[Approved] Suì-Fēng [隋豊]

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Name: Suì-Fēng | Nara
Nickname: 2nd Captain
Gender: Female
Age: 26
Clan: Nara
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Suì-Fēng is a relatively petite woman with gray eyes and black hair. Her hair is worn short with two long braids bound in white cloth, each ending in a large golden ring. Suì-Fēng's hair is shoulder-length and had a softer look to it. She wears a uniform with a sleeveless haori and a yellow obi tied around her waist. Underneath her standard uniform, Suì-Fēng wears the uniform of her old commander-in-chief, which has no sleeves and doesn't cover the back, though she does wear long black arm bands. Instead of wearing standard sandals with tabi, she wears traditional Chinese shoes with ordinary white socks.


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Suì-Fēng's standard uniform



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Suì-Fēng is staunchly loyal, firm, and unbending in her beliefs. She is a hard worker and takes a strong moral stance — she particularly believes in following orders. She is generally reserved and truly not arrogant in any manner like her lieutenant, though she is not above mocking/joking around with her opponents or smirking while in combat, a trait also seen in her predecessor. She will not hesitate in the slightest to strike down even her subordinates if they stand in her way.
Suì-Fēng likes fish, but dislikes meat. She also seems to be quite obsessed with Yoruichi [her old sensei], and often spends her free time dreaming about the days when they fought together.
Suì-Fēng is a person of incredible resolve, not hesitating to do whatever it takes to complete a mission and defeat her enemy. Very rarely will Suì-Fēng show signs of desperation or emotion on the battlefield, except when it concerns her former master. Despite her cold demeanor and constant attack towards her assistant, she has displayed a certain level of faith in him (trusting him to act as a distraction while she carries out a plan).

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Village of Birth: Konohagakure
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Village of Alliance: Sunagakure
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Ninja Rank: S-Class Ninja
Speciality: /
Elements:
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C Rank - In Training
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In Training
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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History:
Suì-Fēng was born in Konohagakure to a couple of average, but intelligent Nara's. However, even though she came from a very standard background, her ambition to become a ninja was great. Too much so that it came to her parents abandoning her when she wouldn't take on education at a top school and refused to go. Suì-Fēng was destined to go to ninja school and was accepted into the ninja academy at a very early age.

Becoming a top-grade student, she was the top ninja in the academy and was entered into the Chūnin exams just 6 months after being there. She passed it independently and went off to do missions as soon as she could. Eventually leaving Konoha for Suna. Her passion for being a shinobi was prevalent and the Kazekage recognised it quickly. He took her on as a personal student and trained her as best as he could... before she received a message saying that her parents had been killed. Even though she had abandoned her parents at an early age, Suì-Fēng's feelings for her parents were restored and she blamed herself for a few days. However, after she had calmed down, all Suì wanted was to get revenge. She wanted it so badly that she was going crazy. The Kazekage knew he needed to help her before she did something too extreme.

The only thing he could do, was to help her find her parents killers and notify her of their location.
After he had sought to help Suì-Fēng, she got the information that the Kazekage had given her and found her parents killers. There was seven of them and she single handedly killed them all with no mercy and no remorse.

Her feelings were set to piece after this and her feat was spread across the ninja villages. The Kazekage had also realised what she had achieved and promoted her to a commander of a squad of ANBU soldiers. From then on she would be known as the 2nd Captain.

When she was promoted to this status, she met a lot of other notorious names, all of them being captains of the Gotei 13, a group of 13 ninjas who all have an ANBU squad under their control.


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Battles:

Won: 0
Lost: 0​

~Approved~ edited stuff, your history had nothing to do whatsoever with the Nara clan
 
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Nice work man! There isn't any owner of this bio though right?
Edit: Your History has to be Naruto-related at all times.
 
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I don't know much about RP at all, but some guy told me your History has to be based in the Naruto universe, I think
 

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Nice bio but a few things;

- Your history msut be based on the Narutoverse
- You cannot have extreme speed, maybe only if you ever get leg weights or anything which gives you a standard large increase in speed
- In order to be a swordsman specialist you need to have Kenjutsu mastered

So basicly you should remove extreme speed and swordsman specialist from Other Information and convert your history so that it could make sense in the Narutoverse.
 

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Your birth needs to be updated as it states you were birn in two villages and not alligned with any.

This will look nice next to my yoruichi bio.
 

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Nice work man! There isn't any owner of this bio though right?
Edit: Your History has to be Naruto-related at all times.
I don't know much about RP at all, but some guy told me your History has to be based in the Naruto universe, I think
Nice bio but a few things;

- Your history msut be based on the Narutoverse
- You cannot have extreme speed, maybe only if you ever get leg weights or anything which gives you a standard large increase in speed
- In order to be a swordsman specialist you need to have Kenjutsu mastered

So basicly you should remove extreme speed and swordsman specialist from Other Information and convert your history so that it could make sense in the Narutoverse.
Alright, thank you ^_^
Your birth needs to be updated as it states you were birn in two villages and not alligned with any.

This will look nice next to my yoruichi bio.
UPDATED.
 

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You gotta add a random age lol, I'd say she'd look what.. 27? also, you got Konoha and Suna switched up under village info.
 

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You gotta add a random age lol, I'd say she'd look what.. 27? also, you got Konoha and Suna switched up under village info.
The thing is, she's 110+ >.> whatever, random age added xD
And no I haven't? :O
Nice bio :p I see her more fit as a Hyuga imo and maybe set her age as 24-27 at least xd
I would have her as a Hyuga but I've already got a Uchiha bio :/ Might make it an Inuzaki :p Thanks! :)
 

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The thing is, she's 110+ >.> whatever, random age added xD
And no I haven't? :O

I would have her as a Hyuga but I've already got a Uchiha bio :/ Might make it an Inuzaki :p Thanks! :)
Oh wait, I see what you did, but Village of Alliance is not supposed to be the ally of your village but the village you are in yourself xD
 
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