Suiton Training with Kiritsugu

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I understand!

*I focus my chakra into my hand this time, rather than into my stomach and i gather water from the nearby river and focus it into my hand. With the water in my hand, i apply shape transformation to make the ball of water in my hand into a rod-like shape. Pouring my chakra more into the length of the rod i make sure all of the water is equally saturated with chakra, and then i focus on molding the chakra infused water into a thinner shape. The rod of water flattens to form more of a blade-like shape. Now all that is left to do is make it hard enough to slice though denser materials.

I gather more water and more chakra into my hand and add it to the blade-like shape i have already created. Making sure not to increase the size of the blade i already have, i add the water to it and use my chakra to condense it down to its original shape, making it extremely dense in the process. The blade is now compressed to be as strong as steel. I swing it a few times in the air to test its durability, and when i'm satisfied, i swing it at a nearby rock. The rock is cut in two and the two halves fall away from each other.
 

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Perfect! Well done! Note that since most of the Fire techs are Fireballs, they are a sphere shaped attack released at you.
Say you had that sword. How would you proceed to defend against the Fireballs to make them completely useless?
 

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Perfect! Well done! Note that since most of the Fire techs are Fireballs, they are a sphere shaped attack released at you.
Say you had that sword. How would you proceed to defend against the Fireballs to make them completely useless?

Hmm... For a start if confronted with a large scale Fireball attack, i would try to simply split it using the sword of water, as Bee did with Samehada here.
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However, as that could be a challenge with the fire overpowering my water, I would try to extend the length of my water blade and stab it through the center of the attack to hopefully implode it from the inside rather than confronting it head-on.
 

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Hm...perfect. Slice the water ball clean through, like it is a cannon ball. Extending the range was a great idea as well!
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
Okay, proceed to step over to this lake.
Place your hand upon the water and send your chakra into it, forming a shark.
Have that very shark jump into the air towards my clone, attacking him.
 

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Okay! I didn't think my sword would cut the fireball. Haha.

*I step toward the body of water and as i approach the shore i focus my chakra into my feet. I gently step onto the water and the chakra sent to my feet allows me to stand firmly on top of the water. I place my hand, palm down, on the water and as i pour my chakra into it, the water begins to ripple beneath my hand. I visualize a shark in my mind. I see its razor sharp rows of teeth, its pointy nose, its large dorsal fin and its long fish tail. My imagination gives shape and form to the chakra i am molding in the water, and eventually the chakra takes the form of the shark i visualized.

As i send another quick burst of chakra into the water, the liquid shark i just produced springs from the lake into the air, maintaining its shark-like appearance. I focus my chakra and coerce the shark attack to fly through the air toward your shadow clone. As the shark nears, its large mouth opens and moves to bite the clone's arm. As the watery teeth sink into the clone's arm, the entire elemental shark bursts causing minor concussive damage, dissipating the shadow clone.*
 

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...I have nothing to add. Absolutely amazing. O_O You literally covered every detail imaginable.
(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.
Now, for this next jutsu, form three handseals (Rat -> Dog -> Ox), then focus your water chakra into your hands to create a long whip made of water.
Proceed to attack my clone with that very whip, but be creative with what you do with it.
 

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Thank you!

*I mold my chakra into my hands and form the seals Rat -> Dog -> Ox and form a long, flowing whip of liquid water. As i allow the chakra within the whip to flow freely with the water, i flick my wrist around and test the tensile strength of the length of water.

I feel the movements of the water whip and learn how it moves in response to my movements. I raise my hand above my head and throw it down in front of me, flicking my wrist as i bring my arm down. Half-way through the arc, i spin my wrist 90 degrees to the left, perpendicular to the ground. With the movements of my wrist, the whip of water flies through the air and wraps around the wrist of the shadow clone. I pull with most of my strength and pull the shadow clone toward me, hand first. With a quick flurry of movement in an arching motion, i spin more of the remaining length of the whip, and spin it around the throat of the shadow clone.

With my free hand, i motion towards the water and send my flow my chakra into the lake next to me. I force the water to flow into the already formed whip, increasing its size, and i focus my chakra into maintaining its rigidity, causing the whip to start constricting around the shadow clone's throat, forcing it away.*
 

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Kirigakure should be happy to have such an amazing RPer, dear Lord. Perfectly explained, I could literally imagine it happening.

So, naturally, you covered one aspect of using the whip, in a more offensive manner. What other purposes might a whip serve? Also, what could happen if you combine this with Lightning?
Lastly, how might the range affect such a move?
 

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Hahaha. Thanks, man!

I guess it could also be used to move oneself to otherwise unreachable locations, such as latching onto tree branches or jutting rocks on cliff sides while free falling to catch myself, theoretically if my reaction time was good enough i could use it to catch weapons thrown at me currently in the air, or i could even use it to stop weapons at a closer range, as the whip of water can still function as a normal whip weapon.
 

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Very creative descriptions, however, don't forget that Lightning and Water work very well together. If you catch an opponent with this, and then add Lightning, then you can shock and possibly paralyze them.
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
Okay, for this next jutsu...
I would like you to focus your chakra internally. This is rather rare for the Suiton element, so grasp the concept first. Then when you push your Suiton chakra into your mouth, add to it another wave of Chakra to make it sticky. Once you build up enough pressure in your mouth, release upon the ground before us to create a sticky lake.
 
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