Very nice job, keep it up.
(Suiton: Goshokuzame) - Water Style: 5 feeding sharks
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will create 5 sharks of water to attack his opponent(s) by putting his hand on a water source. While being in a water source, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy. However, if the user severe his connection with the water, the sharks will disperse.
Note: Requires water source to use.
Okay now for this one, step onto this lake over here. After doing so then mold and channel your Suiton Chakra through your body and into the water below you and manipulate the Water to create five sharks made of water and control them to attack that boulder in the water over there.
After this pretend I use a Jutsu to hurt the Sharks and preform the second part of the Jutsu where you can regenerate the sharks if they are hurt.
(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (-15 per turn the target remains in the water)
Description: The user will first perform Dog hand seal and then the user create a large storm cloud, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain then turns into a large wave of water and sweeps the enemy off their feet. While the targets are trapped in the water, their chakra will slowly be drained away. Chakra draining properties last for two turns.
Okay so for this next Jutsu gather another portion of your Chakra and mold it into calm yet powerful Suiton Chakra. After doing this I want you to channel this Chakra through your body as you perform the Dog Hand seal. After you finish the Hand Seal I want you to release all the Chakra from your body and channel it into the clouds and shape the Chakra into a large storm cloud and make the cloud begin to rain. I then want you to manipulate this rain and make it gather up into a large amount of water and wash up and trap that dummy over there under water. If this were a real person, their Chakra would be drained for two turns if they stay in the water but in our RP that is kind of useless.