[CJ] Stuff with Venom

[Hell Autarch]

So as agreed, you can come for the other later

Here you go

(Raiton: Anzû no Asento) - Lightning Release: The Ascent of Anzû

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Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 to maintain after initial turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs a single hand seal, generating a stream of lightning that surrounds the users body. The stream of lightning is subsequently shaped into thousands of high-density bird-like creatures, resembling hummingbirds. These creatures are entirely composed of lightning, one inch in length, and possess an extended beak, which acts as 'stinger' for piercing purposes. These creatures, each possessing the capability to fly can be commanded by the user to attack the opponent using their beaks, though stings by these creatures cause only minor damage and numbness, the effect can be drastically increased when they attack and successfully sting the opponent in large numbers. The user can alternatively command these creatures to cover up his entire body, forming a layer over his body which can not only serve defensive purposes by utilizing the high density composition of these creatures, but can also be used offensively, in conjunction with Taijutsu, capitalizing on these creatures ability to sting upon the enemy upon contact. The manipulation of these creatures can be exploited to a high level, as they can be commanded to establish pincer formations, being used as a platform to 'fly', or a defensive wall; this being entirely dependent upon the user.
Note: Commanding these creatures counts as one of the three jutsus per turn, regardless of the extent of their manipulation in a single turn.
Note: A quarter of these creatures (B Rank) are enough to completely cover up the body of the user or the opponent.
Note: These creatures collectively add up to a single S Rank. Therefore, a quarter of these creatures would be equal to B Rank, and half of these creatures would be equal to A Rank.
Note: These creatures can only disperse if they're destroyed, the user deactivates the technique or if the user performs a technique from another element. Manipulation of these creatures for offensive or supplementary purposes does not make them get used up.
Note: The user cannot use any technique from any element other than Lightning, as long as this technique is active. Doing so would result in these creatures dispersing. The only case or scenario where this is not applicable is when the user has mastered Yin and Yang.
Note: The user cannot use Lightning A rank and above the turn after deactivating the technique
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

 

[Venom]

You know this technique is pretty cool and good for me since sometime I use no other element but Lightning lol. So I could keep this active forever as long as its not destroyed or as long as I don't use earth, wind, fire and water correct?

Could I use things like sound and keep this active? Sound is Lightning + wind but yeah....

 

[Hell Autarch]

You know this technique is pretty cool and good for me since sometime I use no other element but Lightning lol. So I could keep this active forever as long as its not destroyed or as long as I don't use earth, wind, fire and water correct?

Could I use things like sound and keep this active? Sound is Lightning + wind but yeah....

I assume that since Sound is considered as an element, it may not work though I'll try to update to allow KG which are somewhat created using Raiton.

And yeah, you can keep it active all the time. think of it as Gaaras sand except that enemy contact with it = getting numb and paralyzed. Alternatively, they rip through the opponents body as well

 

[Venom]

Got ya.

Spoiler

Raiton: Taiyou Senshu] – Lightning Release: Auriel's Shot
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus their raiton chakra into one or both of their open palms before channeling raiton chakra to create and shoot up to four rods consecutively at the slightest whim. After being fired, each individual rods can be split into ten smaller rods, totaling a daunting rain of miniature rods. Shortly after colliding with something, each rods will "explode" into a maelstrom of bright light and unfocused electricity (similar to that of Chidori Nagashi), not doing this immediately but with a few seconds delay. This allows the technique to negate the doton chakra within earthen structures from a distance as the rods will first dig its head into the target technique, before discharging into the section of earth (or any conductable contructs or materials weak to lightning) and neutralizing the chakra within it. The intensity of the light produced in this technique is equivalent to that of a flash bomb and the burst unfocused electricity of a single rods has a five meter radial reach. However, much like Nagashi if the rods is in contact with an object/person at the time it "erupts", the unfocused burst will be capable of traveling a much farther distance (mid-range reach) inside of the medium. If the user so chooses, he can detonate any amount of the fired rods prematurely to gain a tactical advantage (blinding the opponent). Alternatively, the user can fire the rods with a thin and barely visible thread of lightning attached to the end of the shot projectiles, in order to manipulate their flight path/trajectory mid-air and allow for more unexpected offensives. Naturally, this technique can be used to negate chakras other than doton e.g. Crystal, Wood, Steel, Bones and etc, as long as they possess a weakness to Lightning or can conduct it. Anyone or anything caught within an unfocused burst of electricity will suffer from slight numbness and sluggish movements for two turns. They travel at the speed of an regular fired arrow following the user's tracking speed and appear just like a normal fired arrow, except that the rods are a bit bigger than a regular size arrow" Each spear are of the size of a chakra rod that nagato/pein uses.

Notes:
Can only be used three times per battle
Can only be Taught by Venom
Follows Elemental Strengths and Weaknesses
Power of the technique is equally divided between the number of rods created

Questions? Concerns? Anything?

 

[Hell Autarch]

If I use this technique against my enemy, he's only short range from me and it hits him; would I be in danger of getting hit in the 'unfocused lightning' as well?

Basically I am wondering if the unfocused lightning can inflict harm upon the user.

Also, are the 4 initial rods each A Rank individually?

 

[Venom]

Just the lightning itself cant affect you. But maybe if normal water is around like under your feet it could I guess. Never really thought about it lol but lets just go with no your own technique wont shock you. Especially if you're a lightning specialist.

No, the rods split in power. Just like with your technique

 

[Hell Autarch]

Just the lightning itself cant affect you. But maybe if normal water is around like under your feet it could I guess. Never really thought about it lol but lets just go with no your own technique wont shock you. Especially if you're a lightning specialist.

No, the rods split in power. Just like with your technique

Updated

1. (Raiton: Anzû no Asento) - Lightning Release: The Ascent of Anzû

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(4/6)

Spoiler

Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 to maintain after initial turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs a single hand seal, generating a stream of lightning that surrounds the users body. The stream of lightning is subsequently shaped into thousands of high-density bird-like creatures, resembling hummingbirds. These creatures are entirely composed of lightning, one inch in length, and possess an extended beak, which acts as 'stinger' for piercing purposes. These creatures, each possessing the capability to fly can be commanded by the user to attack the opponent using their beaks, though stings by these creatures cause only minor damage and numbness, the effect can be drastically increased when they attack and successfully sting the opponent in large numbers. The user can alternatively command these creatures to cover up his entire body, forming a layer over his body which can not only serve defensive purposes by utilizing the high density composition of these creatures, but can also be used offensively, in conjunction with Taijutsu, capitalizing on these creatures ability to sting upon the enemy upon contact. The manipulation of these creatures can be exploited to a high level, as they can be commanded to establish pincer formations, being used as a platform to 'fly', or a defensive wall; this being entirely dependent upon the user. These creatures can only disperse if they're destroyed, the user deactivates the technique or if the user performs a technique from another element. Manipulation of these creatures for offensive or supplementary purposes does not make them get used up. The user cannot use any technique from the Basic Five, except for Lightning for as long as this technique is active. Doing so would result in these creatures dispersing. The only case or scenario where this is not applicable is when the user has mastered Yin and Yang. However, the user is free to utilize any Elemental Kekkei Genkai they possess, as long as one of the two elements that compose that given KG is Lightning.
Note: Commanding these creatures counts as one of the three jutsus per turn, regardless of the extent of their manipulation in a single turn.
Note: A quarter of these creatures (B Rank) are enough to completely cover up the body of the user or the opponent.
Note: The user cannot use Lightning S rank and above the turn after deactivating the technique
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

 

[Hell Autarch]

Just the lightning itself cant affect you. But maybe if normal water is around like under your feet it could I guess. Never really thought about it lol but lets just go with no your own technique wont shock you. Especially if you're a lightning specialist.

No, the rods split in power. Just like with your technique

Updated

1. (Raiton: Anzû no Asento) - Lightning Release: The Ascent of Anzû

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(4/6)

Spoiler

Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 to maintain after initial turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs a single hand seal, generating a stream of lightning that surrounds the users body. The stream of lightning is subsequently shaped into thousands of high-density bird-like creatures, resembling hummingbirds. These creatures are entirely composed of lightning, one inch in length, and possess an extended beak, which acts as 'stinger' for piercing purposes. These creatures, each possessing the capability to fly can be commanded by the user to attack the opponent using their beaks, though stings by these creatures cause only minor damage and numbness, the effect can be drastically increased when they attack and successfully sting the opponent in large numbers. The user can alternatively command these creatures to cover up his entire body, forming a layer over his body which can not only serve defensive purposes by utilizing the high density composition of these creatures, but can also be used offensively, in conjunction with Taijutsu, capitalizing on these creatures ability to sting upon the enemy upon contact. The manipulation of these creatures can be exploited to a high level, as they can be commanded to establish pincer formations, being used as a platform to 'fly', or a defensive wall; this being entirely dependent upon the user. These creatures can only disperse if they're destroyed, the user deactivates the technique or if the user performs a technique from another element. Manipulation of these creatures for offensive or supplementary purposes does not make them get used up. The user cannot use any technique from the Basic Five, except for Lightning for as long as this technique is active. Doing so would result in these creatures dispersing. The only case or scenario where this is not applicable is when the user has mastered Yin and Yang. However, the user is free to utilize any Elemental Kekkei Genkai they possess, as long as one of the two elements that compose that given KG is Lightning.
Note: Commanding these creatures counts as one of the three jutsus per turn, regardless of the extent of their manipulation in a single turn.
Note: A quarter of these creatures (B Rank) are enough to completely cover up the body of the user or the opponent.
Note: The user cannot use Lightning S rank and above the turn after deactivating the technique
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

 

[Venom]

Wait what changed?

 

[Hell Autarch]

Wait what changed?

You can use anything outside Basic 5 excluding Elemental KGs. As far as Elemental KGs are concerned, you can only use stuff partially comprised of Lightning like Storm or Dark.

Also, when deactivated, you can't use S and above Lightning in next turn. Previously it was A and above

 

[Venom]

Ohhhh you got the idea to update it when i mention the sound thing? Lool sweeet. Sound isnt a KG though but its still a nice update u_u

 

[Hell Autarch]

Ohhhh you got the idea to update it when i mention the sound thing? Lool sweeet. Sound isnt a KG though but its still a nice update u_u

I know, Sound isn't xd

But yeah I got the idea from you