Suiton (Hopefully this one won't get interuppted in the middle... -_-)

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503


*I sit, meditating on a rock near the edge of a large lake, calming my systems and feeling the current of the water through the movement of the wires in my hands attached to kunai I threw into the lake. As I feel the current, I slowly sway with it as I wait for my senpai.*
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198


*I sit, meditating on a rock near the edge of a large lake, calming my systems and feeling the current of the water through the movement of the wires in my hands attached to kunai I threw into the lake. As I feel the current, I slowly sway with it as I wait for my senpai.*

- I appear from behind a tree.-

Hi there!

In any case, first give me the strengths and weaknesses of your last jutsu performed. After doing so, give me a situation in which it's good to use in.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
- I appear from behind a tree.-

Hi there!

In any case, first give me the strengths and weaknesses of your last jutsu performed. After doing so, give me a situation in which it's good to use in.

Strength: After the justu is used, it turns into a river, leaving a watersource for another jutsu (B-rank and down?)

Weakness: Being that it's a B-rank jutsu, most C-rank and above defencive doton jutsu could easily defend against it.

Situation: When my opponent sends a clone out in front of them, this jutsu could be used to crash into the clone, and then a Raiton jutsu could be used in collaboration to electrocute my opponent through the resulting river.
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198
Strength: After the justu is used, it turns into a river, leaving a watersource for another jutsu (B-rank and down?)

Weakness: Being that it's a B-rank jutsu, most C-rank and above defencive doton jutsu could easily defend against it.

Situation: When my opponent sends a clone out in front of them, this jutsu could be used to crash into the clone, and then a Raiton jutsu could be used in collaboration to electrocute my opponent through the resulting river.

Good. Now simply perform it.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
Good. Now simply perform it.

*I weave the handseals, and hold the final handseal as I focus Suiton chakra into my mouth. The chakra absorbs the moisture in my mouth and multiplies it to create a large amount of water in my mouth. I then begin to spit the water from my mouth, using shape manipulation to create a giant water snake. As the water leaves my mouth, I continue to focus suiton chakra into my mouth to make the snake longer and larger. As the snake leaves my mouth, it flies towards my target (unspecified) and crashes onto it, it's mouth wide open to swallow the target whole. As the snake crashes into my target, he body of water falls to the earth, creating a river for later use.*
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198
*I weave the handseals, and hold the final handseal as I focus Suiton chakra into my mouth. The chakra absorbs the moisture in my mouth and multiplies it to create a large amount of water in my mouth. I then begin to spit the water from my mouth, using shape manipulation to create a giant water snake. As the water leaves my mouth, I continue to focus suiton chakra into my mouth to make the snake longer and larger. As the snake leaves my mouth, it flies towards my target (unspecified) and crashes onto it, it's mouth wide open to swallow the target whole. As the snake crashes into my target, he body of water falls to the earth, creating a river for later use.*

Great job. Now from this point forward, I want to see you use that template.

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.


I mean, this is pretty self-explainatory.

-I create two clones.-

I want you to trap the one on the right, at which point the one on the left will begin running towards you. While clone one is trapped, take out clone 2.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
Great job. Now from this point forward, I want to see you use that template.

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.


I mean, this is pretty self-explainatory.

-I create two clones.-

I want you to trap the one on the right, at which point the one on the left will begin running towards you. While clone one is trapped, take out clone 2.
So, to be clear, you want the strength/weakness/situation as I post my move? And does this one require a water source, or does the water just come out of the ground?

*I stand up as you make the clones, and then I weave handseals, focusing my suiton chakra into the ground beneath your clone to collect moisture out of the earth. My suiton gathers the moisture together to create a pool of water under the ground and your clone, which then burst upwards and surrounds your clone in a large sphere of water. As the water comes out of the ground, your clone then runs to attack me (like a cue). As your second clone comes towards me, I wait for it and move to my right (your clone's left) quickly as he gets close to me, pulling out a katana as I move to chop it horizontally in the stomach, dispelling the clone in a puff of smoke. As the smoke disappaits, a slight breeze brushes my clothing dramatically in my low stance held from chopping your clone.*
"I like cool-looking dramatic stuff..."

Strength: You can bind the target without the restriction Water Prison had of keeping ones hand in the bubble. A lightning style jutsu can also be used in collaboration to shock a target to death from all angles.

Weakness: Very few enemies will stand still long enough for the chakra to collect enough water to trap the enemy.

Situation: After hitting the target to a specific spot (a mark, if you will), or to the ground, this jutsu can then be used to bind them in the place for a follow-up attack (lightning to shock them, fire to create steam and burn them, wind to create a typhoon-like attack, earth to create mud to suffocate and further ensnare them).
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198
So, to be clear, you want the strength/weakness/situation as I post my move? And does this one require a water source, or does the water just come out of the ground?

*I stand up as you make the clones, and then I weave handseals, focusing my suiton chakra into the ground beneath your clone to collect moisture out of the earth. My suiton gathers the moisture together to create a pool of water under the ground and your clone, which then burst upwards and surrounds your clone in a large sphere of water. As the water comes out of the ground, your clone then runs to attack me (like a cue). As your second clone comes towards me, I wait for it and move to my right (your clone's left) quickly as he gets close to me, pulling out a katana as I move to chop it horizontally in the stomach, dispelling the clone in a puff of smoke. As the smoke disappaits, a slight breeze brushes my clothing dramatically in my low stance held from chopping your clone.*
"I like cool-looking dramatic stuff..."

Strength: You can bind the target without the restriction Water Prison had of keeping ones hand in the bubble. A lightning style jutsu can also be used in collaboration to shock a target to death from all angles.

Weakness: Very few enemies will stand still long enough for the chakra to collect enough water to trap the enemy.

Situation: After hitting the target to a specific spot (a mark, if you will), or to the ground, this jutsu can then be used to bind them in the place for a follow-up attack (lightning to shock them, fire to create steam and burn them, wind to create a typhoon-like attack, earth to create mud to suffocate and further ensnare them).

No, it doesn't require a water source, seeing as it explicitly states that you create a flow of gushing water under the opponent.

Great job!

(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

You must be registered for see images

I mean, I think this is pretty self-explainatory.

A jet of water is pretty straight-forward.

-I create 3 clones, who stand in a straight line.-

Take all three of them out.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
No, it doesn't require a water source, seeing as it explicitly states that you create a flow of gushing water under the opponent.

Great job!

(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

You must be registered for see images

I mean, I think this is pretty self-explainatory.

A jet of water is pretty straight-forward.

-I create 3 clones, who stand in a straight line.-

Take all three of them out.
*I weave the handseals, and focus suiton chakra into my mouth, gathering the moisture within to create a large base of water. Then, I leap into the air, and put my hand near my mouth (going by the picture). I exhale the water, creating a large pressure from my suiton chakra, in a stream that gets wider as it goes further from me, creating a horn-like shape pointed at me. (I'm not sure if the line is front to back, or left to right, so I'll go over situations for both.)
F-B: The water stream is aimed at the front-most clone, and I tilt my head upwards so the stream crashes down on the clones standing behind it, reducing them to smoke.
L-R: I aim the water stream at my left-most clone (from the clone's perspective, the right-most clone), and as the gushing stream of water crushes him, I sweep my head to the side, picking off the clones like the old carnaval duck-shooting game.*

Strength: It can be used with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique, or if being used without a bio that has lava, the stream of water could be used to push oneself upwards out of an attack.

Weakness: Because it's mid-range, the target will have time to react to the suiton technique accordingly.

Situation: As a barrage of projectiles are thrown my way, I could use this jutsu to propel myself upwards into the air, and then tilt my head up to send the stream towards my opponent from up high.
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198
*I weave the handseals, and focus suiton chakra into my mouth, gathering the moisture within to create a large base of water. Then, I leap into the air, and put my hand near my mouth (going by the picture). I exhale the water, creating a large pressure from my suiton chakra, in a stream that gets wider as it goes further from me, creating a horn-like shape pointed at me. (I'm not sure if the line is front to back, or left to right, so I'll go over situations for both.)
F-B: The water stream is aimed at the front-most clone, and I tilt my head upwards so the stream crashes down on the clones standing behind it, reducing them to smoke.
L-R: I aim the water stream at my left-most clone (from the clone's perspective, the right-most clone), and as the gushing stream of water crushes him, I sweep my head to the side, picking off the clones like the old carnaval duck-shooting game.*

Strength: It can be used with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique, or if being used without a bio that has lava, the stream of water could be used to push oneself upwards out of an attack.

Weakness: Because it's mid-range, the target will have time to react to the suiton technique accordingly.

Situation: As a barrage of projectiles are thrown my way, I could use this jutsu to propel myself upwards into the air, and then tilt my head up to send the stream towards my opponent from up high.

Great. : )

Anyway, to the next jutsu!

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

You must be registered for see images


Kay, what I want you to do, is focus suiton chakra into the air above the opponent. Then materialize the water in the air above him, and crush him.

Just so you can't use this as an advantage, if used by a clone with you shooting a lightning technique, or vice-versa, it's an amazing combo.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
Great. : )

Anyway, to the next jutsu!

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

You must be registered for see images


Kay, what I want you to do, is focus suiton chakra into the air above the opponent. Then materialize the water in the air above him, and crush him.

Just so you can't use this as an advantage, if used by a clone with you shooting a lightning technique, or vice-versa, it's an amazing combo.
*I weave the handseals and focus my suiton chakra into the air above my target. My suiton chakra collects moisture out of the air to materialize a source of water above the target (approximately 10 meters above), which then crashes down onto him.*

Advantage: This technique creates water out of nowhere, meaning a water source is not required (does it create a water source for later jutsu?)

Disadvantage: The water would take time to form, and would cast a shadow so my target would realize it's there.

Situation: As my opponent is creating a Chidori, or other Raiton jutsu, this jutsu could be used so their own jutsu electricutes them to death.
 

The Doctor

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Nov 9, 2010
Messages
12,954
Reaction score
198
*I weave the handseals and focus my suiton chakra into the air above my target. My suiton chakra collects moisture out of the air to materialize a source of water above the target (approximately 10 meters above), which then crashes down onto him.*

Advantage: This technique creates water out of nowhere, meaning a water source is not required (does it create a water source for later jutsu?)

Disadvantage: The water would take time to form, and would cast a shadow so my target would realize it's there.

Situation: As my opponent is creating a Chidori, or other Raiton jutsu, this jutsu could be used so their own jutsu electricutes them to death.

Think of a better advantage. This jutsu is one of the best water jutsus for supplementing other jutsus. Give me a masterpiece.
 

Sharingdork

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Apr 17, 2010
Messages
13,401
Reaction score
503
Think of a better advantage. This jutsu is one of the best water jutsus for supplementing other jutsus. Give me a masterpiece.

Well, this jutsu requires no water source, I assume the water can be used for another jutsu (until told otherwise), it can provide a great distraction, and it can be canceled at any time if need be. That's all I got. :shrug:
 
Top