[Suiton] Suiton with Nathan-sensei

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"Suiton or Water release is one of the five basic element in our world and It is resourceful. It allows the user to use their chakra to create or manipulate water. Suiton can be used to trap enemies just like Kisame's Water Dome/Prison. Besides, the water becomes firm and stable in shape while on the process. Water Release is mainly common among the shinobi from Kirigakure and Amegakure. Water is strong against Fire because water extinguishes it. It is weak against Earth because it is sturdy and firmer than water and it also sucks up the water." Victorique clears her throat.

"Water Release can be a conductor for Lightning Release to increase the flow of electricity and paralyzing the enemy if it's hit. Likewise with Wind Release to increase the concussive and the overall better destructive force. Water is also a component of kekkei genkai: Ice Release, Wood Release, Storm Release, and Boil Release."

"And I want to learn Suiton because it can takes shapes and states also. Ever since I was a child I already admired water release, it can have a great damage and increases the damage of any weapons. That's all. Thank you."


(Sorry the explanation I used came from my prev training but since the training didn't continue so I just copied it U_U)
 
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"Well done, but I should just maybe a little more."

Water is a more or less passive element by nature. It flows freely and takes the shape of whatever it is contained in. I call it passive as it is a yielding element which goes and flows however the external forces and nature dictate it to. For example; still water will move and ripple at the slightest touch, a river flowing straight will move around a rock and take an alternate direction instead of just going through the rock. Wind can cause water to move in different directions. This is one of the reasons why water, a yielding element, is opposite to earth, an unyielding element. That rock in the bank of the river will not move for the water, it will stay firm. If the rock were to walk through the river straight, the water would go around the rock, not the other way around. This is a rudimentary understanding, however water itself can be very powerful and forceful. A large enough mass of water may disroot the rock if strong enough. Water may be condensed to a fine area and move at great speeds to cause a powerful impact. That is where variables come in, which is what any element manipulates, the variables of the properties that can enhance an element's potential. If you want to look at things in terms of balance, Taoism and philosophies behind water and it's general movement. Water is the Yin half, not forceful, yielding and water redirects energy instead of meeting it head on. The Chinese Internal styles of martial arts talk about redirecting your opponents force back onto them which is essentially a property of water (the redirection that is). Force is not met with force rather the force is allowed to continue until redirected suddenly, often times against even harder forces that are much stronger. An example would be if somebody were to punch you. They are traveling in one direction at a certain speed. You simply move out of the way while guiding the fist further in that direction, increasing the speed. Should there be a wall behind them, they make impact with that wall and most often hurt their hand.
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"Well done, but I should just maybe a little more."

"Questions?"
"Oh yeah, sorry. You asked a different question and I answered it different also. But I guess Wind is superior to water. Thank you for the more information.. I don't have any question."
 

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"Okay. Come here take this piece of paper, hold it in your hand. Try and channel your chakra into it, if done correctly. The paper should become damp."
 

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Victorique came closer and took the piece of paper. She stared at it first and then placed it between his two hands and she exhaled. The next thing she did was close her eyes. She started accumulating the chakra into her hand, she concentrated the chakra and slowly changing it into one of the elemental nature transformation, Water release. Victorique focused on transporting the chakra and releasing it into the fibrous paper. The dry paper turned into moistened one.
 

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So; before we start the techniques you have been given a choice. Template or other training method.

So idea is simple, I will post the techniques and I will ask you to analyse them for me, for example: how to use it in battle, how to counter it, what is good about this technique (pros), what is bad about it (cons), what you like about it and etc. I think you pretty much get what I mean. The "How to perform" - part is a bit, not needed for, but you are more than welcome to perform it, if you don't understand the technique. It's better if we focus on the important things, like actually analysing the whole technique and knowing how to use it in a fight. Only filling the template is boring and sometimes not fun. I want to make this training as enjoyable as I can, I know templates can be boring and dull at times.

Something below are basic guidelines to use:

Example of points for every technique
+ How to be used in a battle
+ How to be countered in a battle
+ Some advantages and disadvantages
+ Your personal opinion about the technique

Do you have any questions about method?

Or you can chose to use this template:

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[B]One/three disadvantages:[/B]
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[B]How you would use it in battle:[/B]
[B]How you would counter it:[/B]
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B][/CODE]
Your choice. ^^
 

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"Maybe I'll go with the first one since you said you wanted this training enjoyable ^^"

(Honestly, I don't know how this things work but I'll do my best U_U)
 

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So let's give this a short.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

What can you tell me about this technique?
 

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I'm very sorry Nathan-sensei for the late response since these past few days I'm not feeling well and I had to rest,
I'm very sorry. U_U since I'm still recovering, maybe, I'll get lost on the training.




➔ How to be used in a battle:
• it can be used to shield the user from D-Rank Katon jutsu. Furthermore, the user can use this with some lighting jutsu to increase the damage and create an opening.

➔ How to be countered in a battle:
• it can be countered by a D-rank Doton jutsu since it could be easily overpower or a strong Katon jutsu that can cause evaporation.

➔ Some advantages and disadvantages:
• The advantages are these justu doesn't need any water source, it can be used for defense just creating a small shields of water and also for offense it can create small blasts, and it can also extinguish small flames. The disadvantages are these jutsu can be countered easily since it is a D-rank and it cannot be used for long range attack.

➔ Your personal opinion about the technique
• This technique is very helpful for a starter and for defensing from a D-rank fire technique.
 

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That's fine mate.

Simple, straight to the point:

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

So by either using the two following options: Use a water source or releasing the mist from your mouth. You will create a thick mist again either out from your mouth, or turn the water source into a sort of mist. The mist thickness really depends on you, and how much chakra you want to put into it. This technique will make it hard for your target to see you, unless they have the Byakugan; Sharingan and Rinnegan users will have a hard time seeing you, just like a normal eyed ninja.
 
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