke, who was whinging.
Then they died.
Then while the Flamingo Tobi was having a partly, L and his long lost brother, Michael Jackson, fly down on Hawky, with a pen for the Death Note.!
L, in his anger about pie, wrote down Tobi’s name, saying that his death would be Chicken Pocks,
Suddenly Tobi was attack by chickens and was pocked to death.
Now, Michael Jackson, glazing down upon the dead characters, pulled out the legendary Pokémon, Lifeamon, and used the move, Moon walk to bring back everyone who was dead!
But not Tobi, because he was a bad boy.
Everyone cheered excepted Naruto and Sasuke, who were still pinned together.
L crises for his brother and pulls the sword out of Naruto and Sasuke.
He walks to his brother, putting the sword in his hands, while Naruto screams “Sasuke is a girl!”
Everyone gasps and Edward goes back to Edemo.
And now it’s time for the Epilogue.
Because it’s Epic. ()
Chonju never got skinny.
The purple writing was finally stopped because they found out the writing was made of chesses, and it was slowly eaten to extinction.
Yamato fell in love with the logo and they both went to Greenland, but then Yamato saw a beautiful oak tree and cheated on the logo, breaking their relationship.
After long and painful therapy, Ed was no longer Edemo, but as a side effect, turned into Eddy Murphy.
Ichigo returned home, to play eternally Persona 4, never able to do everything by the end of the game, and cosplaying as his favourite character Teddy, fighting the shadows.
Allen recovered from his seize, and was told the horrid truth that the pie was dead. Allen then hosted a funeral in the living memory of the pie, and cried for ten years.
Hawky and Eiji become besties and play the Sims 3 pets, living in the basement that belonged Hawky’s Grandmother.
Saito was so forever traumatised by purple writing that he was unable to continue writing Manga, because his writing had infected his hands, making them made out of cheese and purple, his hands became floppy and unable to hold a pen.
Sasuke joined the tangled crew, and formed an angry rivalry against Flynn Rider, and stole Repunzel golden hair, claiming it would destroy the leaf village.
Naruto, hearing of Sasuke’s plan of using Repunzel hair, bakes a Raman pie to bring out Sasuke, and captures the year 8 corridor, placing the pie in the centre and hides in one of the lockers thinking the plan in floorless (however the plan did not work)
L covers up the true reason why Michael Jackson dies, and moves to Texas with Bethany to become puppet masters.
Tobi was actually Zetu, and the real Tobi was having a tea party with the cat in the hat
We made a Mag cover, Two! And they were epic!
Then we went backwards and made the logo last! Because we are that cool!
Then we read Manga all night long! And talked about Chouji’s fatness
Then we had a party, and Tobi wasn’t invite but he snuck in! And got on the Magazine cover,! (The horror!)
Then we cut out his body! And Tobi wasn’t happy….
So he glares at us.
Then Edward attacked Tobi, and called Ichigo to help!
There was an epic battle.
Naruto and Allen suddenly showed up! (
)Then to everyone’s horror they were attacked by trillions of purple writing!
Then Yamato came with the logo and everyone cheer!
Then Yamato slammed the logo in Tobi’s face, and Tobi, in Anger, head butted him, killing Yamato.
Allen and Naruto cried.
Edward went emo and dyed his hair black and became Edemo.
Ichigo tried to kill Tobi, to avenge Yamato’s death, but Tobi was more focus on the new Edemo, and Bobbed away from Ichigo’s sword.
Allen ate some pie, watching the scene. While Naruto dose the sexy-no-justu and Ed becomes no longer Emo! (Yay!)
Edward snaps out of depression and knees Tobi’s head; But Tobi turns into a giant pig and flattens Edwards.
Allen’s eats more pie.
Purple writing dances around.
When suddenly Saito and edgeii appears! Killing the dancing writing! Edgeii was Caw Cawing and Tobi the pig, heard and charge at Eiji.
Ichigo gasped (!!!) and tried to cut off Tobi, and dose the Persona 4 save your friends life, and Ichigo died!!! (Bleach fans cry here)
Sasuke flies over on his giant hawk (named Hawky) and steals Allen’s pie; claiming it will kill all the leaf Village!
L pops in, giving Allen some more pie.
Naruto snaps out of La La land and tickles Sasuke to the ground. Allen screams as the pie flies out of Sasuke’s hand.
Only to land in Tobi’s Mouth!
Allen swore vengeance over the pie, and Sasuke laughing yells at Tobi that he ruined his plan,
Hawky and Edgeii had a nice conversation about crows, while Saito yells for him to help him, but is attacked by the purple words!
L decides to use the Death Note to try and kill Tobi, but he can’t find his pen!
So he asks Allen if he has a pen.
He did not.
L was devastated and ran away to England to find his long lost brother for a pen.
Allen charges at Tobi the pig, but Tobi put Allen in a genjustu all about pie attacking him which causes him to have a seizer and falls into a coma.
Sasuke head butts Naruto and stops beginning tickle, and calls Hawky.
Hawky apologises to Edgeii that he must leave conversation to help Sasuke.
Tobi, not liking his pig form, decides to transform into a Flamingo. Hawky is shocked because he is scared of Flamingos, and flies aways leaving Sasuke behind.
Sasuke swears after Hawky.
Sasuke, now pissed off, attacks and kills Edgeii because he was out of character in the situation.
Naruto, believing in peace and harmony, gets pissed off at Sasuke.
Tobi, seeing that an epic battle was afoot, he decided to eat the left over pie that Allen left behind and watches.
Sasuke grabbing a kunai and throws it at Naruto, but the Kunai bounce of his awesome leaf focus field and the Kunai was thrown back at Sasuke! Hitting Him.
Sasuke got really anger now and threw his sword, getting a paper (sword) cut. And screams like Justin Berber.
Naruto meanwhile has a giant sword though his stomach, fascinated by this, he looked behind him to see if it had gone though.
But as he turned around he trips over the reminder of the pie, falling onto the screaming paper (sword) cut Sasuke, crushing them.
In their last moments Sasuke tells Naruto of his impressive plan about how the pie would kill everyone by making them obese and all dying of a heart attack. And his life story, about how he never got a puppy when he a little kid, how he is so angry about all the Yoai about him, and how he was an only kid, because Itachi was a man , and that he felt that he should have been a man too. And lastly that Naruto was his first kiss because he wanted it to be Kakashi, that he was really a girl.
Meanwhile Naruto was looking at Tobi, angry because he wanted to avenge his parents, and he couldn’t while he was pinned down by Sasuke, who was whinging.
Then they died.
Then while the Flamingo Tobi was having a partly, L and his long lost brother, Michael Jackson, fly down on Hawky, with a pen for the Death Note.!
L, in his anger about pie, wrote down Tobi’s name, saying that his death would be Chicken Pocks,
Suddenly Tobi was attack by chickens and was pocked to death.
Now, Michael Jackson, glazing down upon the dead characters, pulled out the legendary Pokémon, Lifeamon, and used the move, Moon walk to bring back everyone who was dead!
But not Tobi, because he was a bad boy.
Everyone cheered excepted Naruto and Sasuke, who were still pinned together.
L crises for his brother and pulls the sword out of Naruto and Sasuke.
He walks to his brother, putting the sword in his hands, while Naruto screams “Sasuke is a girl!”
Everyone gasps and Edward goes back to Edemo.
And now it’s time for the Epilogue.
Because it’s Epic. ()
Chonju never got skinny.
The purple writing was finally stopped because they found out the writing was made of chesses, and it was slowly eaten to extinction.
Yamato fell in love with the logo and they both went to Greenland, but then Yamato saw a beautiful oak tree and cheated on the logo, breaking their relationship.
After long and painful therapy, Ed was no longer Edemo, but as a side effect, turned into Eddy Murphy.
Ichigo returned home, to play eternally Persona 4, never able to do everything by the end of the game, and cosplaying as his favourite character Teddy, fighting the shadows.
Allen recovered from his seize, and was told the horrid truth that the pie was dead. Allen then hosted a funeral in the living memory of the pie, and cried for ten years.
Hawky and Eiji become besties and play the Sims 3 pets, living in the basement that belonged Hawky’s Grandmother.
Saito was so forever traumatised by purple writing that he was unable to continue writing Manga, because his writing had infected his hands, making them made out of cheese and purple, his hands became floppy and unable to hold a pen.
Sasuke joined the tangled crew, and formed an angry rivalry against Flynn Rider, and stole Repunzel golden hair, claiming it would destroy the leaf village.
Naruto, hearing of Sasuke’s plan of using Repunzel hair, bakes a Raman pie to bring out Sasuke, and captures the year 8 corridor, placing the pie in the centre and hides in one of the lockers thinking the plan in floorless (however the plan did not work)
L covers up the true reason why Michael Jackson dies, and moves to Texas with Bethany to become puppet masters.
Tobi was actually Zetu, and the real Tobi was having a tea party with the cat in the hat
