Sucidal morality (poem of sadness)

izinagi54

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I've become blind by sadness, my own madness descending into chaos.
To have all that is lost and not won, one of the forgotten i have sought to become.
No one will be there to mourn a monster of a human being, feelings are kindling for the fire.

The shire has grown gloom, the death willows bloom.
Soon oh soon i longed to be there with you, in the grave next to your bones.
It was shown to be a mistake, mistaken and used like a tool.

To live a life fit for fools, all the gouls come to drool.
Oh some dare say life was cruel, they reap what they sowed.
the wind begins its death throws, the sun glow fades to night.

All light must die under luna's might, tonight i will make a final plight.
The heavens can not accept nor hell take me, no one will stand with me.
All shall have had stand against me, to lance me then help me.

A cruel fate the mistress of time made, to inslave all to a singular destiny.
All must eventually fade into the void of the fae, even in dismay.
today is my resting day, today i will see a new light or night.


- chris wheeler

based on a friend of mine....


i did write this!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Ldude

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I'm confused... did someone else write this or are you chris wheeler?
 

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This is such a pretty poem! Wonderful job! :)
 

SatchiZurake

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I'm not a fan of the subject matter, not my thing. But it's really well written, great job :)
 

0neCrazyAngel

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this is one of ur best chris! good job! :ice:
 

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your poems are as lovely as ever chris nice-work
 
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