[Suiton]- Penguin2640

[-Cobalt-]

Waits for student.

 

[Penguin]

Tobirama walks up next to his sensei.

Hello Cobalt sensei! How's it going with the new promotion!

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[-Cobalt-]

Post and perform the last technique you did ^^

 

[Penguin]

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water by waving the Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare → Hands spread in front palms out. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This technique requires a sufficient amount of water, which can be provided by expelling it from one's mouth. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself. Water clones can be used in preparation for the technique, which block an opponent's attack and trap the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. The opponent will be trapped, not being able to move at all.
• 2. You will have 1 free hand to deal a devistating blow to your opponent.
• 3. Water clones can help prepare the technique.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. You give up the use of 1 hand when doing this technique.
• 2. You need a water source.
• 3. There is a B-rank suiton that is exactly the same as this jutsu only you need no water source and your hands are free.

How you would use it in battle: I would trap my opponent until he drowns.
How you would counter it: I would not go near any water sources.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):

After performing the necessary handseals, Tobirama kneads the chakra in his left hand and water starts making an orb around your clone. As this is happening I put my hand by your head and the water gets very heavy, becoming a prison.

 

[-Cobalt-]

Good. Next technique.


(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

A technique where you basically turn yourself into liquid. You cannot attack while in this form, you are vulnerable to lightning and fire but you avoid physical damage.

 

[Penguin]

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. No physical attack shall harm me!
• 2. Wind, Earth, and Water are innefective!
• 3. If I used this in a lake, an opponent would be hard pressed to find me.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. This is a poor man Hozuki's technique.
• 2. You cannot attack.
• 3. Katon and Raiton are commonly used for attack.

How you would use it in battle: I would use it to defend against Taijutsu attacks or Wind, Earth, and Water.
How you would counter it: I would use lightning or fire.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I concentrate my Suiton chakra in my arm, and suddenly my arm turns to liquid!


Should I do the points still?

 

[-Cobalt-]

Yeah you can keep doing them.



(Suiton: Suishū Gorugon) - Water Release: Powerful Blasting Rain Trench
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user after performing Dragon → Tiger will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. It has been known to transform it into a dragon with a gaping mouth to attack. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent.

After doing two hand seals you summon a large amount of water which you can then manipulate as you wish. Once you summon it will remain stationary until you use it. A very versatile technique which allows you to make a water source or even use it however you wish. Bullets, animals etc. everything can be done with it. Only drawback is the low rank.

 

[Penguin]

(Suiton: Suishū Gorugon) - Water Release: Powerful Blasting Rain Trench

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user after performing Dragon → Tiger will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. It has been known to transform it into a dragon with a gaping mouth to attack. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. No water source needed!
• 2. Attacks from multiple directions.
• 3. I only need two hand seals, which is not much.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. This is a pretty straightforward technique that is very counterable.
• 2. I guess it would take time to summon that much water.
• 3. There is a jutsu like this that is way better in B-ranks.

How you would use it in battle: I would use it to attack an opponent, defend against B-level Katon.
How you would counter it: I would use a simple Doton technique.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): After making the necessary hand seals, I concentrate my Suiton chakra out in the air, forming water. The water forms a dragons head and decimates the opposing Bunshin.

 

[Gutsy]

(Suiton: Suishū Gorugon) - Water Release: Powerful Blasting Rain Trench

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user after performing Dragon → Tiger will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. It has been known to transform it into a dragon with a gaping mouth to attack. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. No water source needed!
• 2. Attacks from multiple directions.
• 3. I only need two hand seals, which is not much.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. This is a pretty straightforward technique that is very counterable.
• 2. I guess it would take time to summon that much water.
• 3. There is a jutsu like this that is way better in B-ranks.

How you would use it in battle: I would use it to attack an opponent, defend against B-level Katon.
How you would counter it: I would use a simple Doton technique.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): After making the necessary hand seals, I concentrate my Suiton chakra out in the air, forming water. The water forms a dragons head and decimates the opposing Bunshin.

Suddenly Coby disappears right in front of your eyes right after you have performed your technique leaving you all alone. Suddenly a guy named Gutsy appears out of nowhere, materializing from the water right in front of you.

"Hello there, I will be your new teacher.... I watched your training and this last technique and explanation was good, do you have any question about it? You can ask any questions you wish about a technique after learning it and i will try my best to explain it..."


If you have no further questions, I will have you proceed by performing the following technique, and then you will explain to me its weaknesses and strengths as you have done previously. You will also be giving me an example of how you would counter the technique and use it in combat. Basically you will be doing basically the same template as you have done all along, and see if you have an questions seeing that some of the techniques are somewhat vague sometimes.

Another thing, after performing the technique, and describing it all, and you have no questions, please vm me due to my laptop being quite old and slow and it wont let me subscribe to anything. Also when performing techniques i wish for you to use this site to take note if there is any new or old information missing from a technique. And finally when performing techniques I will require you to make a good description as possible stretching your abilities to the utmost.

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(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water release: Water Bullet

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

This technique requires no hand seals what so ever, and it is quite simple, you gather your suiton chakra within your stomach, throat and mouth, whereas you will when releasing it through your mouth turn it into actual water. then manipulate it into the shape of a large rotating sphere which has quite impressive force.

 

[Penguin]

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water release: Water Bullet

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. No water source needed!
• 2. Very easy to use attack, which will not be hard to execute.
• 3. No hand seals are needed! :x3:.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. This is a pretty straightforward technique that is very counterable.
• 2. Does not leave too big of a water source after use.
• 3. There is a jutsu like this that is way better in S-ranks.

How you would use it in battle: I would use it to attack an opponent, defend against B-level Katon.
How you would counter it: I would blow it away with a decent Fuuton, use a Doton.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Tobirama starts manipulating the chakra within him to a cool, fluid, and quick chakra. A suiton chakra. As he manipulates the chakra in his gut, it travels up his body until it reaches his throat. He then spits out the chakra which is now a water ball.

 

[Gutsy]

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water release: Water Bullet

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. No water source needed!
• 2. Very easy to use attack, which will not be hard to execute.
• 3. No hand seals are needed! :x3:.

One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):

• 1. This is a pretty straightforward technique that is very counterable.
• 2. Does not leave too big of a water source after use.
• 3. There is a jutsu like this that is way better in S-ranks.

How you would use it in battle: I would use it to attack an opponent, defend against B-level Katon.
How you would counter it: I would blow it away with a decent Fuuton, use a Doton.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): Tobirama starts manipulating the chakra within him to a cool, fluid, and quick chakra. A suiton chakra. As he manipulates the chakra in his gut, it travels up his body until it reaches his throat. He then spits out the chakra which is now a water ball.

Alright first off, the advantages you have put down above are quite obvious and simple, though that is not what I wish to know, of course it does not need a water source, and it is easy to execute yes, but similar it is easy to counter. That is why you would use it in a combination with another technique, respectfully from another element that complements this technique, some techniques would be that of the earthen element to trap the opponent while the water bullet travels towards them. Again your disadvantages which you mentioned are also pretty straightforward, and about the countering, a doton technique is stronger than water yes, and it is a safe choice in most situations, though it is an obvious move and that is why the opponent will try and make you unable to perform doton techniques, just a little heads up in the future . Usage in battle which you mentioned is quite vague and I would like for you to elaborate on how you would use it in combat, such as a combination and other forms of usage. Finally I do not feel as if you have understood the technique completely seeing your performance of the technique, I would like for you to perform it once again, just the technique with as much description as possible, meaning I will require you to write a single paragraph of 5 sentences describing your usage of the technique.


After this little speech, I am going to switch things up again, first take note that from now on you will perform the technique with a description of at least 5 sentences, while also describing to me how you would use it in combat and you will ask me any questions you have for the desired technique. This is only to help you further your desriptive skills for future spars and battles. So please forget the point system you have been using and do as I just asked, thank you.

 

[Penguin]

Tobirama stands still, as he starts to gather suiton chakra in his stomach. As he does this, he lets the chakra go up to his mouth until the right amount of suiton chakra is reached, I spit out the chakra at a rock about 4 meters away. I make the chakra a big ball of Suiton by using shape manipulation, and make the ball compressed by using chakra manipulation. As a result of the manipulation, the outer part of the sphere soaks the rock and leaves behind damp spots, and most of the rock is left drenched.

For combat purposes, I would use this as a straightforward attack, use this when someone is in the air to hit them, or if someone is expelling a Raiton jutsu out of their mouth I would use the jutsu to not only hurt them with Suiton, but hopefully hurt them with some of their own Raiton.

 

[Gutsy]

Great that was much better, we will continue using this exact concept from now on. It was a good description of the entire situation and your actions, and I would like to remind you that this technique is both fast executed and a fast moving projectile, meaning you can move on to the next technique rather fast. Just remember that water conducts lightning and thus if the water is in contact with you when the technique happens you can easily be a target of lightning users if not careful. Also a quick reminder, as water is weak to earth, it is highly recommended that you do not use this against earth style users of any kind, that is why a very essential thing is to study your opponents character before entering battle. Most skilled water users will find a way around earth techniques which is possible, seeing that strength is essential through water release and using it in the right manner, that is why this technique since it is fast can be used in conjunction with other elements or another quick water jutsu to force the opponent to either get distracted or be distracted by the bullet itself.

If you have no further questions (you may ask me questions when ever you wish) I will move on.



(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Now this technique is a little different, as you can see in this link below it is basically the same technique though their names are a bit different. But the technique is essentially the same. This technique requires a single hand seal, the tiger hand seal to be performed. After you have performed the hand seal you will proceed by slamming your foot into the ground below you whereas you will with your chakra create a jet which shoots through the ground as on the picture in the link. This slicing jet of water is capable of slicing through solid rock of good density, though strong enough earth techniques will stop it. (C-rank will stop it, D-rank will stop it and be destroyed in the process).

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[Penguin]

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Tobirama stands still as he starts to gather some Suiton chakra under himself. When Tobirama feels like he gathered almost enough, he flashes the Tiger hand seal and stomps at the ground. By using shape manipulation, he makes the water appear as a jet. By using chakra manipulation, he makes the water dense and sharp. The water then rises above from the ground, cutting through solid rock.

For combat purposes, I would use this attack if my opponent was on the ground, gathering chakra for an attack. I would use this if someone was also using the Hiding like a mole technique with the sensory technique. Definitely would not use this if someone was in the air, as they could easily dodge it with a Wind Stream attack.

 

[Gutsy]

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Tobirama stands still as he starts to gather some Suiton chakra under himself. When Tobirama feels like he gathered almost enough, he flashes the Tiger hand seal and stomps at the ground. By using shape manipulation, he makes the water appear as a jet. By using chakra manipulation, he makes the water dense and sharp. The water then rises above from the ground, cutting through solid rock.

For combat purposes, I would use this attack if my opponent was on the ground, gathering chakra for an attack. I would use this if someone was also using the Hiding like a mole technique with the sensory technique. Definitely would not use this if someone was in the air, as they could easily dodge it with a Wind Stream attack.

I don't feel happy about the situation between us, seeing your not asking any questions or talking to me, it makes me feel rather afraid that I am not explaining myself well enough to you or maybe you simply have no questions at all which is rather unusual. (Just telling you since I only wish for you to gain all the knowledge possible in this element)

Anyways your explanation is at my satisfactory level, seeing you explained your motions quite well though some more information would have been good such as explaining the direction of where the water jet is going and how high it shoots into the air while also carving through the ground leaving a trail behind. The technique itself you said you would never use it if an opponent is in the air, but what if the opponent is descending from the air, you could use this technique to force them into defense as they land on the ground, correct? If someone is underground and your using this technique you cannot rely that you will have any form of sensory abilities thus this technique would essentially be useless against people underground unless you have some sort of sensory. That is why I would suggest that you do not use this technique against people who use hiding like a mole except under unique circumstances. Other ways of using this techniqque, the description is quite vague if it goes in a straight line or not, though since it is described as a jet it is highly possible that it goes in a straight line, thus it is a quick yet easily dodgeable technique, that is why this technique is good used for distractions or close combat. Also a quick note, a good way of helping you describing your moves better in training is to act as if your up against a real opponent.

For the next technique:

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

Now for this technique you may refer to some techniques which are similar in some ways, and I will list those techniques below. Now this technique is rather simple, like before you will gather a good amount of chakra with your stomach which you will lead through your system and into your mouth where when you release it through your mouth towards the opponent it will turn into a powerful wave of water which can carve through earth of low proportions if used in quick conjunction at the same location (D-rank earth). May I note this technique only shoots one wave thus to make more you must waste another jutsu slot in your move (which I do not recommend). This technique also travels along the ground thus it is best used against people on the ground or descending towards the ground catching them off guard. Now you will perform the technique and explain to me everything you understand about it and ask me any questions related to it, and a quick reminder, 5 lines of explanation for the technique please.

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These two are similar in the way of its usage though one flies through the air while the other is an actual wave and is most similar to the Chaos Water Wave, and similar to the water gun.

 

[Penguin]

No questions on this one. Pretty basic, I think I grasped it.

Tobirama takes his stance, two feet on the ground, head held high, and starts gathering Suiton chakra. As he gathers chakra, he feels cool, calm, mellow, and flowing, due to the chakra he is gathering is Suiton chakra. When Tobirama gathers enough chakra in his gut, it travels to his chest, past his throat, and in his mouth. Once in his mouth, Tobirama spits out the Suiton chakra he gathered with force. As he spits it out, due to him using chakra manipulation, it turns into compressed water, capable of shattering low ranking earth. After the chakra is spit out, it clashes against the ground, soaking and scarring it.

I would use this technique if someone was hiding behind a small earth defence [D-rank or lower], if someone was in the air [I would shoot them down], or if I was in the air and someone shot a vicious Katon at me, I could defend with this jutsu.

 

[Gutsy]

No questions on this one. Pretty basic, I think I grasped it.

Tobirama takes his stance, two feet on the ground, head held high, and starts gathering Suiton chakra. As he gathers chakra, he feels cool, calm, mellow, and flowing, due to the chakra he is gathering is Suiton chakra. When Tobirama gathers enough chakra in his gut, it travels to his chest, past his throat, and in his mouth. Once in his mouth, Tobirama spits out the Suiton chakra he gathered with force. As he spits it out, due to him using chakra manipulation, it turns into compressed water, capable of shattering low ranking earth. After the chakra is spit out, it clashes against the ground, soaking and scarring it.

I would use this technique if someone was hiding behind a small earth defence [D-rank or lower], if someone was in the air [I would shoot them down], or if I was in the air and someone shot a vicious Katon at me, I could defend with this jutsu.

Alright, first remember you can ask me any questions you like, secondly I would like for you to answer the following question: Can this technique be combined with another technique from another element, and which element and technique would that be? You may come with more than one example. (Add this to your next post)

Alright as for your explanation it is quite good though if you mention the dimensions and the motion of the compressed water wave, it will make it much easier to understand and a lot simpler for you seeing you will be capable of understanding exactly what is happening around you. The technique itself is not the strongest and usually small techniques are usually used for distractions and thus since this technique moves across the ground it is usually used so that it forces the opponent to either defend the technique or move left, right or up or down. Basically your forcing the opponent to do something which he does not wish for, and while they are in motion to do so you can combine the water with another technique or you can create another technique which is more of a stealthy strike thus the water wave is merely a diversion.

Seeing you have good understand we will move on.

Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water Shark Bomb

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark formed after the user does the Tiger → Ox → Dragon → Hare → Dog → Bird → Rat → Clone seal → Dragon → Ram handseals. The projectile is formed from the user and travels towards the opponent.
Note: No water source required

Now this technique requires a set of 11 hand seals if you are not a master user of the element, meaning that yes this technique is quite slow seeing it requires a lot of hand seals. Anyways after you have performed the hand seals you will gather a large amount of chakra around you which you will first convert into water which you will then manipulate into a shark which is a reasonable size and rushes towards the opponent in the manner you wish to strike them.

 

[Penguin]

Yes, this could be combined with the lightning jutsu Darui used to combine with his Water Encampment Wall against Sasuke Uchiha vs Raikage.

One question. Since I have a Tobirama bio, does it come with one hand seal, no water source required even if Suiton is not mastered?

Tobirama takes his stance, two feet on the ground, head held high, and starts gathering Suiton chakra. As he gathers chakra, he feels cool, calm, mellow, and flowing, due to the chakra he is gathering is Suiton chakra. When Tobirama feels like he has gathered enough Suiton chakra around him, he quits gathering the chakra. He starts using his chakra manipulation to turn the Suiton chakra into water. As Tobirama does this, he also starts using some shape manipulation to turn the water into a decent sized shark. After the shark is formed, it rushes towards a tree and smashes against it, destroying the shark but also damaging the tree.

For this technique, I would only use it after I master Suiton, unless my Tobirama biography comes with one hand seal no water source Suiton. If I could use it, I would make it travel at the opponents feet, making the opponent dodge by jumping, or using another jutsu which would block his line of sight. After that is blocked, I would use a Doton to attack him from beneath or a Fuuton to blow him away.

 

[Gutsy]

Yes, this could be combined with the lightning jutsu Darui used to combine with his Water Encampment Wall against Sasuke Uchiha vs Raikage.

One question. Since I have a Tobirama bio, does it come with one hand seal, no water source required even if Suiton is not mastered?

Tobirama takes his stance, two feet on the ground, head held high, and starts gathering Suiton chakra. As he gathers chakra, he feels cool, calm, mellow, and flowing, due to the chakra he is gathering is Suiton chakra. When Tobirama feels like he has gathered enough Suiton chakra around him, he quits gathering the chakra. He starts using his chakra manipulation to turn the Suiton chakra into water. As Tobirama does this, he also starts using some shape manipulation to turn the water into a decent sized shark. After the shark is formed, it rushes towards a tree and smashes against it, destroying the shark but also damaging the tree.

For this technique, I would only use it after I master Suiton, unless my Tobirama biography comes with one hand seal no water source Suiton. If I could use it, I would make it travel at the opponents feet, making the opponent dodge by jumping, or using another jutsu which would block his line of sight. After that is blocked, I would use a Doton to attack him from beneath or a Fuuton to blow him away.

Alright good work, and for your question, you must master your water training before that rule applies to your Tobirama bio.

Obviously you need quite some time to perform the technique you just learned, though it can be quite useful if you get it off, and your explanation was just fine and so were your usage of the technique and Im pleased with your performance so far, so if you have no questions or anything you wish to do then we shall simply continue to the next technique.

(Suiton: Seibun Hōfutsu) - Water Style: Water Heavens Convergence

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand signs Tiger → Dog → Monkey → Snake → Boar → Tiger the user makes water rise from the ground and they can use this water in various ways. They can create a body of water for a water summoning to be encased in and allow them to move around where normally no water exists, or create a body of water to block incoming attacks or surround his target and then drown them.

Now this technique also requires 6 hand seals, so of course it takes some time, though this technique you will make water rise from the ground. This water can be made from the ground anywhere on the field from your position and into mid-range from you. Thus this technique may be used in various ways, such as making a body of water to use for another technique, or to have a water summon within it, or even use it to trap your opponent in some interesting way. It is basically all up to your imagination what you can use this technique for, that is why I want you to perform this technique 3 times. The first time you will create a body of water anywhere you whish whereas you will then follow up by performing a technique which requires a water source. The second time you perform this you will also explain to me which animal summons that could be in it and what they can be useful for. The last performance, you will act as if you are against an opponent and you want to strike or trap him.

 

[Penguin]

I really don't get this technique. Is it just creating water sources? Possibly give me an example or two on how to use this?