Summer Praise

[ikikouchiha9668]

This was inspired by the wonderful people such as -S- and socialoutcast. but i really want to thank Sk8er for telling me I should stop. Sk8er, buddy, my world revovles around people like you. Thank you all~~

The summer brezze rolling in
Children giddy and giggling
Joyful with no school to worry about

Smiles on everyone's faces
Lying and playing in the summer heat
Even the weeping willow seems to be joyful

Vacaation lights up their holidays
A carefree 104 days of just play
All the wonderful summer day

Water flying in the air
Glistening in the bright yellow sun
All in the back roads of Tennessee

When everything's rested and asleep
I like it the most
The soft blowing wind blowing in from the top of the mountains

The sun barely over the hills
A soft red and yellow gleam merged perfectly with the green hilltops
The birds singing away on their branches in perfect synch

When fall rolls in
Summer falls behind
And it awaits for us next year <3

 

[Awkward Linguist]

i like it, very good. +rep Keep it up

 

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[Gèckö]

nice poem

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

thank you all!! Oh! and Mia u were thanked :3

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

this was actually a very nice p0em. U painted a very g0od picture of summer. U sh0uld never ever give up writing because there will always be people like me who you make happy by reading what u write. So keep it up! 0h, and i will always be here cheering u on! :ice:

 

[-S-]

Aww thanks!!

And its a wonderful poem!!

 

[Skylar Knight]

Really nice poem I enjoyed reading it Keep it up + rep

 

[Zeref]

i like it keep it up rep+

 

['Toxic]

Don't mention it, you just keep doing what you do but like I said, don't do this work b/c of people, do it b/c you love to write poetry or else you wont enjoy it.​