[Suiton] Suiton with Naruto!

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Finally. Well done.

As you cut through the lid with your jet of water, I take quick action, and perform a single handseal, channeling my Suiton chakra into your water wave, overpowering your chakra within it and using shape manipulation to form a large tornado of water that engulfs you and would knock you out, should you not defend. Your balance would be hampered too, as the wave you're standing on would become a spinning vortex of water, which would cause you to fall downwards.

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Release: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the Ram → Horse → Bird the user is able to create a technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Note: Requires a nearby water source
As Naruto would make the Tiger hand seal, the wave Neji would be standing on would begin to spin slowly. Knowing what would happen if he didn't respond right away, he'd channel his Suiton chakra within his body and then under his feet where the water wave is at. Using that he would create a water pillar that would lift him high above the forming vortex and out of immediate danger.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.



Soaring in the sky, Neji would begin gathering his Suiton chakra within his body as well as using the preexisting water in the area. Doing so, the vicinity of the battle grounds would begin to form into a white-pearly mist making it difficult for someone to see. The thickness would be so that someone in short range of each other would be able to slightly notice each other but beyond that it would be rather difficult.

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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.



Being mid range from Naruto, in the cover of the mist, he would begin to perform this sequence of hand seals, Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake. Once completed, he'd sent his Suiton chakra into the atmosphere where storm clouds would begin to accumulate. As the clouds would form, it would suddenly begin to rain around the entire premise. With Neji's chakra infused in the rain this would allow him to sense anything that has chakra.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.



With Neji's presence unknown to Naruto he'd patiently wait for his sensei's next move, completely aware of his location.
 

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Halting the battle for a while. Do you know what rank interactions are? I was supposed to ask you before the battle, but I forgot.

Hint: Read the elemental interaction guide by Izuna in the Custom RP Guides section and summarize what you understood from it.
 

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Halting the battle for a while. Do you know what rank interactions are? I was supposed to ask you before the battle, but I forgot.

Hint: Read the elemental interaction guide by Izuna in the Custom RP Guides section and summarize what you understood from it.
Yeah I know what rank interactions are. It's when one of your moves makes an interaction with something it loses/gains depending on what it clashes with. An example for this would be if someone fired a S ranked Fire but the opponent fired off an A ranked Fire. The collision favors the S rank since it's the stronger of the two and continue forward, however it would continue as a A rank since the A ranked fire used to counter that S rank is half the power of the S. Essentially A+A=S

You also slightly talked about this in our training thread on page 2.

I would go into detail about the range interactions as well but you didn't ask for that.
 

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Yeah I know what rank interactions are. It's when one of your moves makes an interaction with something it loses/gains depending on what it clashes with. An example for this would be if someone fired a S ranked Fire but the opponent fired off an A ranked Fire. The collision favors the S rank since it's the stronger of the two and continue forward, however it would continue as a A rank since the A ranked fire used to counter that S rank is half the power of the S. Essentially A+A=S

You also slightly talked about this in our training thread on page 2.

I would go into detail about the range interactions as well but you didn't ask for that.
You're correct.

Keep this in mind:

D+D=C
C+C=B
B+B=A
A+A=S
S+S=Strong S Rank, not F rank.

Now, if I fire off a projectile technique which is of A rank, and the number of projectiles I fire are 5, what would be the rank of each one? It's a tricky question.
 

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You're correct.

Keep this in mind:

D+D=C
C+C=B
B+B=A
A+A=S
S+S=Strong S Rank, not F rank.

Now, if I fire off a projectile technique which is of A rank, and the number of projectiles I fire are 5, what would be the rank of each one? It's a tricky question.
If you fired an A ranked tech that shot out 5 projectiles, the 5's ranks would be C for each one.
A=B+B
B=C+C
B=C+C
The last one comes off as a decimal so you would round it up, which would end up being a C rank as well.
 

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If you fired an A ranked tech that shot out 5 projectiles, the 5's ranks would be C for each one.
A=B+B
B=C+C
B=C+C
The last one comes off as a decimal so you would round it up, which would end up being a C rank as well.
Correct. There would be 4 C rank projectiles and the last one would be 4/5 C Rank, so we round it off to C Rank.
 

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As Naruto would make the Tiger hand seal, the wave Neji would be standing on would begin to spin slowly. Knowing what would happen if he didn't respond right away, he'd channel his Suiton chakra within his body and then under his feet where the water wave is at. Using that he would create a water pillar that would lift him high above the forming vortex and out of immediate danger.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.



Soaring in the sky, Neji would begin gathering his Suiton chakra within his body as well as using the preexisting water in the area. Doing so, the vicinity of the battle grounds would begin to form into a white-pearly mist making it difficult for someone to see. The thickness would be so that someone in short range of each other would be able to slightly notice each other but beyond that it would be rather difficult.

]
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.



Being mid range from Naruto, in the cover of the mist, he would begin to perform this sequence of hand seals, Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake. Once completed, he'd sent his Suiton chakra into the atmosphere where storm clouds would begin to accumulate. As the clouds would form, it would suddenly begin to rain around the entire premise. With Neji's chakra infused in the rain this would allow him to sense anything that has chakra.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.



With Neji's presence unknown to Naruto he'd patiently wait for his sensei's next move, completely aware of his location.
Using six handseals, puts you in a disadvantage, because even though the handseals are performed fast, they're no faster than a technique without handseals, but good idea of using a sensing jutsu to know my position.

I watch you propel yourself into the air via a pillar of water. Soon, the environment starts clouding with a thick mist, as I discern what jutsu it is. I perform a single handseal, and take a deep breath, expelling forth a large blast of uncontrollable wind towards your direction. The mist instantly clears out, and you're forced to counter my jutsu.

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
 

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Using six handseals, puts you in a disadvantage, because even though the handseals are performed fast, they're no faster than a technique without handseals, but good idea of using a sensing jutsu to know my position.

I watch you propel yourself into the air via a pillar of water. Soon, the environment starts clouding with a thick mist, as I discern what jutsu it is. I perform a single handseal, and take a deep breath, expelling forth a large blast of uncontrollable wind towards your direction. The mist instantly clears out, and you're forced to counter my jutsu.

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user does the Ram handseal and inhales, kneading his chakra into his lungs, exhaling a huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path. Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
With the mist around Neji, he would be preparing himself to perform his next technique as he's free falling from the sky back down, however he'd see that the mist was instantly blown away and that something was approaching. A Fuuton jutsu was on its way and quickly, reacting as such, Neji would accumulate his Suiton chakra within his body converting it into water. Opening up his mouth, he'd exhale a large quantity of dense water as a torrent that would make a barricade for the incoming attack.


Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.



With the attack countered, he'd land back onto ground level, standing on water battle arena and still mid-range from Naruto.
 

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Alright, that's enough. Your moves were alright, and your last move was the weakest. You went on the defensive, instead of going on the offensive, and shifting back the pressure on me. I thought of using a Genjutsu after my wind blast, but I didn't, cuz if I misused it, my sensei would disown me T_T

I liked your move, where you cut the lid with water severing wave. I gave you an opening to put pressure on me. You should've used something good after the mist jutsu, something like water prison or something of those sorts to trap me, and prevent me from blowing away the mist. You should've used water bullet technique, because it's a powerful stream tech, and you could use the same jutsu to push the lid towards me, instead of cutting away the lid. Pushing the lid towards me would force me to counter it. Once I would be busy countering it, you could've used a jutsu to trap me, so that my chances of countering the lid would be less.

Anyway, even though you're new, you know the concept of using your own water as a source for other techniques. You could also use your opponent's water as a source for your techniques, but only when the opponent's water technique is short range of you and also the rank comes in play;

Suppose I use a A-Rank water technique at you, which is a stream of water..you cannot use a B-Rank water technique to overpower my chakra within the stream, since my chakra is one rank higher. You can only use an S-Rank water technique to overpower my chakra, but it should also be within logic.
 

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Alright, that's enough. Your moves were alright, and your last move was the weakest. You went on the defensive, instead of going on the offensive, and shifting back the pressure on me. I thought of using a Genjutsu after my wind blast, but I didn't, cuz if I misused it, my sensei would disown me T_T

I liked your move, where you cut the lid with water severing wave. I gave you an opening to put pressure on me. You should've used something good after the mist jutsu, something like water prison or something of those sorts to trap me, and prevent me from blowing away the mist. You should've used water bullet technique, because it's a powerful stream tech, and you could use the same jutsu to push the lid towards me, instead of cutting away the lid. Pushing the lid towards me would force me to counter it. Once I would be busy countering it, you could've used a jutsu to trap me, so that my chances of countering the lid would be less.

Anyway, even though you're new, you know the concept of using your own water as a source for other techniques. You could also use your opponent's water as a source for your techniques, but only when the opponent's water technique is short range of you and also the rank comes in play;

Suppose I use a A-Rank water technique at you, which is a stream of water..you cannot use a B-Rank water technique to overpower my chakra within the stream, since my chakra is one rank higher. You can only use an S-Rank water technique to overpower my chakra, but it should also be within logic.
I was thinking Water Prison too but I was too far from you to actually do it since I had to be short range and I was mid range and airborne while you were on the ground. My other choice of most instead of Grudge Rain was doing a Water clone so that you wouldn't see it but that would have been my third move and I thought I'd be vulnerable since I'd just be airborne and you'd do something like blow the mist away....which you actually did lol
 

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I was thinking Water Prison too but I was too far from you to actually do it since I had to be short range and I was mid range and airborne while you were on the ground. My other choice of most instead of Grudge Rain was doing a Water clone so that you wouldn't see it but that would have been my third move and I thought I'd be vulnerable since I'd just be airborne and you'd do something like blow the mist away....which you actually did lol
Then you should've tried to close the distance. Anyway, training is over. Enjoy using Water!
 

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Then you should've tried to close the distance. Anyway, training is over. Enjoy using Water!
Probably, but that's for another time. Maybe when we actually have a real battle together! ^_^

Anyways, thanks for the training! It was an honor to have you as my senpai and then eventually my sensei haha
 
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