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How you would counter it: i would create an earth sword and use it to block the water sword when ever the user wants to strike

Different one please. Though it is good, I want something different. Then just creating a different elemental sword and countering with it.

How you perform it(with as much detail as you can): i would first focus my chakra into my hands then i use nature transformation to transform my chakra into a water sword.

Where is the detail, do it again.

Also when I say do something again, I don't mean repost the template over again, just the two sections I point out, improve those said areas.
 

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How you would counter it: i would counter it by shooting several lightning bolts at the user so if the sword is still in the user's hand, the lightning bolt will hit it and electrocute the user.

How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): i would start by gathering up my suiton chakra in my hand (palm) then manipulate the chakra on my palm into a water sword that has sharp edges that can easily cuts through items.
 

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You still didn't say which hand you gather your chakra in. Z.Z

You didn't go up to my clone and explain where you attacked him, how many times you slashed him with the sword, and if you did anything else that may be mentioned. YOu can also use free-form as well.

I want you to try, I want you to give your best effort, and if you can't do that

No sensei but i beg you not to be angry at me just see me as young naruto (a little annoying but eager to learn) and i know that i will one day make you proud of being my sensei (just like naruto to iruka)
If what you said here is true, then prove it.
 

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As hayama sees the clone he immediately channels his suiton chakra into his right hand and manipulates the suiton chakra into forming a water sword and runs towards the clone and immediately he enters short range with the clone he jumps up and then comes down on the clone slicing the clone vertically from the head to the legs and then says "did i get it sensei?"
 

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See that was good, well done!

(Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.

Gather your suiton chakra up in your arm then release it holding your arm outwards infront of you, thus creating a shield of water. This can protect you from low level earth techniques, and low level taijutsu techniques [D-rank only] and projectile weapons also.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can be used to aid in taijutsu.
  • 2. It can be used to block weapons e.g kunais, shurikens, e.t.c.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The user cannot perform any handseal when the shield is still in hand.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you woulduseit in battle: i would use it mainly in taijutsu to block if my opponent wants to use any weapons against me.
How you would counter it: i would counter it by shooting lightning bolts at the user and whenever the lightning bolts hit the water shield, it will electrocute the user.
How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): by concentration, i gather up my suiton chakra into my arms and then i release the suiton chakra and use it to form a shield made of water.
 

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One/three disadvantages:
1. The user cannot perform any handseal when the shield is still in hand.
2.
3.

The shield is connected to your arm, you can still perform hand seals. So give me another one.

How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): by concentration, i gather up my suiton chakra into my arms and then i release the suiton chakra and use it to form a shield made of water.

I expect the amount of detail you did for the other before, I want that as a standard, this is below my standard.
 

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One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The justu lasts for only a round when used.
  • 2. It can only be used once(it dissapears after blocking).
  • 3.
How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): whenever sets of weapons like kunais and shurikens are launched against me or i am ready to engage someone in taijutsu, i focus and channel my suiton chakra into my arms and release the suiton chakra and manipulate it into a water shield to block the weapons.
 

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One/three disadvantages:
1. The justu lasts for only a round when used.
2. It can only be used once(it dissapears after blocking).

They are the same thing. Be creative, I'm sure you can be. Don't give me dull ones, use your mind.
 

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One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It can be easily shattered by an earth justu.
  • 2. When the justu comes in contact with a fire justu, it causes a mist that blocks the user's view of the opponent except the user has a sharingan, byakugan or rinnengan.
  • 3.
 

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Eh, good enough.

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

Perform the three seals, then gather your suiton chakra in your hands then use shape manipulation to create a whip of water. that you can whip around my clone, lighting techs can be channeled though the whip for a combo attack.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can be used to draw an opponent nearer.
  • 2. It can be used for a combo, i.e when the whip is wrapped around the opponent's waist it can be used to channel a lightning justu to hit the opponent.
  • 3. It can be used to interrogate the opponent i.e it will cause severe pain if used to beat the opponent.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. When the justu is wrapped around the opponent and the opponent does a lightning justu like chidori nagashi, the water whip will channel the lightning towards the user and electrocute the user.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you woulduseit in battle: i would use it in a combo to pull an opponent to another justu.
How you would counter it: i would counter it by shooting several bolts at the user so in order to avoid electrocution the user will cancel the justu.
How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): as i see the clone i quickly perform three handseals and i channel my suiton chakra into the palm of my right hand then by concentration i use nature manipulation to manipulate my suiton chakra into a whip made of water then i run towards your clone and slash you clone horizontally.
 

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Well done.

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.

Perform the seals, gather your suiton chakra in your mouth, then release a sticky liquid at my feet to trap me in. This technique is very, very handy for most fights, as it traps the target, so you can attack with stronger attacks, without the target moving, only movement they can make is handseals, unless you cover their whole body in the stuff also.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. The justu can be used to trap an opponent.
  • 2. The justu can be used to restrict the opponents movement i.e if the user does the justu in front of the opponent, the opponent will not want to move forward.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.if the user is fighting in alliance with another person and the other ninja is behind the opponent and the user does this justu if the opponent dodges it by bending the justu will hit the other ninja.
  • 2. The justu can be easily countered by doing an earth jutsu.
  • 3.
How you woulduseit in battle: i would mainly use it to restrict the opponent's movement while i perform another justu that will kill the opponent.
How you would counter it: i would counter it by creating an earth pillar in front of me that will cancel the jutsu.
How you perform it(withasmuch detailasyou can): to perform the jutsu to stick you to the ground i make the required hand seals and channel my suiton chakra to my throat and then i aim at your feet and i release a sticky water syrup at your feet sticking your feet to the ground.
 

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Long sigh.

One/three advantages:
1. The justu can be used to trap an opponent.
2. The justu can be used to restrict the opponents movement i.e if the user does the justu in front of the opponent, the opponent will not want to move forward.
3.

They are the same thing. Different ones.

One/three disadvantages:
1.if the user is fighting in alliance with another person and the other ninja is behind the opponent and the user does this justu if the opponent dodges it by bending the justu will hit the other ninja.
2. The justu can be easily countered by doing an earth jutsu.
3.

First. Not going to cut it, as creative and different it is, highly unlikely you would trap your own friendlies.
Second. I want a different one.

How you would counter it: i would counter it by creating an earth pillar in front of me that will cancel the jutsu.

How? How would a simple earth pillar cancel it out?
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can be used to hold an opponent down for an incoming attack.
  • 2.
  • 3.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It does not damage the user or kill the user it just sticks the user to the ground.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would counter it: i would counter it by releasing a blast of wind to blow away the jutsu.
 

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You don't release it under you, that would be dumb; you would release it out in front of you.

Wind and water are cancel one another one another out, if they are of the same rank.
 

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I made a mistake sensei this is what i meant.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It does not kill nor injure the target it just sticks them to the ground.
  • 2.
  • 3.
How you would counter it: i would counter it by using change of body stance to subtitute myself with another object to escape the justu.
 
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