suiton training(with noni)

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique: i bring out a lighter then flow my katon chakra into it and i throw it with an open flame.i then turn the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards me.
Creative uses/strengths:to block projectiles like shurikens or kunais.to block your opponents view of you.to prevent your opponen from coming into short range
Drawbacks/counters:c rank water jutsu can be used to extinguish it.it prevents you from seeing your opponents. A large scale wind might be used to blow this jutsu away

Perform the technique:i create a small short flame at the dummy.by building my katon chakra and realeasing it towards the dummy.this will then burn the dummy
Creative uses/strengths:it has high temperature.it can be used quickly cause it requires no hand seals.it can burn multiple opponents
Drawbacks/counters:c rank water can be used to block this jutsu.it has high temperature which may burn the user.c rank earth can be used to block

Perform the technique:After performing the necessary hand seals Snake ? Ram ? Monkey ? Boar ? Horse ? Tiger, i inhale air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra,i spew a large fireball from my mouth after blowing through a ring made by my thumb and index finger, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.and it burns the dummy
Creative uses/strengths:the stream version can be used as a large scale jutsu.
the fireball version is large and can not be dodged easily.it can be used to change terrain
Drawbacks/counters:c rank water jutsu can extinguish this jutsu.b rank earth can be used to block this jutsu.s rank wind manipulation can be used to change its direction

 

[Noni]

I expect 3+ sentences for each section, got it?

Re-read the section.
Figure what you did wrong
and re-do it.

 

[NightKiing]

Okay senpai i will edit it

 

[Noni]

It will do for now.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno. The stream of fire can be created by stomping the ground (running across the ground in this case) or by spewing the flames (which will form an airborne ring of flames that will travel towards the enemy).

A brilliant jutsu. With one hand seal the user will send a stream of chakra either through their mouths or by stomping on the ground. They can be shaped in two ways either a circle shaped running through the air, or stream through the ground and when it gets in range trap the opponent in a inferno if flames. This jutsu has a great mobility to it. You can trap an opponent on ground making ir hard to move around great to stop quick opponents. Its also a stream based technique.

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( Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake ? Dragon ? Rabbit ? Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Okay this is a rather simple technique nothing to much about it, you will get a cord and send it towards the opponent, then using 4 hand seals you breathe through the cord and send fire through towards it burning the opponents upper body when caught. A great thing for the technique is you can use many opponents as a conductor to attack multiple targets. Though its a very straightforward technique.

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( Katon: Karyudan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making the tiger hand seal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

With one hand seal you will exhale a a breathe of fire. Nothing much to add to the technique. Its starightforward and a added note is you can use it in conjuction with the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the rock and make a devastating attack.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique:, I build up my katon chakra and breath out a stream of fire towards the dummy which i then manipulate to form several rings of fire on the ground around the dummy, encasing it in a set formation, before using them to strike it to reduce him to a pile of ashes.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to trap an opponent.it can be used against d rank water projectiles.it can be used to keep opponents back from coming near you.
Drawbacks/counters:a good c-rank water will extinguish the fire.it can be used only in short or mid range.a good c rank earth can prevent the opponent from the fire

Perform the technique:i reterive some ninja wire from my pouch and use it to ensnare those dummies from a distance, firmly wrapping it around them. After doing so,i perform four handseals and compress my Katon chakra into my lungs before exhaling along the cords, allowing the fire to "run" along the wire and assault the opponent
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to burn opponents. It can be used to ensnare opponents and burn them
Drawbacks/counters:the wire can conduct raiton which will paralize the user.the wire can easily be evaded by jumping away. The wire can be broken.

Perform the technique:, I want form one handseal whilst envisioning the nature of the Fire element. Gather a sizable portion of my superheated katon chakra into my lungs before exhaling it as a breath of flames.to wards the dummy
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used as projectiles. It can be used in conjuctiom with earth dragon bullets.it is a large scale jutsu there by making it hard to avoid
Drawbacks/counters:water dragon bullets can counter this jutsu easily.s rank wind manipulation can be used to blow the dragons away.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique:, I build up my katon chakra and breath out a stream of fire towards the dummy which i then manipulate to form several rings of fire on the ground around the dummy, encasing it in a set formation, before using them to strike it to reduce him to a pile of ashes.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to trap an opponent.it can be used against d rank water projectiles.it can be used to keep opponents back from coming near you.
Drawbacks/counters:a good c-rank water will extinguish the fire.it can be used only in short or mid range.a good c rank earth can prevent the opponent from the fire

Perform the technique:i reterive some ninja wire from my pouch and use it to ensnare those dummies from a distance, firmly wrapping it around them. After doing so,i perform four handseals and compress my Katon chakra into my lungs before exhaling along the cords, allowing the fire to "run" along the wire and assault the opponent
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to burn opponents. It can be used to ensnare opponents and burn them
Drawbacks/counters:the wire can conduct raiton which will paralize the user.the wire can easily be evaded by jumping away. The wire can be broken.

Perform the technique:, I want form one handseal whilst envisioning the nature of the Fire element. Gather a sizable portion of my superheated katon chakra into my lungs before exhaling it as a breath of flames.to wards the dummy
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used as projectiles. It can be used in conjuctiom with earth dragon bullets.it is a large scale jutsu there by making it hard to avoid
Drawbacks/counters:water dragon bullets can counter this jutsu easily.s rank wind manipulation can be used to blow the dragons away.

 

[Noni]

Here are four, all very basic.

( Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat ? Tiger ? Dog ? Ox ? Rabbit ? Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Okay with 6 hand seals you will sent a volley of small fireballs towards the opponent, they are sent in a very unpredictable manner making evasion difficult. The flames can also be controlled by the user making evasion even tougher. You can send shurikens towards the fireballs. Even with the shurikens they are sent unpredictably and can be controlled.

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( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

Okay for this technique without hand seals and with speed you will release a stream of fire towards the opponent, the fire acts in a way where it tries to wrap around the opponent burning them. Now its very quick to execute. I would also say its very flexible. One draw back is its straightforward.

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( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

Okay the opponent while mid-air will release a select number of fireballs which will rain down on the opponent. Each fireball you send down the weaker each get. Now you can aim anywhere while mid-air. I would also say its great to use because while mid-air you are handicapped unable to move physically so with this you have a attack to harm an opponent. Thing is you must be mid-air to perform the technique.

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( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

The user will send towards the opponent a small bright ball of fire towards the opponent through their mouths. This is a very basic technique, the ball goes straightforward towards the opponent and burn right on impact. Also its one of the few fire attacks that can travel long range. Though it says its bright Its not so bright to hurt an opponents vision so don't try to exploit that.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique: i form 6 hand seals and send a volley of small fireballs towards the dummy, they are sent in a very unpredictable manner making evasion difficult. I send shurikens towards the fireballs. Even with the shurikens they are sent unpredictable.
Creative uses/strengths:evading this technique is hard. It is a large scale jutsu.it is also a decieving jutsu
Drawbacks/counters: c rank water can extinguish the flames.a rank wind can be used to blow the balls away.it requires concentration in order to control the fireballs

Perform the technique:without hand seals and with speed i build up my katon chakra and exhale it through my mouth to release a stream of fire towards the dummy.
Creative uses/strengths:this jutsu can not be easily evaded in mid air.it is fast cause it requires no hand seal
Drawbacks/counters:c rank water can extinguish the stream.b rank doton can block the flow of the fire stream

Perform the technique:i jump up and charge my katon chakra towards my lungs then i begin to spit fire balls at the dummy to burn it.
Creative uses/strengths:it is good to attack opponents from above.it also forms plenty fireball which is hard to evade
Drawbacks/counters:c rank water can extinguis.if the opponent is fast he/she can easily evade the jutsu.an earth dome can be used to counter the jutsu

Perform the technique:i go to mid range to a dummy and build up my katon chakra in my lungs which i breathe out and quickly use shape manipulation to form it into a ball then i shoot it at the dummy and it burns it.
Creative uses/strengths:it travels long range.it can be used as a source of light in a dark room
Drawbacks/counters: c rank water can extinguish the ball. An earth wall can be used to block the jutsu.since it is one fire ball an s rank wind user can easily blow the fireball away

 

[Noni]

Done with C-Ranks. Make a list 1-5 (1 being highest)
of the your favorite jutsus on the C-Rank fire and explain why.

 

[NightKiing]

1. Phoenix fire sage,i love how you would be able to control the fire balls
2.fire scatter,i love being in mid range and attacking my opponents from the top
3.fire wall of flames,i love it being the only wall i think
4.running fire,i ve always loved attacking enemies with rings,its hard to evade
5.fire dragon bullet,i love the great projectile force

 

[Noni]

Though this are basics I expect more writing much more.
( Katon: Karyu Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Dragon ? Rat ? Ox ? Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated and exhaled as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that spread across the ground as it runs towards the enemy. Its temperature is such that it easily melts the ground as it travels and can reduce an enemy to ash.

Okay with 7 hand seals the user will send towards the opponent a stream of fire, the stream moves very fast through the ground, faster then normal techs on the B-Rank list. It has a large amount of condense heat so on contact it can severly burn an opponent to ash and can melt the ground. Its a stream technique so you must continue to send the stream until it hits the opponent.

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Okay fast technique, no hand seals and easy to perform. The user will send multiple fire shots though the more you send the more weaker they get each fireball. They do not act as normal fire that engulf but on contact will explode forcing the opponent back and burned in the area hit.

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

This jutsu is must like the C-Rank jutsu you most likely learn, just a very large version with more fire, and attack potential. The description does not mention you do any hand seals like the previous one so you can say its quicker to perform. Also its a projectile based technique.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique:i first perform seven handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Dragon ? Rat ? Ox ? Tiger and i knead my katon chakra into flames, which i then manipulate and exhale as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that spread across the ground as it runs towards the dummy.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to change terrain since it melts the ground. Its temperature can be used to kill opponents and burn them.
Drawbacks/counters:an a rank water can extinguish the fire, the opponent might just jump up and side ways since it takes time

Perform the technique:i concentrate my katon chakra into my hands and then realese it after shape manipulating it into balls and thenshoot small fire balls at the dummy which explodes on contact.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to throw opponents off balance.it has high exploding power.it can cause smoke which is used as distractions
Drawbacks/counters:b rank water can extinguish the shots.an earth wall will easily block the jutsu.

Perform the technique:i build up my katon chakra and exhale it from my mouth and then shape manipulate into a fireball that i learnt earlier but i put more chakra to make it bigger and stronger.and i shoot it at the dummy
Creative uses/strengths: it is a large scale jutsu and might not be easily evaded.i think it can attack two opponents that are close to each other.it can be performed quickly
Drawbacks/counters:an a rank water can extinguish,an earth dome can block.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique:i first perform seven handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Dragon ? Rat ? Ox ? Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which i then manipulate and exhale as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that spread across the ground as it runs towards the dummy.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to change terrain since it melts the ground. Its temperature can be used to kill opponents and burn them.
Drawbacks/counters:an a rank water can extinguish the fire, the opponent might just jump up and side ways since it takes time

Perform the technique:i concentrate my katon chakra into my hands and shoot small fire balls at the dummy which explodes on contact.
Creative uses/strengths:it can be used to throw opponents off balance.it has high exploding power.it can cause smoke which is used as distractions
Drawbacks/counters: this jutsu cannot be used when the teacher is tied.b rank water can extinguish the shots.an earth wall will easily block the jutsu.

Perform the technique:i build up my katon chakra and exhale it from my mouth and it form a stronger version of great fire ball
Creative uses/strengths: it is a large scale jutsu and might not be easily evaded.i think it can attack two opponents that are close to each other.it can be performed quickly
Drawbacks/counters:an a rank water can extinguish,an earth dome can block.

 

[Noni]

Again your just toying with this jutsus. Re-do them. If you need help I'll give an example. Not even trying z.z

 

[NightKiing]

I edited the first one

 

[Noni]

No not like that. I don't know why you decided to edit it that way and just negated your training of those specific jutsus. Think next time and re-do it with a new post. Yes re-do it again and do it right.

 

[NightKiing]

Okay i am sorry

Perform the technique:i Perform the required hand seals while gathering my fire chakra, then i proceed to release the chakra and transform it into blazing flames that i release as a thin and fast jet of flames, that would spread across the ground and run towards my target, this technique could melt the ground on its way to the target and would easily turn him/her to ash should they take a hit from it,i go ahead and turn the dummy to ash."
Creative uses/strengths:it is short-to long range,it has high temperature and it could be used to melt the terrain
Drawbacks/counters: it requires hand seals,could you also tell me a counter for this

Perform the technique:i Start by gathering my fire chakra and then channeling my fire chakra to my hands, i then make use of nature manipulation and mold the fire chakra into actual flames before relesing it and shaping the flames into balls of fire, these balls of flames don't work like regular fireballs, instead of fireballs that burn the target,i shoot out these balls of fire and have it explode when it comes into contact with the dummy,
Creative uses/strengths:no hand seals required,multiple fire shots can be used to attack from diffrent direction.
Drawbacks/counters:can only be used in mid range,cant set the enemy on fire,water sheild can be used to counter the jutsu

Perform the technique:I begin by concentrating my Katon chakra and I then start to feed it into my lungs from my gut, building up the superheated chakra. I quickly amass a sufficient amount for this technique I then focus the chakra out of my mouth, spitting the entire mass of chakra out. As soon as it has left my mouth I use nature manipulation to change the chakra to super hot fire. Once the fire is formed I then use shape manipulation to control the shape of the fire, I manipulate into a large, superheated fireball.
Creative uses/strengths:big fireball makes it harder to dodge,doesnt require hand seals.
Drawbacks/counters:it is short range only,
could you please tell me the counter?,i couldnt think of any

 

[Noni]

Well some counters include the fact that since its only short range I can easily push myself back using a basic wind attack to do so, as long as I don't aim for the fireball. Also its very slow at moving. Water technique to douse it at its core. Use a wall or explosive armor to protect from it.

( Katon: Goenkyu ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse ? Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.

Okay now this jutsu is similar like the ones previous you learned. With two hand seals the user will send a large fire ball, roughly the same size as the fireball the Uchia's are most famous for. The ball is dense and when on contact will act to carry the opponent almost attaching itself to them, which will then continue to move some distance before it explodes. It moves in all ranges.

( Katon: Goenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Okay jumping in the air, the user will send three giant bullets of fire that rain down upon the opponent. Their size is the same as the Uchia fireball they are known to use. When they come on contact with the ground they erupt like geysers super heating and burning the area as well as the opponent. They can be aimed anywhere and are projectile based attacks. They go long range, also though it sends you must jump in the air pretty much whenever you are mid-air you can use it, with no drawbacks.

( Katon: Haisekisho ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

A favorite and a great one to use. A user will send very thick and hot ash from their mouths to the opponent, the ash alone can cause serious burns. While the user is still sending the ash it right when it gets in the same area of the opponent you will click your teetch igniting the ash causing a sever explosion. It needs 4 hand seals and the ash moves rather slow. Explain this one with detail.

 

[NightKiing]

Perform the technique: i weave two hand seals and build up my katon chakra in my stomach then pass it to my lungs,then i pass the super heated chakra into my mouth then before realeasing it i use nature manipulation to turn it into fire and i use shape manipulation to turn it into a fireball which i shoot at the dummy
Creative uses/strengths: it is up to long range,it can drill through solid earth,it explodes on impact with the opponnent
Drawbacks/counters:it requires hand seals so it is not as fast as those that do not require handseal, water prison can be used to block this jutsu

Perform the technique:I jump up and i begin by concentrating my Katon chakra and I then channel it into my lungs. There I begin to build it up, quickly amassing a significant amount of chakra which should be more than enough for this technique. I then focus the chakra out of my mouth into three seperate parts, as soon as I spit them out I use nature manipulation to change them into three fireballs. The fireballs travel quickly towards the dummy and as they near it I manipulate them so that when they hit on impact, they erupt into a geyser of flame. Hitting the dummy and making it disperse.
Creative uses/strengths:it ranges up to long range,can be done while avoiding an incoming attack.
Drawbacks/counters:you haue to be in the air to perform it,when in the air the user is volunreble to wind attacks.

Perform the technique:i weave four hand seals and begin to build up my katon chakra which i pass to my lungs to superheat,after superheating i move the chakra into my mouth and realease it,while realeasing it i use my nature manipulation to turn it into ash and i spew it at the dummy,when the ash gets to the dummy i click my teeth and it explodes burning the dummy to ash.
Creative uses/strengths:its large scale and it cause huge explosion.the ash even with out exploding is hot enough to cause a 3rd degree burn.
Drawbacks/counters:a wind user might blow the ashes away.the ashes moves slowly.i think earth dome if activated quickly should be a good counter.right?

I hope the description was good?

 

[Noni]

It was sub-par. Like I said 3+ sentences are expected.

( Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

Okay with no hand seals the user will send several large dragon shaped fireballs towards the opponent, they are of intense heat and burn on contact. It travels in all ranges and you can send more then one ball. Its fast to perform and simple. This technique is most famous for setting up Kirin.

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( Katon: Hosenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

Okay the user will have a set of shurikens in one of their hands up to 4-6 I would say. The user will then launch the projectiles towards the opponent while at the same time while they have been launch the user will release a stream of fire towards them which will set all of them on fire. The shurikens move at normal pace but have great attack potency and will not only pierce but burn the opponent in that area hit. Its also a annoyance for the opponent for if they are pierced the shuriken will continue to burn which will hurt the opponent terribly.

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( Katon: Onidoro ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the atmosphere around him to create several ghost-like flames resembling heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.

The user will do one hand seal and release fire around themselves and manipulate the shape of the fire into several ghost-linke flames. They have horns on their heads and yellow eyes. Its intent is to scare an opponent but I doubt it would actually cause much harm to an opponent by scaring them. The ghost travel towards the opponent on the ground they attemp to swarm the target leaving no room for evasion. On contact the opponent will be burned by the ghosts.